Douluo: Soul Skills Are All Increased, I Am a One-Punch Angel

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I really despise being black for the sake of being black. No matter how hypocritical Tang San is, at least he is not mentally retarded. How can the Blue Silver Emperor like Haozi's character? Although his butt determines his position, he must not be too brainless.

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It feels like a pig's foot is being targeted. To be honest, level 98 is already invincible. How dare those forces want to assassinate? It makes people anxious. Even if you are only banned, even if you are only level 90, 1, or 2, people will stare at you and kill you. How can you prevent the younger generation from killing you? Hit and run will directly wipe out your clan and annihilate your clan. It's okay for the Pope to target the protagonist, but how dare those mere titled Douluo? It is inappropriate to forcefully pretend to cause conflicts, and it makes people feel too much like Xiaobai. Besides, except for a few people who have become big influencers, they should not be as stupid and simply pitiful as Xiaobai. The subject matter is okay, but the article is not rigorous and serves the purpose of pretending to be invincible. Please correct the shortcomings and come on! Can write better

The protagonist has an arrogant personality. He said at the beginning not to treat anyone as a fool. I was thinking that when the protagonist was six years old, he said he wanted to plot against God Shura. Tang San was nothing in his eyes. If according to the original setting, Tang San had survived in ancient times. The protagonist had just crossed over and wanted to plot against the world. He said at the beginning not to treat anyone as a fool. Did he treat himself as a fool? Or is the author a fool? It gave me a headache. There was no humane sophistication in the article. I was wondering if the author had ever been out of society. I was watching a clown write an article

Bibi Dong betrayed the information about Wuhun Palace and revealed everything about Angel Wuhun. The master's face looked even stiffer, "I only know a little bit, it was what Bibi Dong told me back then. She once mentioned something superficial, saying that in the Wuhun Palace, there are six soul bones that have been passed down for thousands of years. These six soul bones can only be used by soul masters who have the Seraphim Wuhun. Each soul bone is ninety-nine thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine years old. Only one step away from the 100,000-year level. Only if someone can use these six soul bones at the same time can they be stimulated to the 100,000-year level and become a god-like existence. These six soul bones are called angel divine armor."

It's a bit disgusting. It pretends to be smart, but it does stupid things. There are also many ambiguous descriptions. It's very silly.

Can you please stop writing about Hegrin? It's useless, just give you a whale glue. You also helped them, and you also want him to become a god and go to the divine world. He has always had scenes and interacted with the female protagonist 😅. The protagonist is surrounded by women. You have a male supporting role. Is it to create a harem for the protagonist or for Hegrin? 😅

All I can say is that Ling Yuan, who is about 50 years old, falls in love with a 6-year-old kid! Remember, it's 6 years old! 71 pictures, the protagonist is still 6 years old, and he is causing trouble everywhere! The author seems to want to finish all the stories! If I keep writing like this, I'll probably become a god by the age of 10.

In particular, it is extremely poisonous for the male protagonist to let Yue Ling, a decades-old Contra, fall in love with him, a six-year-old brat, for three months. Does the old grandma fall in love with her little grandson with motherly love? If you are twenty years old and can still make it, the problem is that you are only six years old. If you develop further, you can reach heaven at the age of six 😅

There are no big poisonous points, but there are a lot of small poisonous points, and they still don't change their words.

The writing is very good, but I don't understand what the author's consideration was in letting an almost 60-year-old Ling Yuan fall in love with a 6-year-old protagonist?

As long as Douluo novels don't write the protagonist as a licking dog, don't randomly change the settings of the original work, and don't accept the unhealthy views and psychopaths from the original work, and the writing is better and a little more imaginative, then it can be called a good fanfic.

Alas, has Qingye been abandoned? The fairy grass would rather be given to the Blue Silver Emperor than to her, and it has been used as a tool.

Combination of martial souls. Female angel ➕ male protagonist = sissy. Shemale. A tomboy. King Kong Barbie. . No wonder I have to see Grandpa Qian Renxue use martial arts to combine

The shortcoming is that the protagonist cannot be established and has no strong character. Conducting dinosaur beasts is research, the theory is well-founded and novel. Simulating the blackening of Qian Renxue, it is also about theory, layout, and research on character design. It does not even mention Tang San, the protagonist is established. This Tang San is different, it is also theory and research, and Tang San is a time traveler fighting other brainless time travellers. Everyone has their own expectations, which is cool. Your sense of excitement is not enough. I have watched it repeatedly. Your protagonist is an angel martial spirit. If you create your own divine position, kill Bibi Dong, and suppress Qian Renxue and Tang San, that would be a bit interesting... Faith (create your own angel religion, your spirit temple, your followers, and do great things, make everyone in the world the enemy, but I am invincible), and prove your divine position (prehistoric Pangu, defeat gods at a hundred levels, suppress Tang San, Qian Renxue, and Bibi Dong) , merging the will of the world and condensing the mark of the heart of heaven (Perfect Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, you are the God of Douluo, pulling the world to promotion, changing the three divine positions above, becoming Douluo's God of the Sea, God of Shura, God of Rakshasa in advance Counterattack on the God Realm.) Now Douluo fans have almost written about it, putting new wine in old bottles, but your bottle and wine are too old.

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The first part is well written, but later on I have to make a broken college, so I'll forget about just a college. I wrote nearly a hundred chapters for a broken college, and the second part is still unfinished.