Become a Taoist Lord from Ling Nong Gan

I can't hold on any longer, the supporting characters are so imbecile, I feel like they're just kids

There are no techniques for practicing Qi? Why doesn't the panel show up?

Go away, go away, the little demon in the temple is very windy, it's not about whether the dog will die or not.

We are enemies everywhere, we are bullied every day...

A rubbish reason, fearing that the monster will regain its strength to save an enemy who wants to kill him, 666, street boy!

May I ask the author what do you want to write? It's okay to just start writing about farming. But what the hell do you want to write about so many hardships? This is still the second level of Qi training. You will have to endure hardships one level after another. One place and one death? I can't read your book at all.

After dozens of chapters, the protagonist's cultivation level has still not improved. After swallowing a third-level spiritual grass, he can't even reach the third level of Qi training... No matter how good the skill is, it will be in vain if it has no realm.

The evolution of alchemy enhances the efficacy of talismans? ? ?

The author has some snacks. This spring breeze transforming into rain technique has already been mentioned in the previous article. What needs to be improved is the harvest harvest technique. Not only here, but also in the following you wrote according to the Spring Breeze and Rain Technique.

In the third chapter, I was persuaded to quit. A spiritual grass that can be used to build a foundation will only take fifteen years to practice qi. Or is it just a spiritual grass that can be used to build a family? The Golden Pill Yuanying sect doesn't plant it on a large scale? Are low-level cultivators still short of resources?

A talisman painter also helps people farm? Twenty talismans cost dozens of spiritual stones. How many spiritual stones and brains will it cost after paying the rent for one acre of land? Even if he was crippled casually, someone would blow him up with a magic talisman.

I also fell in love with this book, so let me comment and summarize it for the author: 1. The writing style needs to be improved, at least the current writing style still has a lot of shortcomings. 2. Regarding the plug-in settings, be sure to study the plug-ins thoroughly before opening the book. Don't write blindly. Your plug-in is a bit too big for this type of article. The liver skill is a bit nonsense about the elixir for ripening. Can other people's livers be consummated like this? 3. Articles similar to farming proficiency generally have two story backgrounds: 1. If you write a disorderly background, you must be careful about the opening of the market, and don't have too many scenes of pretending to be slapped in the face, pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, or getting more and more to kill the enemy; now there is a shortage of this kind of book: a story about being stubborn, making money alone behind your back and watching others fight to death; it is not necessary for the protagonist to fight life and death! 2. Farming in an orderly manner, this kind of writing is about cultivating immortality leisurely and less calculating...

It is recommended to give some development time. Don't defeat a big monster and then have a bigger monster come right away.

How about summarizing it and starting a new book?