The King's Avatar: Myriad Radiance

Are the color charts of the two heroines created by readers like us? There is almost no interaction between Tang Rou, so whether it is a single heroine or a dual heroine, it is basically not suitable for urban game competition fans such as Full-Time Master to write about harems.

How much of what you are writing is related to Full Time, and what about love triangles, multiple female protagonists, and superpowers to cure diseases? Full Time is really not worthy of being the title of your book. In your book, I don't see much that is exciting about full-time work. I just don't think this book deserves the full-time title

I'd better be more direct. The writing is okay, but there are some emotional scenes in the writing, which account for up to 75%. Feel free to add them if you want. The writing is not good, it's not good at all. It made me dig my toes and bleed from the embarrassment. If it were a perfect score, I would give it 6 points for the writing, 3 points for the setting, -8 points for the plot, and 1 point for the overall score.

I found that many book friends do not understand the meaning of hand rubbing, and some book friends have misunderstandings about hand rubbing. Here is a unified explanation. In this book, hand rubbing means the direction keys plus a certain single-key release skill, such as: ↑↑↓ (wws) plus space, ↑↓↓ (wss) plus space. In order to ensure that the movement is not affected and to prevent other skills from being accidentally used, the protagonist's skills must be at least three direction keys plus a space bar, or even four direction keys plus a space bar. However, generally only one or two keys are needed to release skills, and at least four keys are needed for the protagonist to rub his hands. That's the difference.

The protagonist's idiotic character is like an uneducated brat

Gou Ba hates seeing the main character's father restricting his freedom the most. Even normal people can't bear it. He has no emotional basis. Besides, he is a time traveler Isn't it bad to be alone? He also needs a big family with capital. It's uncomfortable to watch. After all, not many people read novels and look at the family's face.

The original plot has been weird from the beginning. It gets more and more outrageous as it goes on. It's also in the middle and bottom lane. What did you write about? If you want to write a full-time story, just write a full-time one. It's been a waste of time for me to keep the book. I gave up.

The protagonist's personality changes too abruptly. He is a bit of a middle-class character at first, but then suddenly becomes extremely cold and a bit annoying.

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It really gets more and more complicated as you go to the back. The male protagonist in the back is suffering from late-stage depression. His hair is as thick as snow and he gives it away. He chooses to avoid emotional problems and doesn't play in the competition. It's really annoying to watch.