Fantasy Version of Douluo

I just discovered this book when it was free, so I came in to take a look. I personally like to read Douluo fanfics. Among them, I think the book "Blue Silver Strategy" written by Dou Yi is the best, and the author can learn from it. Now let me tell you my opinion about this book. I read the reviews and all said that the author wrote very well (such as the writing style is very good, etc.). Maybe it raised my expectations, but I feel that I overestimated it (there is a lot of moisture). Then, there is a lot of sense of fragmentation in this book, which can easily make people feel distracted. The author's writing does not have a strong sense of substitution (he is always used to appearing things that do not belong to the Douluo world setting). Furthermore, there are many inexplicable places (for example, the name change of the protagonist in the first chapter is very inexplicable. , My impression dropped a lot right from the beginning). In fact, the setting of this book is quite good. It is too boring to write it all at the beginning. In fact, it can be introduced slowly in the later text, so that the reader's perception will be better and more attractive. Then, the author's ability to describe fighting scenes is still poor (this became even more obvious after other people criticized it in the comments). In my opinion, this is more like a fantasy novel covered in Douluo's skin (the ingredients are very complex, and it incorporates many right and wrong things). It has little to do with the original work of Douluo. Moreover, the author said that it is a family portrait novel (I am reading more than 30 or 30 chapters in this regard, and I have no say in it). I won't comment yet, but it makes me feel a very strange feeling from time to time) (I also forgot to mention that the author always seems to have some words in very strange word order, which makes people feel inexplicable). This is what I want to say after reading nearly 30 chapters.

It's too slow to warm up. Chapter 489 is level 39, and chapter 746 is only level 4. It's a bit too slow. If you write like this, you will have to write more than 2,000 chapters before your account will be banned.

This fanfic has annotated a lot of things and changed a lot of things. It's very good to have your own ideas. But this is San Shao's book. San Shao is not a good person in the circle. 🐶Save your life and don't get too popular. Be careful that the book is gone 😄

In Chapter 2262, is Xixi going to become the heroine?

After reading so many Douluo fans, the author's settings are the most complete, and most of the settings are very consistent with a real world. A lot of opinions were written into my heart, and I also filled in a lot of holes in the original work to rationalize it. At this point, the author is careful. Some readers are impatient. Just ignore them and read the book to see the whole world. On this point, I support the author! I hope the author can write it for a longer time, so that it is not a routine book, and it is not the kind of book where the subsequent plot can be seen at a glance.

The Douluo worldview is a purely fantasy worldview of belief in gods. There is no knowledge of meridians, acupuncture points, yin and yang, heaven and earth, and humanistic thinking. You must know that the martial arts lineage is prone to ruthless people! Every few thousand years, a ruthless person who can cut the sky with a sword, conquer half of the sky, and shatter the void will emerge. Every hundred years, a ruthless person will emerge who is number one in the world, a martial arts myth. To be honest, if Douluo were in the world of martial arts, the legend of dragon slaying could be compiled into poetry within a thousand years, as a child would know. In three thousand years, the sword will open the gate of heaven, and in ten thousand years, the immortal family will seize all opportunities in the divine world.

Unorthodox fan fiction, Douluo background world view, written a hundred years before the birth of the third brother, it can be regarded as a prequel. I have read most of it now, and except for the fact that the growth of the protagonist feels a little slow, there is nothing wrong with it in terms of logical conception, sentences, paragraphs, and plot settings. After the protagonist awakens in the early stage and obtains the best mutant martial soul, he also obtains an unreliable system, which significantly promotes the plot of the story and the sense of rhythm is also significantly enhanced. It can be seen that the author is very thoughtful. If he continues to work on his bold ideas, he should be able to become a fairy tale. Come on, Aoli!

Slip. There are just too many peripherals. I can't stand it anymore. And the protagonist doesn't even have a plan to become a god. For example, treasures such as whale gum jelly grass and ice and fire dragon king soul bones. Wuhun is also too perverted. All the ten ancient divine swords are here. Too flashy. It would be better to inherit the throne of Shura God behind the Seven Killing Sword Ultimate Gold. Fitting and reasonable. Ten divine swords is too outrageous. One handful is enough to reach the sky. To use an analogy. Just like how a plane like Douluo could raise a Daluo Golden Immortal. No matter how fancy and peripheral the changes are, it is extremely unreasonable. Not Douluo at all😅

