Let You Refine Gu and Use Cockroaches for Environmental Management?

The subject matter is good, but the last few chapters have become more and more rubbish. I can't understand what you are writing about. You are writing here and there. There is no focus and it is all water. Bye👋🏻

Good idea. I have also thought about how to play real-life Gu cultivation, but what I play is a parasite. It controls the human body and wild animals by parasitic brain, compressing nerves and promoting hormone secretion (the prototype is iron worm controlling a mantis to commit suicide by jumping into the water). I also thought about using three lice Gu (head lice, body lice and pubic lice). ) The evil methods that make people uneasy, and the infection of corpses including bacteria and fungi. The four pests only thought of rats to collect information, mosquitoes to inject poisonous blood, cockroaches and flies. I really didn't think of it, especially the high-end product of rehabilitation fluid. I forgot about it.

Preface: I got poisoned and died around chapter 30, but I still managed to scan the rest of the content. At the time of writing this post, it was updated to chapter 66. I really can't stand this kind of white text. Please see the detailed analysis below. Evaluation: A novice, no brainer to read Grade: Grain and Grass (lower to medium) Advantages: Good topic selection and imagination, good writing style. Later, some supplements were made to the protagonist's golden finger, making Gu magic the protagonist's unique advantage, which can be regarded as a comeback. Disadvantages: The characters are not three-dimensional, the intelligence is severely reduced, and the plot development is relatively blunt. Especially the plot where the protagonist almost exposes his golden finger is really unacceptable. Secondly, the character design of Zhao Rubing is no longer suitable for the current novel, beauty + high-ranking official, dreaming back to ten years ago. What was originally a good subject matter was turned into an urban pretentiousness. Summary: This is an average-quality novel that you can read without thinking, if you can survive the first thirty chapters. The subsequent plot is not bad, but it still falls into the cliché of urban pretentious writing. But judging from the introduction and the chapters that have been written so far, it seems that what the author wants to write is not a traditional urban pretentious article, but the idea of ​​starting a company and then farming and developing. Conclusion: I hope the author can write what he wants to write well, and it is best to re-revise the previous chapters. Especially the sanitary inspection and the plot where the protagonist reveals that he can control cockroaches. The plot and characters are too blunt and off-putting.

The sanitation of the entire city's catering industry is covered, and then new self-media is used to attract tourists from surrounding cities. At the same time, the tourism bureau's relationship is used to establish a catering guild to squeeze out latecomers and collect membership fees. Only by revitalizing the city's tourism industry can the remaining food waste be collected. Guild management can be abandoned, and this can be used as a basis to monopolize the city's and even the province's food waste. The garbage disposal market is the king. Developing cockroach by-products can attract investors to join. After all, it is hard enough to spend time cultivating cockroaches and managing the company. Keeping Lao Zhang is for government relations. He cannot be allowed to manage the company and just give him shares that can be cashed out. He is not afraid of losing the controlling stake. The breeding technology patent and the establishment of a company will be 100% controlled.

Is the author from the Miao ethnic group? I belong to the Miao ethnic group. Miao people are all over the world, but they are mainly active in the southwest. There are different branches within the Miao ethnic group, ranging from villages and towns to counties and cities. The folk culture is generally the same. Among them, the power system of the mysterious profession is roughly divided into three types: witchcraft, medicine, and Gu. Of course, the boundaries of these three powers are compared. Fuzzy, mainly witchcraft, doctors as auxiliary, voodoo as the disdain, voodoo is at the bottom, the least popular, my grandparents' generation is the most obvious, when my grandfather was still alive, he also worked part-time as the village witch doctor, and was very respected by the villagers, but when my grandma and aunt talked about witchcraft and voodoo, their faces were full of disgust

There are many problems 1. The IQ of the supporting characters is too low, and it is not too much to say that they are brainless villains. They dreamed back ten years ago 2. The meaning of the moment is too obvious, whether it is the protagonist who has just learned to attract insects and encounters the cockroaches, or the inspection the next day after cleaning up in one night, and it is a hell-like inspection. Sanitary inspections are basically covered in all chapters now. I was attracted by the introduction and waited to see the protagonist cockroaches deal with kitchen waste. As a result, the protagonist opened a housekeeping company. He was still far away from the introduction content, let alone continuing to practice Gu. 4. The protagonist has no sense of confidentiality about his own abilities. The roommate can explain that there is no need for the two bosses to introduce their abilities in the same way. It is difficult not to make me suspect that the protagonist is showing off.

