The Van That Can Transmigrate

The book's premise is good, and the "golden finger" (advantage/cheat) is quite appealing. However, the protagonist is incredibly stupid. Knowing there's a gunfight outside and that only the car is safe, he repeatedly goes out to his death. In reality, he'd be even more foolish. With such a "golden finger," why not go out and haul goods for others? Earning only a few dollars at a time!

Authors, please refrain from writing about vomiting upon seeing dead bodies or committing murder in your future books. Studies show that while seeing a dead body generally evokes fear, vomiting only occurs in a very small minority due to stress caused by physical reasons. Human death essentially falls into two categories: 1. A gruesome death; 2. A less gruesome death.

Mission World: Mythology Time-traveling character: Gao Yao It's so painful. You're a bird in flight, while I'm just a fish in the mud. I fought tooth and nail to get what I wanted to share with you, but you look down on my muddy state. You think I'm dirty. I am dirty. I have no wings to fly. You'll never know how I feel in the mud. I never intended to pull you out of this mess, yet you despise even what I finally got. Have you ever considered that I fell into this mud because of you?

Van

The subject matter is interesting. But please reduce the realistic storylines; they're too awkward. There are still some flaws. Reduce the rich second-generation character's storyline; that's not popular anymore. If you keep writing about him constantly harassing the protagonist, all the readers will leave.

Do characters in the story not have to pay for placing orders? While we know the protagonist's reward is a grand lottery, the characters in the story don't seem to know. I just read chapter 52, the one with the Power King, and I noticed it. It's taken for granted that those who place orders ask the protagonist for help and extra assistance. Logically, shouldn't we follow the rules of the game? There's no reward without effort, right?

They just gave away the spatial bag and cultivation method to foreigners like that? And they even traded it for Mark series armor, exchanging gold for roadside pebbles, huh? Don't tell me the Mark series is some kind of high-tech armor. You could just find any subway car in AllSpark and turn it into a Gundam.

To be honest, the premise is good, but the author doesn't know how to write it. The protagonist is written like a complete idiot. In this day and age, there's no way a saintly protagonist can survive. They need to be cold-blooded and ruthless, and have some common sense...

The book is fine, but it makes many common-sense mistakes, not to mention the two grenades thrown to blow up the prison wall and the blasting open the lake shore to let the lake water flow out. Even joules and watts can be standardized, unlike a gram or a milliliter of water. Furthermore, the author's math skills are absurd.

I'm dropping this, seriously. Authors writing cultivation novels must remember this: don't try to piggyback on the power of the Primordial World. The power level of the Primordial World is incomparable to any other cultivation world. How could the author compare the Immortal Emperor of Shrouding the Heavens to a Saint? Isn't that ridiculous?