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With such a high starting point, it doesn't make sense that you can't feel comfortable writing about it, right? Don't be a licking dog, otherwise it will be disgusting
The literary flow of serious literature and the literary flow of entertainment novels are completely different, because the two are actually not the same subject matter, and the atmosphere of the novels is completely different. The traditional literary text flow mainly focuses on communication with various writers, as well as the creative process and the content of the text. Adding a little film and television is almost enough. But the literary flow of entertainment is completely different. The plot is very unserious. This chapter is about love, the next chapter is written, and then it is mixed in to make movies and TV series. It is not serious.
The protagonist wants to block the people who hacked Liu Qianqian. If these people take refuge when the Internet company comes to an end, the Internet company will kneel down regardless of whether you are a big writer in the Beijing circle. In the real world, the so-called Beijing circle will kneel down.
The protagonist with a sense of fragmentation
When I read the latest chapter, I felt like the protagonist was so disconnected? He is sometimes tough and sometimes cowardly, but most importantly, he is a protagonist who travels through the rebirth stream! Even if the reborn protagonist is not Kai Wushuang, he shouldn't be like this! Well, the most important thing is that the protagonist has a very high starting point but so far he is not very happy! ! !
The biggest bug is the bipolar setting of the world in the article, and then when writing it, it is written according to the impression of the current world.
After reading three chapters, although there is nothing wrong with it, I just feel that the main character is not likable.
Don't say much, just talk about one poisonous point. How dare a time traveler get drunk and talk nonsense on the phone to others? So brave? Are you really not afraid of being found out?
,,, But in a work that should seriously study how to fry fish, how to transport works, how to be happy and show off, and how to rectify the entertainment industry, the author writes about pure love. That's not to say it can't be done, the author's writing is a bit off, but the problem is that it's inappropriate. The male protagonist is not suitable, and the female protagonist is not suitable either. The male protagonist is neither a bad person nor a good person, he is probably just a mediocre person who cannot see clearly or think clearly. He once thought he was noble, but later he started to lick his face and deceive himself and others. Every time he makes a mistake, it's common, but he's just not likable. There are too many mediocre people, and no one expects his coy and pure love story. To put it simply, there is no cuteness. As for the heroine, she is not a good candidate, nor is she a suitable pure love object. She does not satisfy everyone's fantasy of a good girl and cannot become the white moonlight in readers' hearts. You must say Liu's appearance, what a pure face. But that was once upon a time, beauty grows old and time flies by. Especially since Pure Love is an illusory literary work, its heroine is not imaginary enough and has real characters. This is really too embarrassing. If this is a completely fictitious character, then the author said that simplicity is simplicity, and he wrote that kindness is kindness from the perspective of God. We can easily read her heart. The problem is that Liu is different. As a prototype character, no matter how the author writes it, she is just YY. People will still speculate about her character in reality. Even though Liu's reputation is good, as a star, the distance between her and the audience has become a fetter. So, I can only say that if you want to write about pure love, you can do it, but you must write about a sense of expectation, instead of just writing about the yy of a loser dating a celebrity. You want readers to get hooked on CP and look forward to their development! There is no such thing in the article now.
After reading more than 100 chapters, I feel that it is not interesting. Why is it not interesting? After all, this is an online novel, so it still needs a bit of excitement. Does the plot of the protagonist's contact with the Beijing circle in the book look like an adult before being reborn? Like a famous writer who won a literary award? The plot in the Beijing circle doesn't feel at all realistic
Thank you for your silent support. I really appreciate it. After so long, you still remember me. For this, I am really grateful! ,,,,,,! I'm actually not good at writing this kind of entertainment theme, so sometimes the pace is fast and slow, and I don't know much about the entertainment industry, so I came up with such a novel and clever setting. I don't know if everyone will like this setting when they see it, but this is the difference from others that I can think of. There are countless director, actor, and entertainment tycoon articles on the market. I admit that I can't write about them, so I had to find another way to come up with this setting. If, if you feel something is not suitable, or have some good suggestions, please feel free to give me some advice, just don't scold me! ! ! Finally, I know that many people like Sissi, and I like her too, but she can't be the only one. After all, I am not as delicate as Lao Tuo in writing the emotional drama between two people (facing Lao Tuo's Liu Qianqian, I can only cry.) Therefore, I will mix emotions in my career in the future, please forgive me! ! !