Mortal: I, Li Feiyu, Defy Heaven and Change My Destiny

Just write what you want. If you confiscate a popular girl, you will definitely lose some fans! It will be refined and only those who watch will be left! After all, it is impossible to write a book to satisfy all readers 😅

Alas, the previous outline set up a lot of the plot here. In fact, there are many interesting characters in the first volume of the original work. Unfortunately, everyone seems not to like the plot of Qixuanmen. I spent a long time in vain, now I can only cut off most of them.

In the book review area, I saw the harem issue that was discussed the most, so I will explain it here. Everything must be done step by step and logically. You cannot start a harem right from the start. The characters have not yet been established and the story has not yet unfolded, so it would be meaningless. Even if it is collected, it is just a symbol and completely inconsistent with the character in the book. I think there are many details and interesting characters in the original work that are worth digging into. Although it is written by a fan, it cannot be written exactly according to the original work, which would be boring. Why not try to flesh out the characters that are not much written in it? Everyone who has read my works will know that the original intention of writing this book was to make up for the regrets about beauties in the original work, so you don't have to worry, there are actually a lot of women involved in the original work. I am worried that if I write too much, you will call me a stud again later. 😁

I see you writing a book, the death of your roommate, Zhang Tie being refined, all have emotional ups and downs. I personally think it is very good. In fact, whether it is a martial arts or a fairy tale, although the external environment is different, the same thing is that we are all writing or reading: human nature! In fact, in real life, I cannot fully release my emotions, so I make up for it with literature, film and television! The biggest problem with "The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality" is the excessive indifference and ruthlessness of the protagonist. Although this is a good work, it is far worse than Jin Yong. There are only two points: the plot does not have the ups and downs of Jin Yong's settings; more importantly, the characters are not as flesh and blood as Jin Yong's works! Han Li has no love, only cares about himself, and is indifferent to friendship and love! It makes the whole book feel like boiled water. Reading it will not make you laugh, cry, or even sigh! Finally, I advise you to stick to your heart and write to yourself. First of all, you have to like your own stuff and think it's awesome. Then others may think it's awesome too. If you blindly pursue the so-called opinions of readers, you will eventually be abandoned! Don't care about whether you can make money or whether there are readers, just work hard to write stories that touch you. This will make you more likely to succeed! One family's opinion, for reference only!

There is no distinction between priority and priority. Seeing that the mortals are cultivating immortals, you have written so many martial arts plots. It is strange that they are popular. Now you are entering the plot of cultivating immortals...

The writing is pretty good, if you keep at it you might be surprised.

I haven't even started cultivating immortality after writing more than thirty chapters. Is this a martial arts novel or a fairy tale? Speechless. Most people start cultivating immortality or go through three or four chapters at most. Even the Qixuanmen like yours has been written clearly and logically. Slipped away

Why haven't you updated in the past two days?

Come on, write slowly, I like this kind of detailed story

What I want to tell you is that writers must put their heart and soul into writing, or at least take it seriously; but comments come freely and as they please! Therefore, you should keep your heart and don't think about the opinions of so-called readers. Just write for yourself, as long as it conforms to the set logic and your own taste. The vast majority of readers are actually very irresponsible. They just want to read cool articles for a while, and the more exciting the better. If you listen to them, they think cool articles are boring. Literary works must have tension and conflict, so that they can arouse their emotions! There is no depression, no winding path, no bright future, so how can there be a surprise of breakthrough? 😁Look, they don't even know what they want! So I feel sad that you cut off many plots, and I hope you stick to yourself! Finally, think about how much explanation there is in "The Legend of Heaven and Sword of the Dragon". Guo Xiang only has several episodes, and Yin Susu's encounter with Zhang Cuishan has several episodes. Could it be said that this book is not good enough?

Well written! It's been a few days since I updated, just be sure you're not a newbie!

The author intends to give some good endings to the beauty. I think the one who regrets it more is the Mo family. Of the four ladies, two died in the battle, one is missing, and one has been seriously injured for many years. There is no happy ending for the three ladies either. It felt like Han Li's suggestion turned the triangle into a mountain and two tigers. Han Li didn't understand. The women of the Mo family were also blinded by power. It would be better to find a way to take away the women of the Mo family instead of leaving them there. Either let Yan Zhu appear in advance, the four ladies are not good enough, they can't suppress them, and they don't know how to retreat.

It's well written. I'll give you a recommendation vote. Come on, don't be a eunuch.

How many spiritual roots does the author plan to give the protagonist?

If you can grasp the harem, write more; if you can't, write less.