Ten Kingdoms, Land, Mountains, Wind and Moon

After reading more than ten chapters of this book, I really can't stand it anymore. If it was a short text, I could still read it more than ten years ago, but now that I am 30 years old, I can't stand this kind of short text.

SB flow writing method, the protagonist born in the 50s has a halo of intelligence

For the fifth generation, I swallowed my anger for many chapters. Now I can't bear it anymore. Damn, what kind of emotional drama are you writing? If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. I'm not here to see the male protagonist as a bitch. Now we need soldiers without soldiers, people without connections, just personal bravery. There is no rules for how to develop. What's more, we have to write a lot of inexplicable emotional dramas. There is an emperor as the father-in-law. If you don't take advantage of it quickly, you still despise the princess? What do you mean by maturity? I haven't even decided on my own position, so I just pretend to be mature on the outside. In terms of behavior, language and life, I really don't see how stable it is. The writing is quite contradictory. The finished Luo Youdu and Zhu Xiu are not good at martial arts, but mentally they are really far behind the male protagonist.

Why would Liu Zhiyuan refuse such a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to adopt the protagonist as his adopted son? The national destiny of the Later Han Dynasty lasted for three and a half years. After three and a half years, the protagonist's power has also grown. In addition, the protagonist is a god in military skills, his adopted son has the right to inherit, and Liu Zhiyuan only has one son. He can definitely seek the throne. You can use the hind legs of Guo Wei and Chai Rong to seize the throne like Zhao Kuangyin, but that is more than ten years later. He is recognized as an adoptive father, and he will be able to wear the yellow robe in a few years.

Also, let's change the introduction. Hua Jianxian was killed in 947. Hua Jianxian was already 45 years old at that time. The male protagonist still wants to have sex with her. Her taste is really too strong.

He also said that the protagonist's character is too "upright" and not treacherous enough. Cao Cao only has three successes, and he should only have the attribute of getting married women.

The writing is terrible, disgustingly bad, the author has poor historical skills, the emotional description is disgusting, the plot progress is rubbish, too much poison was added after the founding of the country, leaving a lot of thunder.

Shennong tested poison Five chapters and died from poison Plot Long Aotian At the beginning, a small soldier went to the warlord leader for a nonsensical analysis and then was promoted The heroine's classic hero saves the beauty by smashing things on his head After that, he used national justice to persuade Fu Gao. If these two soldiers have such integrity and history, they will not surrender to the Liao Dynasty.

It sucks. Even if he pleads for the former prince, he still has the former prince under his control.

I can't stand it. Maybe I've read too many professional-level writings like this. I think there is a complete difference between having an A and not having an A.

I hope the protagonist can change his country name and not use Ming. Because I think China started to lag behind the West from the Ming Dynasty. Although the Qing Dynasty was completely left behind by the West, this trend started from the Ming Dynasty. Compared with the Han and Tang Dynasties, the Ming Dynasty was more conservative, emphasized culture over military affairs, and had rigid ideas. It only had 18 provinces in the Han region. It was at the bottom of the unified dynasties. It was stronger than the Song and Jin Dynasties, and much worse than the Han and Tang Dynasties. Even the Qing Dynasty instantly defeated the Ming Dynasty in terms of territory. After the demise of the Ming Dynasty, hundreds of millions of people were conquered by the Manchus with only a few hundred thousand people. You must know that firearms were already used on a large scale at that time. The West relied on firearms to defeat the barbarians, but the Ming Dynasty did the opposite. It is conceivable that after more than two hundred years of rule by the Ming Dynasty, the Chinese people have become weak and weak, without any courage. You must know that the population at the end of the Ming Dynasty was over 100 million. After the fall of the Han and Tang Dynasties, there were only 20 to 30 million people. If they were divided into several forces, they could hoist the surrounding barbarians and hammer them. That would be true martial virtue. Compared with the Ming Dynasty, it is too rubbish. It is even more shameful than the late Qing Dynasty. The Qing Dynasty at least changed the times. Agricultural civilization encountered industrial civilization and was hit by dimensionality reduction. It is outrageous that hundreds of millions of people in the Ming Dynasty were conquered by barbarians with a population of hundreds of thousands. There is no such weak dynasty in the history of the world. I personally hate the Ming Dynasty. I hope that the country name Ming will not be used. The protagonist directly renames the Ming army and the Ming army rushes to lick the Ming Dynasty. I think it is not necessary. We can definitely give a new country name to make it as great as the Han and Tang Dynasties.

What are you writing about? Adding a halo of intelligence to everyone and forcing unnecessary conflicts. Do you still think this is the online writing market ten years ago?

The Khitan of Dacao Valley turned out to be an elite with armor. He arrived just in time for the start of the talisman. He was "extremely powerful after being struck by lightning."

