The Van That Can Transmigrate

The setting of the book is very good, and Goldfinger is also very exciting, but the protagonist is too stupid. He knows that there is a gun battle outside, but he only goes out to seek death several times when he is safe in the car. In reality, he is even more stupid. With such a Goldfinger, you go out to solicit goods from others? You can still earn dozens or dozens of yuan, but you can still make money in the movie world by using your not-so-smart little brain. Although you can't sell in large quantities, it's no better than your dozens or dozens of yuan. What you wrote, author, gave me a feeling of speechlessness as if Bill Gates did not develop software but went to the dock to carry sandbags to make money!

In the future, when writing books, the author should not write about the vomiting reaction caused by seeing dead people or killing people. Investigations have shown that people generally feel fear when seeing dead people, and vomiting only occurs in a very small number of people who have a stress reaction due to physical reasons. Human death is nothing more than two phenomena. First, death is ugly. Two, death is not that ugly. Let's talk about it first. For example, the corpse rots after death; or the corpse of the deceased is fragmented, with blood or minced meat scattered over a wide area; or the face of the corpse is corroded by special liquid or deliberately damaged. (Especially the face can bring a strong sense of fear to people) (Smelling corpse odor or strong blood smell may cause vomiting, but most people will cover their mouth and nose when smelling these smells). Secondly, there is nothing much to say since the death was not so ugly. The body was intact and looked like it was asleep, so there is nothing much to say. Finally, please give the author more details.

Mission world: "Myth" Travel character: Gao Yao It's so uncomfortable. You are a bird, but I am just a fish in the quagmire. I have worked hard to get something and want to share it with you, but you look down on me. It's muddy, you think I'm dirty, I am dirty, I don't have wings to fly, you don't know how I feel in the mud, I never wanted to drag you struggling in the mud, but you even think that the things I finally got are dirty, have you ever thought that I fell into the mud because of you 2

Van

The subject matter is interesting. Don't write realistic plots, it's embarrassing. There are still some poisonous points, so write less plots about the rich second generation. This is no longer popular. If you continue to write about him pestering the protagonist, all the readers will be gone. Some suggestions, since it is mainly about cars, the performance of the vehicles should be appropriately improved later. No matter how impressive Wuling Rongguang is, it is only a small car with a displacement of only 1.5L and a maximum horsepower of only 99 horsepower. The 45L fuel tank and 135NM torque are even more impressive. It's true that there is an invincible buff, but what if you are trapped in a pile of zombies, hundreds or even thousands of them? This power is not enough for a heavy truck, let alone Wuling. No matter how invincible the protagonist is, he still has to eat and drink. If he is trapped for a few days, he will lose his hair. These must be considered, vehicle performance, and the space inside the vehicle (such as adding a hidden dimensional space to store stolen goods and daily necessities). Actually, the permanent invincibility buff is still a disadvantage. It is really not fun to push every mission. You can give a temporary novice invincibility buff or have an invincibility buff for a limited time of a few hours for each mission.

Don't plot characters need to be paid for placing orders? Although we know that the protagonist's reward is a big lottery, the plot characters don't know. I just saw Chapter 52 where King Li is, and I found out. It is natural for the person placing the order to ask the protagonist for help and extra help. Logically speaking, if you abide by the rules of the game, you will get rewards if you pay, right?

Are the space bags and cultivation methods just given to foreigners? What's more, I changed into a Mark series armor, and the gold was exchanged for the pebbles that can be seen everywhere on the roadside, right? Don't tell me that the Mark series is a very powerful high-tech armor. You Yahuo Seed Source can directly transform it into a Gundam if you just find a subway. The armor of the Mark series has some value in the ordinary modern world. It can be better than that in any science fiction world If you give your practice method to China in the Marvel world, the reward the country will give you will be much better than your armor Discussion Mechanical armor also has to look at war hammers, armor that never wears out, and this is just a boilermaker's protective suit... It's outrageous Or go to Devouring Stars, a Black God suit is better than all the Mark series in the movie universe (the Black God suit is set to be a planet-level Force suit)

To be honest, the subject matter is good, but the author doesn't know how to write, and the protagonist is written like a stick. In this era, there is no way for the heroine of the Virgin to survive. He needs to be more ruthless and have some common sense. . . . . . . . .

The book is okay, but it makes a lot of common sense problems, not to mention throwing the two grenades in the front to blow up the prison wall, and blowing up the lake shore to let the lake water flow out. Just say that Joules and Watts can be unified, but they are not one gram and one milliliter of water. Besides, the author's mathematics is also crazy. Every time the length, width and height of the space are expanded 10 times, the author actually writes that only one-tenth of the original full space is occupied, which makes people confused. Also, the speed of the van increased. It was originally 2,000 kilometers per hour, which was quite fast. Then it increased a bit and turned into Mach 10 per hour. Not to mention Mach, it is already speed. It was superfluous to make it an hour. I calculated this and found that Mach 10 is not as fast as me. Then it was upgraded to Mach 20 per hour. I was also crazy. If you don't add the three words per hour, wouldn't you be able to write a book? Later, it was said that it takes more than an hour to circle the earth, and one circle of your earth is only a few kilometers long. I'm not blaming you, the book you wrote is also very good. I said before that when you have a few thousand kilograms of strength, you can hit people with shock waves. I don't know if the human body can have it, but even a car weighs several kilograms, and there are no shock waves in a car accident. After all, I haven't seen it anymore and I can't bear it. The latter ones are so annoying to watch (๑•́ωก̀๑)

I'm giving up. Really, authors who write about cultivating immortals must remember this and don't touch the great world. The combat power of the prehistoric world is not comparable to that of other immortal worlds. The author actually compares the Immortal Emperor who covers the sky with a saint? Isn't this funny?