Lord: I Can Transform Warcraft

The good sword in the knight's hand costs 300 silver, the legendary steel you gave is 1 gold, and backhand, you give the blacksmith in your territory 2 gold to make a sword? ?

I can only say that the subject matter is good, but the writing, plot design, and character descriptions are still a bit immature. You can tell that you are a complete novice. You can still watch it if you ignore some of them.

I think making gunpowder is a bit taken for granted. In a supernatural world, gunpowder is a cross-class thing, and ordinary people can use it to deal with extraordinary people. This should be subversive for an extraordinary world that is not sufficiently civilized. One step ahead is a genius, a hundred steps ahead is a madman. Using gunpowder on a small scale has no effect at all, but using gunpowder on a large scale cannot control the news. If it is an explosive potion or explosive potion that conforms to the cognition of the indigenous people, even if the effect is quite high and the cost is high, the impact will not be as great as that of gunpowder. Such a subversive creation should not have appeared so early.

The western fantasy world uses kilograms as the unit of measurement. Isn't it too abstract?

When I saw the word "task", I didn't want to read it anymore.

As a lord, you must be fair. Rewards can only be given if subordinates make contributions. Giving valuables to people for no reason has no effect at all.

Why does a farming novel have so many conflicts?

The slave can despise the lord, but the fighting spirit cannot be restored. Use a little less, perfect logic.

I read a few chapters and it was well written, but it felt like I was in a game world. The system awakens and then starts releasing novice tasks: transforming World of Warcraft, building weapons for subordinates, rewarding attributes, new iron ore clues I personally don't like to use system tasks to advance the plot, after all, one is passive and the other is active. If you want to improve your attributes, you can set up a special energy feedback to the protagonist after transforming the World of Warcraft.

What the hell is a defensive attribute? Is it impossible to defeat flesh and blood from the beginning?

It's a bit like the big dragon I've seen before.

I feel like there could be fewer servants and lady guards, and the story about the noble young master looking down on the noble lord.

Your grudge setting is a bit difficult to break. Why didn't you set another energy value to transform the World of Warcraft?

A glance at a thimble indicates good. The subject matter is good and the plot is okay. But the problem is similar to what was said in the comment area. The protagonist is completely pushed away... Add some other questions. 1. The characters themselves lack a sense of three-dimensionality 2. There is a lack of sufficiently novel subject-specific products (since you want to write about this subject, why not search for things like Chinese Zoology? If you can't do it, just go to some popular science bloggers to make some fun... The current writing really lacks distinctiveness, and is the most common and unique. For special ones, refer to the dragon louse to directly build a shallow water overlord/cum-gathering master, or refer to the sun spider to build a high-speed killing machine/cum-excavator... If you want something special, use nematodes, parasitic species can not only arouse people's fear, but also make people feel happy - such as controlling disobedient ones, evil fall. JPG) The current writing is too ordinary.

How do I put it? The tasks add strength out of thin air, and the attributes have no sense of existence. The writing is still almost meaningless.

Can I add more essence?

Little poison keeps coming

Hope you don't get hot weapons. I still like to watch the era of ice cream.

How can I say that all militiamen use swords? With his current strength, bows and guns should be common.

If you want to fight against the West, you should learn from Mongolia.

This historical text of the late Ming Dynasty, "Xi Ming Li Huo", writes about Sichuan's resistance to the Qing Dynasty in the Southern Ming Dynasty. The writing is good, the plot logic is online, it does not reduce intelligence, and the details are real. There are no common time-travel routines, and the cheats are not big, but the details of the war are very solid, especially the war planning, army organization and equipment, battle plot, command, formation, and marching details are very real. The plot is roughly divided into two lines, one is to resist the Qing Dynasty, and the other is to deal with various warlords in Nanming and Sichuan. Currently, there are two female protagonists interspersed with the main line. In addition to the plot of war and strategy, there is also a harem. Finally, I wish Guibao Di a great success!

Are giant dragons transformed by humans? I'd rather he were wild...

After reading ten chapters, I found that the protagonist is a good person, whom I admire and feel ashamed of.

Every dwarf family has a book of hatred. Records of enemies from generation to generation and deeds of hatred. The new leader of the dwarves opened the Book of Great Hatred belonging to the High King, but was surprised to find that the unfinished entries above were filled with a person's name: "In the 588th year of the dwarf calendar, Someone asked: Why did other races resist large charges? A spear or a halberd is enough, and a dwarf can hold a shield? I said: This is a symbol of strength! A guy holding a warhammer slandered: Everyone on the other side was tripped. " ----Snorri Whitebeard, the first supreme king, note: This is too much of an insult to me, and this is a life-and-death feud! "In the year 2526 of the Dwarf calendar, Someone asked: Why are dwarf helmets so thick and strong? I said: Dwarf blacksmiths are highly skilled, and the thick iron helmets can withstand all ferocious attacks of the enemy. A certain hammer man: Too short, afraid of being hit in the head by a knife." ----The second generation of the High King Gotrek Starbreaker, note: I have insulted me too much, and this hatred is irreconcilable! "In the 3273rd year of the Dwarven calendar, Someone asked: Why are light rangers and bare-chested butchers not much faster than heavily armored dwarves? I said: All dwarves are muscular men, and armor cannot be a burden to us. A certain hammer man: short legs, with an upper limit." ----Three generations of High King Mograem Blackbeard, note: If I am too harsh, this hatred is irreconcilable! "In the year 3576 of the Dwarven calendar, Someone asked: Why do most dwarf helmets have spikes and sharp corners? I laughed and said: If necessary, you can use a head hammer to attack. A certain hammer man: If the spikes pierce your feet, the enemy will not step on your head to cut off the back row." ----The fourth generation of the High King Sgrim Mogrimson, note: The insult to me is too great, this hatred is irreconcilable! In 4143, the fifth-generation high king Logan Ironbeard... In 4508, the sixth-generation high king Korgan Ironbeard... In 5208, the seventh-generation high king Finn Thorkel... In 6235, the eighth-generation Supreme King Kendrak Grickson In 6728, the ninth-generation Supreme King Orrick... In 6825, the tenth-generation Supreme King Orrickson... Densely written: This hatred is irreconcilable! "Who is this guy with the warhammer? Why is he everywhere?" He was a little confused. "Why didn't the dwarves capture any replacements after the war?" A voice suddenly sounded from behind. "Because dwarves have no mercy towards their enemies, they can only kill them all!" He said proudly. "Shouldn't it be that my legs are short and I can't catch up?" Hearing this voice, he suddenly looked back and saw a guy holding a warhammer thinking leisurely. So, he angrily opened a new page and continued to write: The dwarves will be great again! Also, a guy with a warhammer insulted our clan, and we have a life-and-death hatred! ---High King Thorgrim. The Resentful One.

The author is still persisting. I was at the same time as you and ran away after eating all the food.

There has always been a feeling that the protagonist of Western Genryu is not an earth traveler, and there is no element of earth traveler, such as the imagination of the novels I have read. When it comes to fighting spirit, shouldn't the most famous one think of the fighting spirit training method of Fighting to Break the Sky? Why doesn't one of the protagonists try to recreate it? Just recruit some subordinates and let them try to practice. If they succeed, use them. If they fail, just continue with the original way of practice. But why don't you even mention it?