Is there something serious about exposing your ability to control insects? Then if there are cockroaches in other people's homes, they will say that you put them there. They are highly poisonous and may even attract people with ulterior motives. In the end, I'm afraid the National Security Agency of the United States will come out...

I was just about to praise the protagonist at the barbecue restaurant for being smart and knowing how to take advantage of the situation, but in the blink of an eye, the protagonist acted like commanding cockroaches. Why, are you afraid that others will not know the specialness of the protagonist? You can say that you have prepared a secret potion to attract cockroaches, but you must not reveal your ability to command. Let your roommate know that it doesn't matter. After all, your roommate has been helping you for free, but you dare to expose a food stall to your competitors, and you are still a competitor with no bottom line. Why, your opponent doesn't dare to lift the table?

I went, rented a breeding farm, and did a lot of routines. The key is that the routines are still very old and blunt. The protagonist has only a few cockroaches at the beginning, so he can just find a private house to deal with it. The key is that the protagonist now has no money to play, and the money he earns is renting a store, and he also wants to build a big venue. This is a bit arbitrary.

How can I put it, reading this book was like being hungry for three days and suddenly finding a bottle of rat poison that had expired for 10 years. It was highly toxic 10 years ago, but this is 10 years later. Whether it is poisonous or not depends on the poison resistance. If you are not talented, the poison resistance is not high, and you will die before the 30th pill.

Why don't you rebel if you have superpowers?

High EQ: The creativity is good, but the writing is not attractive Low EQ: A piece of shit

All the girls doing housekeeping are bragging, it's impossible.

This book can only be said to be very creative, but unfortunately it has nothing but creativity. The writing is novice and the plot is retro. It might have been readable twenty years ago.

The idea is good, but the plot is too stupid.

The two major poisonous points are Zhao Rubing and Old Man Lu.

You have to find a female leader who has supported the protagonist when she was a child. She will also forcefully get in touch with you when others ignore you, and she will lick the dog.

To be honest, if you want to write on the fantasy side, your golden finger is useless. Anyone can learn it. There are many ways to get the secrets, and the protagonist's IQ is a bit anxious. If you write on the science fiction side, I feel like you haven't gone to college or read a few good novels. You don't understand. Meaning transmission, the value of telepathy, Musk's tens of billions of brain-computer interfaces are not as easy to use as your intention transmission, the domestically produced Mozi quantum satellite, which is worth tens of billions, is not as useful as your telepathy, mechanical ascension into the virtual world, do you know the most important core technology of the Matrix? It's just to convey meaning, and without your advanced level, your setting is like holding a nuclear bomb, showing it to everyone in the bustling city, military secrets can be leaked, not to mention you are so arrogant, it can be said that your setting is extremely intelligent, not an ordinary intelligence reduction You may also want to write an invincible article, but can such a low-level golden finger write an invincible article? , Do you want to lower the IQ of people all over the world? , Very powerful idea,

When the housekeeping company first started, it was still over the top. But as the company grew bigger and more people came in, there were problems with staff composition and income and expenditure. When I wrote about bugs, earthworms were a big bug. How dare I write about an earthworm that is one or two meters long? The weight-lifting ability of ants is also exaggerated by 400 times. Do you understand what 400 times means? It is equivalent to an ant lifting 400 of its kind. It is not such an exaggeration to exaggerate the existing scientific quality.

I suggest the author to read "The Giant Insect Corpse Witch"

Pig's feet were shown to various people in front of various people, and when they were trying to improve the hygiene of a vegetable market, they couldn't bear the poison and died. The author was so high that he couldn't read it without using his brain 😥

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