After watching for a long time, it turned out that a group of stallions were talking among themselves. Boring Stallion Story

If the wife does not make a big mistake, if she makes a concubine a queen, she will be infamy for thousands of years, and if she spoils the concubine, she will destroy his wife. When the time comes for the people of the world to pamper their concubines and destroy their wives, they will point out that Emperor Taizu is an example, and all the families in the world will be in chaos.

Amazing, this protagonist is so awesome, he has a bastard aura.

This author doesn't know how to write books, and Wu Ba Chunqiu's book is garbage

To be honest, when you look at it, you only see that the protagonist is a simple-minded warrior, without any political acumen, and only lives as cannon fodder. There was clearly a chance to take control of the center and be one step ahead, but he refused and gave the opportunity to his opponent. The war has started but there is still no specific strategy. Instead of taking advantage of the opponent's unstable footing, quickly wooing all the forces that can be drawn together, uniting all the forces that can be united, and making a quick decision, why not wait for the other party to consolidate its power and consolidate its forces before starting a war? Wait for the other party to divide and disintegrate his subordinates, and start a war alone? And then one against ten thousand? Showing bravery?

The book is a bit white, the author needs to work harder. Suggest some comments and delete them if you don't like them. The characters in this book are too shallow, have no sense of hierarchy, and are heavily stereotyped. First of all, there is the protagonist, who loves to show off so much that he can't hide anything, and he is too straightforward when speaking and doesn't know how to keep things secret. In Fu Yanqing's case, he did not see the wisdom of his five-generation old father-in-law, but saw a brainless, hot-blooded and reckless man. If the above can be dismissed, the key thing is that the heroine Da Fu is written as a little girl with no knowledge at all. Such a heroine cannot be called the heroine of a book. If there are few scenes, forget it, the heroine of the historical novel is just an embellishment. But it happens that there are a lot of scenes. Love brain is really not interesting at all. Finally, there is the old acquaintance maid, she is not likeable, her petty thoughts are nothing, but she is the highlight of the character. But having no brains is the biggest failure. You don't know what you should do or what you shouldn't do. Your life is in the hands of others and you still have to jump. The protagonist is naive, she has only lived as a servant for a few days, is she naive? ...... When writing historical articles, the author should pay more attention to the details that should be paid attention to. The characters should not be too straightforward. If you have the ability, you should hide three points. The biggest reading point of historical texts is the pressure of the old era. Without this shackles, the reading will lose its flavor. Finally, the tone of the comment may be harsh. The author will forgive me and just delete it after reading it.

Doesn't this woman even recognize her own status? Arranging such a blunt plot, it stands to reason that as a maid of Da Fu, she has a better chance of becoming a concubine. Want to become a real one, is there a problem with her head? I have just experienced life and death in my family, and I also have a younger brother. The character you created, author, is so disgusting and illogical.

It feels like AI is now writing books, and they are all copied from TV series.

Finally a eunuch, very happy

The author asked the protagonist to imitate Zhu Yuanzhang in everything, but ended up causing a rebellion in the East Palace! Is this how Zhu Yuanzhang treated Zhu Biao? Don't touch the porcelain of Ming Dynasty, don't smear Ming Taizu! Is a rubbish protagonist worthy of meeting Ming Taizu? Nausea!

It would be too shocking if the protagonist used Ming as his country name. Before the barbarian Liao Kingdom used the mascot character as its country name, all Chinese dynasties used ancient countries as their country names. That is, the three barbarians of the Liao Kingdom, Jin Kingdom, and Yuan Dynasty used auspicious characters as their country names. The Ming Dynasty was influenced by the previous three foreign dynasties and used the name Ming. As a Han Chinese, if the protagonist uses Ming as the country's name, will he be the first to create barbarian customs? People in the world will not recognize it, so there is no need to clarify this national title. It is more artistic to use Gu Guoming.

I don't know why, but I feel like there are a lot of private ideas, and it's weird that I can't name them.

The compositions written by elementary school students are smarter than your novel.

The novel is inherently enjoyable, but it is too deep and meaningless. As long as the text looks comfortable and pleasant, there is no need to be too derogatory. History with profound meaning is really meaningless For example, my favorite Three Kingdoms novel is Rebirth of Shu Han. But I can't stand it and it looks so good. I don't have the time to pursue profound meanings. I don't even want to read books that are full of nonsense. Now let me go back and read Zhetian. I can't stand a chapter. But let me watch the son-in-law cultivating immortality, and then I will be excited 🤓

It's too fake. You have this kind of force and you can kill people by yourself. Is it necessary to rely on others?

Seeing a woman unable to walk, poisonous

Isn't the author Ming Dynasty? Did he learn from Zhu Yuanzhang? Will Zhu Yuanzhang depose the prince Zhu Biao? Outrageous