Marvel's Mighty Man

There is an advantage in writing first these days. Who knew that Loki, who had always been a joke before, was now super evolved. At the end of the second season of the personal series, he became the strongest single person, alone in charge of all the main lines and branch times of the entire movie universe... What a joke is the Ancient One? Loki can delete people directly in the timeline, and this is a hammer.

In fact, if you write about Marvel, it is already bad. Why not write about DC or The Invincible Boy, the original world of The Invincible Boy? This comic is not like Marvel and DC, which has various versions, so no bad guys will come out to disturb you. It is better to write about the original world of The Invincible Boy, and it also has settings and many parallel universes, and it can be very long.

The people of the motherland are tired of seeing it. I don't know why so many people want to be the people of the motherland.

Well, I thought it was Spider-Man's boss James who traveled through time, after all, he looks so similar to the Almighty Man.

You can read the first three chapters, but there is no need to read the rest. He doesn't look like a native of the motherland, more like a younger brother.

The protagonist is just a waste controlled by the system. It can give the protagonist a bloodline and can take it back anytime and anywhere.

The more I read, the more it changes. It keeps coming back and forth inexplicably. Brother, don't you have an outline? After more than thirty chapters, things changed. He was not the same person as at the beginning.

The ceiling of the Prince Regent, the strongest in the universe of Nowhere Boy (Luke's level after using the Reality Stone) The War Beast (Lion) and One-Eye are tied for second, because One-Eye becomes stronger like the Saiyans every time he survives a disaster The third is Young Hero Mark's father Omniman, who is slightly stronger than most of the Vet Stars. At the same time, the visual strength of the adult Young Heroes in the later comics is about the same. After the evolution of Luke's bloodline, he will be the peak of the Almighty Man The fourth is the older elites in Veltum and the Young Heroes in the late comics The fifth is the ordinary Wiltumians, with the three eyes of the black gun, the older purple-skinned daughter of the Regent, Luke has this strength now, before the bloodline has evolved The fifth one also has the Young Heroes in their young state, less The hero's combat power fluctuates greatly, and he has been raped by girls, so it's really hard to rate The Iron Man of the Sixth Young Hero universe, this guy is Batman's brain plus Iron Man's combat power, plus the means to kill people The seventh Beast Girl's son (should be a son) Beast Girl is a boy in the beast state. . . . There should be many others who are also ranked 7th. The Immortal Man should be counted, and the parallel universe young hero mechanical zombie version should also be counted.

It's like refining the outline and sending it out without much polish.

I feel like the writing is a bit messy. I can't tell you that I just feel uncomfortable looking at the word order of the sentences.

I feel that after the protagonist has superpowers, he gets angry too easily, especially after possessing the Reality Stone.

Give your butt a pat on the back, even though it's not well written.

There are too many dialogues and the plot has nothing new.

A bit dry and not very mellow