Corpse Resurrection Game

It's a very unique and heart-warming plot, a bit Western World, also suspenseful, with candies and knives, which makes people want to watch it. I hope you stick to it! Like!

The previous plot and characters are scattered, but generally watchable. The scene switching was a bit messy, and the author's description of the environment was a bit poor. I read those chapters as if I were in a dream, switching scenes back and forth. One moment, I felt like I was on a ship, another in the city, and another in the basement. They all seemed to be teleporting.

It is excellent in all aspects, but the protagonist becomes a corpse, encounters extraordinary monsters, participates in mysterious games, and sees strange scenes. Finally, the author told me that the protagonist is an atheist and still believes that there are no ghosts in the world. Made me laugh, too lazy to watch

Shen Nong tasted a hundred herbs, and this one seemed to be of the highest quality. The subject matter belongs to the extraordinary game copy type, and the protagonist's ability setting is very novel. As a corpse, there is no soul and cannot carry out belief in God, which leads to the mutation of abilities, which is quite good. The plot is also relatively coherent. This kind of subject matter tests the writing skills. So far, it seems that the author's writing skills are quite good. The reason why it is not popular now, in my opinion, is basically because the plot progress in the first ten chapters or so is a bit mysterious, and people with insufficient understanding will find their thoughts confusing, which makes most readers impatient to read it. Basically confirmed to be this food

To tell a joke, people died and then came back to life, saw the extraordinary and mysterious, participated in mysterious games, and then calmly said, I am an atheist, I do not believe in ghosts and gods, and there are absolutely no ghosts in the world. I feel numb, what kind of ancient setting is this?

The author has too little life experience. Usually there are at least two policemen on missions. In which movie have you seen one person?

There is a feeling that the author has an idea but cannot control it. There is very little information and the main line is very unclear. Let me just say that being a Riddler requires skill, otherwise the impression will be too bad.

Evaluation: The main plot is scattered, the plot advances slowly, the scenes change too quickly, some details are too few, and there is a lack of sufficient foreshadowing. Summary: You can watch it, but you are picky.

The imagination is okay, but the conflict is not handled well, and it is not written when it should be exciting, resulting in a relatively dull viewing... But when the knife is released, the writing is very good, just like when I watched Westworld, I couldn't calm down. It's very cool to see the brain waves. The follow-up will depend on the unfolding of the worldview/historical truth, I hope it won't be too blunt. If the whole story of the male protagonist's transformation into a corpse could be logically closed, it would be a masterpiece

I can't understand it. It's very scattered and fragmented. I can't stand the transitions where I don't agree with each other.

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Stream of consciousness, you can see if you match the brain waves 🙂

It feels like your corpse has a little less ability, such as cold mind, which is immune to the influence of emotions on itself; immunity to pain, which will not affect actions; immunity to toxins; psychic resistance, which can resist a certain degree of mental attacks; senses of the dead, which can sense the surrounding life and death breath, and can see ghosts!

It feels a bit confusing, and some plots are skipped too much.

It's not very good to watch, the writing is okay, and the plot is too overwhelming. The start of Corpse is not very impressive, and the copy is passed in a hurry, so it is not recommended.

The author's attitude is okay. It's rare to see it here. Nowadays, new and old authors basically have the character of an uncle. I don't give a damn for not reading the book because of this attitude.

It's a bit abstract. Is my brain degenerating? It's a bit difficult to understand

Hey, why is this gone? It was quite interesting.

Personally, I think it has great potential and needs to be improved. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

All I can say is that it was very stream of consciousness, and I looked confused.

The author has carefully sorted out the context of the writing. In some places, it reads smoothly but always wants to add something to enhance the style. As a result, the writing power is insufficient and the expression cannot be expressed, resulting in an extremely abstract reading.

The details are inappropriate, the transitions are abrupt, and the descriptions in some places are not in place. All in all, even if you read the book carefully, you can't imagine many places. The plot is okay but it is too strenuous to read. Food and grass are available, but it will be difficult to go up.

The author has done a good job in improving it, please come on

The writing is very good. If you have time, you can slightly modify the previous chapters. Previous question: The pace is too fast. Don't use too much. It will be better if you add appropriate additions ... in some places. Some prompts for character dialogue also need some polishing, and are a bit monotonous. You can open a small account and post some words where you feel excited or want to complain. Don't let the comment atmosphere be filled with comments about the entire book without reading the content, which will reduce the impression.

The plot is okay, but the twists and turns as it progresses are abrupt and sometimes baffling.

The book is called Corpse Resurrection Game, but the protagonist turns back into a living person at the beginning. Aren't the introduction and title of the book deceiving?😒

It's a pity that another new book has died.

The two missions at the beginning are too boring and have nothing attractive about them.

This historical text of the late Ming Dynasty, "Xi Ming Li Huo", writes about Sichuan's resistance to the Qing Dynasty in the Southern Ming Dynasty. The writing is good, the plot logic is online, it does not reduce intelligence, and the details are real. There are no common time-travel routines, and the cheats are not big, but the details of the war are very solid, especially the war planning, army organization and equipment, battle plot, command, formation, and marching details are very real. The plot is roughly divided into two lines, one is to resist the Qing Dynasty, and the other is to deal with various warlords in Nanming and Sichuan. Currently, there are two female protagonists interspersed with the main line. In addition to the plot of war and strategy, there is also a harem. Finally, I wish Guibao Di a great success!

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