The King's Avatar: Myriad Radiance

Did we readers create the two female lead character cards? There's almost no interaction with Tang Rou anymore, so is it a single-female-lead or dual-female-lead story? Urban game/sports fanfiction like *The King's Avatar* is generally not suitable for harem writing.

How much of what you wrote is actually related to the "full-time job" genre? Adding in love triangles, multiple female leads, and superpowers healing, "full-time job" really doesn't deserve the title. I don't see much of what makes "full-time job" appealing in your book. I just feel this book doesn't live up to the name.

Let me be blunt: the writing style is alright, but he added a lot of romantic scenes as he wrote, which made up a whopping 75% of the story. Fine, he added them, but the writing was terrible, it was ridiculous, so cringeworthy I wanted to scratch my toes. If the score is out of 10, I'd give the writing a 6, the setting a 3, the plot -8, and the overall score a 1.

We've noticed that many readers don't understand the meaning of "hand-rubbing" or have some misunderstandings about it, so we'll provide a unified explanation here. In this book, "hand-tapping" means using the arrow keys plus a single key to release a skill, such as ↑↑↓ (wws) plus space, or ↑↓↓ (wss) plus space.

The protagonist's idiotic personality is like that of an ill-mannered brat.

Gou Ba: What I hate most is seeing the protagonist's father restricting his freedom; no normal person could tolerate that; there's no emotional foundation between them; besides, he's a transmigrator after all. Isn't being a lone wolf good enough? Why does he need to be paired with a wealthy family? It's unsettling to watch.

The original storyline was weird from the start, and it got more and more absurd as it went on. Mid lane and bot lane stuff... What was I even writing? If you're going to write a full-time story, just write it properly. All that time I spent nurturing this book was a waste. I'm dropping it.

The protagonist's personality change is too abrupt. He starts off a bit immature and then suddenly becomes extremely aloof and even somewhat annoying.

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It gets more and more elaborate as it goes on. Later on, the male lead develops late-stage depression, his hair turns snow-white and he gives it away, he avoids his romantic relationships, and he even skips competitions. It's infuriating to watch!