With a Cheat, I Slay My Way Through the Instance Worlds

I have a good imagination, but my logic and writing skills are a bit poor, so there is room for improvement. It is enough for new readers to read it as a beginner's article. But for me, it has no distinguishing features from other similar novels, and I look forward to the author's improvement.

After reading more than 170 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The male protagonist earned more than 10 million ghost coins for the country, but the second in command of the relevant department wanted to kill him, and the male protagonist actually asked him to check that his inventory could not be opened. With the help of the male protagonist, the country has the opportunity to make deals with Xinghong Youxuan. The male protagonist only takes 1% of the money he earns, and the rest of the money is used for favors. As a result, the senior officials of the relevant departments are now directly targeting the male protagonist. According to your plot, if Tabe's uncle is not the third-in-command, wouldn't the male protagonist be cheated to death? The ghosts in this weird world, and the bosses of Scarlet Preferred all know that they can only make money with the help of the male protagonist, and they will give priority to protecting the male protagonist no matter what happens. Since the relevant departments have to write a report every time a dungeon ends, it is impossible not to know how many people the hero has saved. As a result, the top officials of the relevant departments in the real world country are trying to get rid of the hero. Don't you think this is funny? Furthermore, you mentioned before that humans only entered the weird world 5 years ago. The higher the level of the contractor, the longer the CD to enter the dungeon. So under normal circumstances, humans are only at the sixth or seventh level of strength. The male protagonist can kill seventh-level ghosts in the weird world, but he still watches an ordinary person mocking him in front of him and doesn't dare to hit him? After all, he is a high-level person, and he said in front of a bunch of people that the hero did not want to hand over the things on purpose, so he said that the inventory was locked. Do you not understand what it means that a high-level person cannot be bullied? According to your plot, if the official does not have the ability to detect that the inventory is locked, will it mean that we have to argue with the official about a lot of things? The senior management no longer treats the male protagonist as an individual, but the male protagonist is still staying in the relevant department. What does it mean? You can say that the third-in-command is out, but what about the ministers of relevant departments? What about the director of the entire National Security Agency? You also said in the novel that it was Tabe's uncle who helped persuade the male protagonist to hand over the ore for detection. If there was no Uncle Tianbe, wouldn't the male protagonist go directly to Beijing to be a guinea pig? In the entire novel, the so-called relevant departments and the so-called national officials all have the feeling of being a grass-roots team. A third-level evil contractor can kill all the people in a branch. Don't tell me that bracelets are made that allow players to survive in the dungeon even if they die, but they cannot make protective measures for each branch. The beginning and the following content are also very confusing. As a branch, there is no order or discipline at all. When recruiting new people, they can do whatever they want. I can understand that there are relatively few special talents, so the management is not very strict, but by Chapter 170, the second-in-command of the relevant department also wants to punish the male protagonist. Even though the male protagonist has saved countless players, even though the male protagonist has helped the country earn tens of millions of cheat coins, the second-in-command will still do whatever he wants to you. You are not just being funny. 1% of the money earned in Scarlet Optimization was taken, but later on, the male protagonist was forced to hand over level 9 spiritual objects to the state, and the co-authoring headquarters treated the male protagonist as a soft persimmon? You emphasize the importance of tens of millions of ghost coins, and then write about the male protagonist being persecuted by the senior officials of the relevant departments. Let me be honest, do you really know what you are writing?

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Hold on to Chapter 176, after all, my poison resistance is too low The data is confusing, the settings conflict before and after, the writing is mediocre, and the minutiae are repeatedly explained, and the important plot points are brushed aside, blurred, or not even mentioned But! What finally defeated me was the author's layout problem! ? Let me give you an example and briefly talk about what I think is the most poisonous part ●The protagonist works in a company and is the lowest employee of the company shortly after joining. However, because of the cheat, he has achieved financial freedom. One day, the protagonist uses his unique channel worth 5 billion to help the company negotiate a big deal, which is enough to make the company No. 1 In the world, but! ! ! The protagonist paid so much but got nothing good! ! The specifics are: 1. When signing the contract, the company only sent a low-level secretary to sign. The protagonist has never met or even contacted any senior executives. The person in contact with the protagonist has always been a small department manager. 2. The first time the company cooperated, the profit was 10 million, and the profit for subsequent cooperation was 2 million every day. Note, it was 2 million per day. However, the company was justified and only gave the protagonist 1%, which was only 20,000, on the grounds that the company was too difficult now. The company did not mention whether it would be re-shared after the difficulties were overcome, but the protagonist readily agreed. 3. After the company really made a profit, the top management still remained in a state of invisibility, keeping no contact with the protagonist, as if the protagonist was just a low-level minion worth mentioning, and the protagonist seemed to think this was right. 4. The company also gave the protagonist some rewards, emphasizing that they were specially reserved for the protagonist. In fact, it was an uncertain blind box that could be bought for 2 million on the black market. You could also choose 3 low-grade garbage in the company warehouse, and there was also 1 billion Zimbabwe. The protagonist was very moved. 5. The company has obtained the protagonist's monopoly channels with small profits. The protagonist is still a low-level employee of the company. He does not get any power. He does not even have the authority to check the company's inventory. He still uses the department manager. The company's senior management does not mention promoting the protagonist. The protagonist is just a self-motivated tool man. The author has too little experience and a limited vision, which results in the style of the writing being too low. The official justice he clearly described turned out to be hypocritical and petty, and the righteous and generous protagonist he clearly wanted to create ended up being self-motivated and resentful. The author probably doesn't even read the news. He has his own worldview. If he knew more about national affairs, he would not write like this. This is the most disgusting official description I have ever read.

