Transmigrating into the Extraordinary

As of now, the character has no IQ. It is suitable for those who have never read books. It should be very friendly and have a stronger sense of involvement.

The early writing was pretty good. Later on, the protagonist took the initiative to weaken himself and said that frequent use of skills would damage his lifespan. It was so disgusting.

The writing is quite good, but I don't agree with the five shortcomings and three shortcomings at all. After all, I am so awesome, why should my life be so miserable?

After reading it, it is about being reborn into a gangster and then being exposed to heretical magic. If the world view of the book remains unchanged, all the magic is heretical, and none of it is an orthodox practice method. Not popular

After reading the latest chapter, I have to say a few words. The previous chapters were well written. Although there are some minor flaws, they are normal and the flaws cannot be concealed. However, after the protagonist arrives in Xiangjiang, the flavor of the novel changes. He picks up girls, goes undercover, becomes a policeman, and buys a record company. Is the next step to copy songs? If it weren't for the protagonist occasionally using tricks a few times, I would have thought I was watching the novel "Rebirth of Hong Kong". The protagonist used to fish and hunt game to make money slowly, partly for his mother, and partly because he was not strong enough. But now that the protagonist is swimming in the sea, he still takes his time and makes money and power by himself. It has occupied so many chapters. I really can't understand it. If it is an ordinary person doing this, there is no problem, but is the protagonist an ordinary person? For people like the protagonist who cannot show up for the time being, in fact, the best choice is to use their own abilities to annex a force, such as a gang or a company, and become a behind-the-scenes boss while slowly improving their own strength. Money is not important, and power is not important. The protagonist's own strength is the most important. With strength, are you afraid of not having money and power? Take Liu Tai of Titan Pharmaceuticals as an example. In terms of money and power, none of the 100 protagonists can match him. But in terms of strength, Liu Tai is just a fly that can be easily crushed in front of the protagonist. Therefore, there is no need to go step by step in chapters such as the protagonist's pursuit of money and power. You have to jump when you need to. You don't need to write more, just write it in one go. The main content should be extraordinary content, not making money or gaining power.

Everything has two sides, there is no perfect thing, only if there are five disadvantages and three shortcomings, the price will be good. Only in this way can the importance of choice be reflected, and it will be a good story. The most annoying thing is those novels about immunity to price. How can the protagonist get something without paying? That kind of novel is purely insane.

I can still read what I wrote so-so-huhu, but when I saw Zeng Tiantian accepted, I really couldn't bear it, it was so poisonous. It's so disgusting that I can't help but come here to complain. The character of the stepfather's daughter was made so unpleasant that she turned around and fell asleep. Couldn't I have written your character a little better before I wanted to sleep with you? Also, the dialogue every time I pretend to be X is really low. Do you know what I am? It's so embarrassing that I feel like I have cancer. Farewell

He has extraordinary powers, runs away to Hong Kong Island, and copies songs to start a company. This plot is extremely poisonous! !

The protagonist is too vindictive. It was his fault to kill other people's chickens. Although others did not know the truth, they did not wrong the protagonist. Just because they asked him to pay 50 yuan, he killed half of the other people's chickens. From this point of view, we can see what kind of character the protagonist has in the middle and later stages. He is definitely a lawless master.

You could say that the protagonist is poor. His home has a TV and a bicycle. You could say that he is rich. When he asks for help, he gives someone a 6 cent red envelope. You call him smart... I don't see how smart he is. After traveling for a month, he said that the times are bad, he is facing a wave of layoffs, and he can't do anything big, so he can only go fishing in the river to make a living. He encountered a ghost while fishing by the river at night, and spent 60 cents to solve it. He still dared to go fishing at night. I really don't know if he is too poor to die, or stupid to die. His fishing gear is too poorly made, and he still dares to go down to the river to catch the ghosts in the river. He doesn't take the ghosts in the river seriously at all.