Beating Back to Fight

Since the time span of this book is too long, I can only select some that impressed me deeply. First of all, there are several advantages, character creation, evaluation is excellent, and several original characters. All Night on the Mountain, Lovsky, and the mathematician (forgot the specific name), used realistic prototypes (Lovsky may not be), which can give people an intuitive impression of this character from the beginning. The subsequent settings, plots, jokes, etc. Did not violate this impression, but instead deepened this impression and made it remembered. I think it is a great success if a character can be remembered. Then about the characters in the original work, they are generally excellent. The changes in the plot lines of Xia Youjie, Haibara and Inumaki are excellent, but I think Gojo Satoru should be a little stronger, because the original work itself is the ceiling of combat power. In this book, his combat power has been suppressed by the protagonist. According to Gojo Satoru's own genius setting, logically Gojo should be stronger in the final battle of the book than the original work. This is not reflected here, and the original crazy character is not reflected in this book. Let's talk about the protagonist. To be honest, when I watched it, I felt that the protagonist had a pointy head. In other words, the protagonist fits that comedy style quite well. I quite like it, but I'm not very impressed with what I did. What impressed me most was the Baishi Guanyin field and the black flash automatic anti-reflection. I thought it was very powerful at the time and almost invincible. However, it didn't appear much later, which was a pity. The summary is that the original character creation is perfect, the original character creation is excellent, and the protagonist is relatively flat. In terms of plot, it seems to me that it is not easy to complete the plot of the spell return battle. Basically, it only describes what the villain is doing. From the perspective of fan fiction creation, it is very difficult to write a spell-returning fan fiction. Because at the beginning, the protagonist group was strong and the villains were weak, and when the fan protagonist joined again, the protagonist group became stronger. The death return journey was already quite reluctant, and it was even harder to release Su Nuo. This leads to the fact that even if the plot of the fanfic changes a little bit, all the original plots of the subsequent spell return battle will lack reference significance and need to be original. That's why I have a high tolerance for fan fiction here. Even if the writing is a bit explosive, I just need to be able to get past it. Some of the original plots in this book are quite good. Although the plot of Prison Gate in the later period is a bit watery, the adaptation is logically acceptable (because the original work really has nothing to write about, because the death and destruction can't escape.) Generally speaking, the early plot is compact and excellent, but the later plot is watery and can only be passed. Writing Friends who like Sanzha, please note that this book is very consistent with Sanzha's storytelling style. The characters' speeches are not shocking, and the setting's eloquent speeches are not abrupt. Summary, excellent Disadvantages, Interrupted updates, the time span is too big, it feels like I have watched it for five years This makes the Hell Gate part that feels smelly and long becomes even smellier and longer. I think this aspect perfectly inherits the characteristics of the official curse. The final battle is also long and smelly. The summary is food and grass. Although the experience of chasing books is poor, fortunately it is over. So it's actually okay if you watch it.

I haven't read it yet, and I feel that there is nothing wrong with the question. The magic power of any spell is weak. Punching to the flesh is the real thing. If you can't beat it, it will immediately become 2.5.

The protagonist is a one-armed disabled person. The plot of this book is the same as that of the comic. Riko Tenuchi is dead.

The twists in the plot are too blunt. Whether the protagonist is rescued or someone suddenly comes over, and in the ice and snow, you should not find shelter first, and then find a populated place. What the hell is walking in the snow for two hours, until the old man is killed, the protagonist's emotions have not fluctuated at all. Earlier, it was written that the protagonist every day They are all living a pious life, so why not say a few more words about the death of their loved ones, just oh, they died, were buried, and then left... Suddenly I read a book and knew the world I was in, but it has been five years since I saw this book... I only read a few chapters and that's all. Will the author stop reading it after he finishes writing?

It turns out that there are many divers. When I look at the votes, there are not many people in total. I thought that the collections pushed are all robots🤖 Comments are added, but the maximum is two chapters a day, so I can't write too many I have written down the comments of each new brother, and after they are accumulated, I will resume one chapter a day until they are added ✧ෆ◞◟˃̶̤⌄˂̶̤⋆biubiu

Pause pause, activity pause brothers. It turns out that the writers' assistants are all lying. It is said that the robots that interact with newcomers in reading books are all robots, and the collection and recommendation votes are automatically generated by robots. According to what was said in it, I estimated that less than ten people would actually read the book. As a result, everyone immediately arranged for me to read the book until next month. I will take a break from now on. I have written down all the comments I made before in my notebook. I will update them twice a day. I will finish them later. By the way, my collection has increased by 200 in two days. Could someone secretly add it to me?