1. It's easy to work with high benefits. Your job is to keep yourself alive. How can you not care about it? You don't have to waste time working in order to make money to support yourself in reality. 2. In order to obtain more information and increase the life-saving rate, the protagonist's plug-in must be chosen correctly. The more information you know, the more targeted the choice will be. If you had chosen purify in the first copy, you would have been wiped out. 3. There are multiple dungeons in the profile, and you can also have teammates when the time comes. Teammates with official backgrounds are much more trustworthy than those in the Savage Group. Don't mention any background relationships. If you are the leader, are you willing to throw your child into it? 4. If you don't join the official, you have to either be a lone wolf or join an organization. As a lone wolf, it's difficult for you to obtain information (why should others give it to you). If you join an organization, the conditions are better than those of the official? Not just a dog? When you meet a PVP player in a multiplayer dungeon, the brave team has a high output and a high output. You, the Demon King, have a high stat when you are alone. It is not impossible for you to do something to expose your identity in the real world. 5. The crystal guard on the other side is waiting for you to come out. I have already figured out your personal information. No ability is possible in this weird world. Does anyone really think that they can live a better life by rejecting the official invitation and working as an unloader in the workshop? Do the shops at the door recognize that you can earn soul coins? I have read a lot of novels, and many people with feudal backgrounds have joined the imperial court, while those with modern backgrounds have hesitated to join the officialdom. Do these people really don't want to join the officialdom, or do they have other meanings? The American Avengers has an organizational nature, so why don't anyone comment on Marvel movies like "Join the alliance and become a dog, then abandon it". There is a book that is also a gamer type with a modern background (the first player is still something, the protagonist gets the qualification by killing birds on the bridge). I did not join the official, but sent my childhood sweetheart to the official. After that, we worked closely with each other. No one will believe you if you say he is not an official. In the book written several years ago, no one said "I will become a dog for the official and give up". As soon as I saw an official job, I said that there are not many people who have abandoned their studies and entered the society. I just read this book and the main character, a high school student, drinks wine and eats seafood for dinner. All the comments were made by high school students and junior high school students who said, "Who are you, I'm going to eat and drink with my brothers on the weekend." The first time I drank was at the thank-you banquet to honor the teacher after the college entrance examination. It's not that I can't accept high school students drinking. I can't understand why I show off these things. I wonder if these people talk about feudal scum in toast videos or comment on the badness of drinking in drunken videos. I really can't understand it. It's so divisive

Can you write less about eating, bathing, and sleeping? They are written too frequently.

This book contains weird rules + weird flow + unlimited flow + golden fingers, with an exit index of lv3, which proves that it still has some merits. The main theme is a refreshing message, and the title clearly points out: Hey, I cheat in the game, and I just highlight a crush. A few comments: 1. It's very cool. You can step into the perspective of the protagonist and play the game with cheats. Can you not feel happy? 2. The protagonist has a very positive outlook on life, and is well received; most of the supporting characters are also very positive, but there are relatively few scenes and no sense of reality. Several villains are too facial, which is a negative review; 3. Each copy has a separate volume name, which is well received (details are controlled), which proves that the author has a relatively clear outline and ideas, as well as climaxes and transitions. With a certain grasp of the rhythm, several dungeons also have relatively sophisticated ideas; 4. It is worth mentioning that the author writes in detail about the harvest of each dungeon, and the role of the harvest is also reflected. This must be praised. I am most afraid of many infinite flow dungeons. After hard work, either the harvest will be passed by, or the follow-up will have no effect at all, which is no fun at all; 5. Some copies (yes, I am talking about the copy of Wilderness) are obviously not well conceived, and the writing has become a bit out of control, so that it finally turned into a pile of running accounts and data. To be honest, I feel that the author must have had the courage to write this paragraph; 6. Some data or events, personal feelings I still feel it is a bit exaggerated, so that I don't feel anything after seeing it, such as the measurements, and the protagonist turning the tide and saving the world every time; Last point, this book is mindless and suitable for passing time, but there is no need to complain or complain about closed-loop logic and other issues. After all, I have already cheated, and you want to talk logic to me?

I know the author wants to write something positive. But according to the way you write it, doesn't the weird world have to have a force to accommodate people like fire heroes? Do police martyrs and military martyrs have to work in a place like a police station? So shouldn't this type of people have an even greater responsibility to maintain order and not endanger the world? I don't know how you want to magically change the population of the country. If you compare it in parallel, the population of 1.4 Billion people will have to be at least a few hundred thousand, right? Hundreds of thousands of people have the same justice, so they must be cohesive, right? So when I saw the fire hero, I felt weird when I thought about it, and this hero wouldn't be doing well if he didn't meet the protagonist.

The dungeon is still very interesting, but don't just give money and favors to a woman when you meet her,,, and the fashion of giving money is too stiff.

There is no reward for this upgrade. The protagonist relies on plug-ins to add attribute points. Others have upgraded and their strength has not improved at all.