Grand Arcanist

Personally, the book has potential, and I liked the first two chapters. The writing style in the later period is a bit... Like a fairy tale. I hope the author can highlight the main character of the protagonist. The character of the protagonist in different periods is still a bit fragmented. Looking forward to your next performance.

I've been a little stuck recently. I'll touch a piece of Pirate Lord to make up for it 😏✌️

The characters are still very likable, and the writing style is also relatively sophisticated, but the background and the core of the story look ordinary at first glance. It feels like the story of a poor boy's adventure in a novel from more than ten years ago, except that the male protagonist was replaced by a female protagonist.

The writing is quite good, maybe it's because female protagonists don't become popular easily?

The beginning is really amazing, but the rhythm later is weird... The heroine's personality changes too much and too fast, and the NPCs will suddenly change... The overall feeling is that it is neither good nor bad. Come on, author!

Daddy (unconscious) Give me a daddy (struggles) (reaches out) (squirms)

Seeing the big pin on the top, I decided to flip to the end. Comrades who keep books might as well do it. Anyway, if you don't read it, it won't matter if you flip through it.

The writing is quite good, but the protagonist is too young, and some of his actions make people feel uncomfortable with them. This is the disadvantage of writing protagonists from a young age. Some children's behavior is normal, and some readers at the time may not agree with it.

I will give it a very clear picture in the first and second chapters, but it will become more and more outrageous later on. All aspects can be progressed from the shallower to the deeper, step by step.

Come on, it's hard to find a book that suits your taste now.

Very nice This subject matter is great

Come on, big brother, hold on, hold on, support you

I think it's very well written. Please give it a try, the author, it's just more painful to pursue😿

It's even better looking... It's cute and adorable...

The setting and writing are good, but the character of the protagonist is not likable

Do you guys have a book club? I really want to urge the author to update😡😡😡

233360349 (Q group)

Chapter 7 is painful to watch, the bad guys always get what they want

The titles of these recent chapters are a bit hard to describe.