Yi Ming 1671

I sincerely recommend Lao Ao to write fan fiction. If you don't want to write about The Red Mansion, you can also write about the other three classics!

There are contradictions. One moment he said that he would not go to the capital to take the martial arts exam, and the other moment he said that he maintained his identity. How could he marry a maid as his wife?                Marrying a lady from a noble family, a woman from an official family who is well-matched. The problem is that the martial arts exam is the beginning, so what are you thinking about?      Yy，   I have lost all my strength, but in the early stage I was still a gentleman

Let's change the first chapter. Since we want to hide our clumsiness, wouldn't it be tempting to be ranked second or third best in the country?

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When you are short of money, you will know that Red Mansion IP is popular.

I started reading the author from Detective. The previous 1561 was very good. I don't know why I cut it. I stopped reading the Red Mansion after I got tired of it. This one returns to the end of the extraordinary Ming Dynasty. I hope it will have a good ending. Come on💪

What have been written in these chapters recently? There are so many cases solved in Qidian. It depends on who will look at you. Don't put the cart before the horse and think about your strengths. Don't make it like 1561, where everyone stopped watching and then the eunuch was unfinished.

The author's subject matter has jumped out of his comfort zone, but his writing techniques have not. The exciting points of fantasy novels are all mentioned, the golden finger becomes the copper fingernail, the setting is obviously good, multiple worlds collide, it can be written that the protagonist travels through various small worlds and grows by relying on the advantage of knowing the plot, but it cannot pick out the outstanding points. Are you solving crimes in the Ming Dynasty where spiritual energy revives and multiple worlds merge? The same goes for opening a harem. It's normal for you to end your writing in Red Mansion by focusing on the garden scene. But in this book, did the deletion of Mrs. Gao's plot have any impact on the main plot? The Collision of Many Worlds is not a woman without distinction. The protagonist is also being yelled at all the time, and feels very aggrieved. Writing a world where great power belongs to oneself is not flattering. This is not the Red Mansion. It is natural that the writing method is poor.

It's no surprise to see crappy comments. Your work on The Red Mansion is so good. Even if you don't write about The Red Mansion in the next book, you can also write about Water Margin or Jin Ping Mei. Water Margin will be written about Gao Yanei, and Jin Ping Mei will be about Ximen Guanren👻

I didn't want to read this book as I kept reading it, so I went to read the previous book Red Mansions again 🤔

I feel that the author is still suitable to be a moderator and write a book. The plot of Mrs. Gao was disgusting at the beginning. Others are fine, but the plot of Mrs. Gao is really not suitable to be written at Qidian. If you are a moderator, you can write in more detail, but this is the starting point, it will be disgusting if it doesn't go up or down. It can't be written in H, which makes readers feel happy; it also makes many people who love to watch NTR feel disgusted. It doesn't feel like a book suitable for me, but I still hope that more people who like this style will read this book. I wish the author further success. Goodbye.

None of the author's books have a normal ending. They either end in a hurry or commit suicide with a knife. In other words, Honda is a little more normal, and the old eunuch is

There is a reason for poor grades. A high-ranking official will disgust a large number of people and leave.

Can you please stop writing about the yamen? Everyone is cooperating with the yamen's knitting. The same goes for the protagonist, who cares about everything. Is it Timely Rain Song Jiang?

... Transformation is a good thing, but first you need to figure out your strengths and weaknesses. I have always felt that what makes the author outstanding is never the fighting, nor the temple plots, nor even the harem, but the short family conversations between ordinary citizens, which are lifelike and delicate details of various life trivial matters. But the author chose battles and temples, which he is not good at, as the main thread to advance the plot. He also mixed together the system, football, history, Journey to the West, immortality, fantasy and other elements to write a cool article... These things may be of interest to the author, but they are really not suitable to be put together, and they can easily become a dark dish that violates the rules. I don't expect this work to end normally. Perhaps everyday writing, writing about the life of an ordinary person in a specific context, is the most suitable. For example, something like Babaofan's new work about ordinary people's cultivation of immortality is actually quite good to read.

I was attracted by the author Red Mansions. To be honest, the writing is really good. When the author said he was going to continue writing his previous book, a group of book friends said they were not optimistic about it. When I started the new book, I didn't add it to the bookshelf as soon as I saw the subject matter. Today I wanted to see if there were any new books on Red Mansion, but after reading these comments, I knew that the results were not very good. As the old saying goes, listen to others and have enough to eat. In the last book, it was said that the father has to support him when he comes back, and the child has to be raised too. The gap in grades is so big, so it's no longer an option to write about The Red Mansion. What are you waiting for? Raise a father, raise a child with love and buy a house

You can add some low-level demon and ghost settings to create a fantasy version of Red Mansion 🙂

As long as the golden finger is replaced by a normal one, it is interesting and can be watched... It is also OK to make a low-magic talisman and Taoism~ This football system is still a low-end version and there is no sense of expectation.

This ball king system is too dramatic. It would be better to just write about the protagonist's natural power.

I'm just a fool. If I don't write about Red Mansions, I have to write something original. I'll wait for your next book.

The writing is good and the plot is reasonable, but there are too many poisonous points. The naughty sister, the scholar brother-in-law, the monster wife, the idiot yamen, the drama system and many other poisons have been gathered early. I really can't withstand the poison and die 🥵

The Red Mansion has been blown away by you and the wind. I look forward to you continuing the glory of the Red Mansion.

At present, it seems that the author is more suitable for things with ancient Chinese themes, such as harem fantasy, fairy tales, history and so on. In fact, what China Entertainment can do is quite limited, and it is easy to get into trouble. If you really want to write about this subject, there is actually more space for writing in entertainment and other fields, and it is also popular, such as the book Chicago 1990.

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Not as comfortable as the Red Mansion at all

I want to see how arrogant I am, I have already finished 3

I've only read a few chapters of this book. When will you go back and write The Red Mansion? ?

I have read 320 chapters so far, and I am a genuine supporter. A brief review of this book: Advantages: If the author describes a few female characters, he will basically accept them. The author's writing style is delicate and the story is quite interesting 👏 Disadvantages: 🍵I also accept it, but I can't figure it out. What's so good about Mazi's aunt who is "tough in color, bully and afraid of the strong, and has a bad temper" who makes the back house uneasy? She has to accept it... Isn't she very distinctive? Do you have to take this bite? Chunyan🍵I can tolerate it, but your protagonist can't eat everything, right? You have to pick up something good, right? You have to take your basic base into consideration, right? But you don't care at all whether the character is evil or disgusting? 🙄 To sum up: I like the Red Mansion book very much, because the protagonist is a scumbag from the beginning to the end, the character is very stable, and in some aspects he is completely bad. But the protagonist of this book is very pretentious. On the surface, I don't want it, but actually I want it all (I like it when others offer it to me, and then I "have no choice" to accept it). If you like the protagonist of this kind of archway, you can check it out

I'll give you two monthly passes. For the sake of the beauty of Red Mansion, after reading the first two chapters, this book is not attractive enough

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