If you only read the first part, you will feel that it is a pity that such a good story will be thrown off the market. Only after reading the back can you understand that it is natural for this book to be thrown off the street. The ambition set in the front is like farting when you look at the later part.

Why are you trying so hard to cut off a pig's feet? Originally, the magic power was at the first level, but now you can't use weapons, can't use reversal spells, and your arm is broken, and the arm can't be restored. Do you want to be a one-armed hero? The martial arts practitioner is missing an arm, and his strength is reduced by at least half.

You are so brave to write that the main character is disabled, and you have dozens of pictures of him with disabilities I remember when I was chasing the cockroaches of the apocalypse, I was so excited that I just gave up the book by writing that the main character was disabled😥😥😥You can't get along with yourself.

Author, your plot description is very stiff. It feels like it's Coke but it tastes like boiled water in your mouth. Something is missing🤔, it's stiff and dry.

This is the best book written by a Spell Return fanfic that I have read so far.

The part where the protagonist is grateful for his ten years of fighting is quite touching. Although there is a template for Nitro's enlightenment in the original Nitro, the other Nitro fandoms I've seen where the protagonist learns from Nitro don't have that feeling.

Why did reading your book make me feel like I was reading a novel written by a one-eyed cat? The plot is so abstract, the characters are written in a comic-like way, the atmosphere is good, and the overall work is still a qualified magic fan. It's just that the setting reference of the original work is a bit loose. Don't follow the example of the one-eyed cat and write whatever comes to mind. If the circle is not restored, it will collapse in the later stage! The plot is fragmented and there is no clear main line. This is a big problem! The character interaction is very well written and is a highlight. I feel that you, the author, are very suitable for writing daily novels. It is a waste of your talent to write this, but it can also be a shortcoming. In this type of novel, too much daily life affects the sense of reading. It is good to intersperse it between events as a buffer connection. The character interaction must distinguish the occasions.

Keep it for a while first, updates are too slow

Repeatedly jumping between entering and exiting the palace

Is it unlimited streaming? Give me a sec.

Because no one reads it, every new book friend's comment will be added to the chapter. Thank you for your support.

The title of the book was quite good and made me pass by it several times.

I think the author can give more roles to some of the marginal characters in the original work, like the head of the Kusakabe Zen Temple family.

If you want to be a real eunuch, then stop updating. If you have a saved manuscript, send it out together. Otherwise, update on time. Who dares to read it now 🙂

This book is such a pity When the book was opened, it coincided with the period when Ju Hui Ting was very popular. Everyone was complaining about why they were all about boxing, so Ju Shu Hui Zhan was born out of nowhere. The plot of this book is quite good and there are no major flaws. Anyway, I like it quite a lot. I stayed up late one night to grab the first update. At that time, it seemed that I had only written about a month and there were more than 100 discussion posts. In less than two months, the author has not updated daily but has updated from time to time. It is already a good start. However, something started to go wrong after it was put on the shelves. The interruption time became longer and the frequency of interruptions became higher. From several updates a week to weekly or even monthly updates, the appeal of this book was really reduced. Look at all the new books from Qidian. If this book can be updated continuously, I think the results will be quite good, but it is a pity 😐

In the manga setting, Ichichi Takayoshi is a junior two years younger than Gojo Satoru, which means that when Satoru was born in 1989 and entered a high school under the age of sixteen, Ichichi was about fourteen years old. This article assumes that Gao Jie has been the assistant supervisor of the protagonist since more than two years ago in the 2005 competition. In other words, Ichichi began to assist supervision when he was less than twelve years old. Although it is unscrupulous in the magic world to employ child labor and overwork magicians to exploit them, it is not outrageous to the extent of exploiting elementary school students.

Aren't you going to open a new book? I think it's pretty good.

Even? Updated? Ah? I thought it had been washed away. Is anyone really watching this?