I was drawn in after reading the introduction. After reading more than a dozen chapters, something seemed more and more wrong. Then I read through the comment section. Most of them said it was too watery. There were too many settings and it was too confusing to remember. The protagonist had no role. He was only nine years old after more than 200 chapters. The martial arts training was too exaggerated. The system was too sudden and so on. People who read this book are attracted by your introduction, and they are all reading about the growth and rise of the protagonist and his family. I read comments in your more than 400 chapters that the protagonist only appears in less than 50 chapters. You keep introducing the settings and background, and there are 40 or 50 chapters in one battle. The plot is dragging. The setting should serve the plot rather than using the plot to reveal the setting. Today's society is impetuous and fast-paced. I am already very tired from work. I want to read a novel to relax after get off work. You have so many characters, so many settings, and the expressions are so confusing. Fortunately, old bookworms can see the back. For those who are used to reading cool novels, no one will be able to read it. To sum up, the author doesn't understand secondary creation or fan fiction. He has the intention to use this as the basic framework and modify it to create an original fantasy novel, and then improve his writing style. The results are still good, but the author has taken the wrong path. (This is just a personal opinion. These frameworks of the author are still very good, but it is a pity that they should not be used in Douluo, and the writing style is not mature enough.)

I watched it for 5 days from beginning to end, but it wasn't too detailed, so I'm going to go back and watch it again. All the settings in this book are all on what I like, including family training, weakened group portraits, and the setting of Douluo Wuhun. Because the article was written about Douluo a hundred years ago, it is basically out of the scope of the original protagonist group. However, judging from the author's layout, he basically wants to write about the protagonist group, and then it will be a battle between the protagonist's juniors. The whole book is very rigorous, with many foreshadowings, but there is basically filling in at the end. It is very interesting and can even be read again and again. It is a fine book. Strongly recommended🤓🤓🤓

The author's book is actually not suitable for publishing on paid software. The author's writing is brilliant and thoughtful. I believe the author wanted to write a classic online article, but the author's starting point was wrong. It may be that Qidian is not an attractive fantasy novel, and many introductory novels are difficult to explain in one sentence. Readers of Qidian do not like novels with ambushes and foreshadowing. Moreover, even if the novel is charged after 100 chapters, in fact, the author has suffered a big loss by introducing the background setting in the beginning. A more complete Douluo background was written in just one hundred chapters and hundreds of thousands of words, so that the protagonist did not occupy one-tenth of the novel's space, making people feel less immersed in it. The space for the protagonist in the later paid chapters is also pitifully small. It is completely set up with a lot of background, and where is the protagonist? Many readers will not pursue the perfection of the background, but the reasonableness of the background and the sense of participation of the protagonist. For example, Wuhun is a Knife and another Ultimate Ice Wuhun written by Douluo Wenyoubu are more popular than the author's novels. The background introduction is not well set. It does not explain anything. It only cheats on the original plot and recruits girls along the way to open a harem. If it were not both a new book and slow to update, otherwise I would have continued to subscribe if there were no problems. It is meant to attract readers and give them a sense of involvement, and the author's book is more like a book written for himself, filling in holes so that the protagonist has no sense of involvement and the reader has no sense of involvement. To put it bluntly, the reader is here to read the protagonist, and the rest is reasonable. For example, Gu Zhenren and Da Ai Immortal Lord, its setting background may not be as complete as the author's and may not be introduced as much by the author. Even the Legend of Human Ancestor may be just compiled when it is used. The background introduction of the Ten Immortals and Demon Lords is completed and there is not much introduction. It is very It would have been a matter of one or two more chapters, and Gu Yue Fang Yuan did not recall the reincarnation past when he was the leader. The plot is not better than your author's novel and can withstand scrutiny, but it is because the protagonist Gu Yue Fang Yuan, the devil, is charming enough that readers can identify with it. The author uses the protagonist's perspective and experience to describe the Douluo in the author's heart, rather than relegating the protagonist to a corner.

There are a lot of characters, a lot of opinions, and a lot of explanations. It makes my head hurt. When I read the names of various characters, I have to check who the person in front is. I also have to pick out the male and female protagonists among these piles of text. Oh, the female protagonist currently has a transparent background. Ban, although I follow the male protagonist every day, and I guess I will in the future, I just wanted to see a different Douluo and an original single female protagonist for the novelty of the book's setting, but I ended up getting buried in these piles of papers. Alas, the author's writing skills are really good, and the words are very beautiful, but it is really verbose. . Look, I'm confused. .

The author's supplement to Douluo's world view is the best I have ever seen in a fic. However, in this case, the author insists on writing a young Siming who does not belong to Douluo in a self-indulgent manner. It is very dramatic, and the emotional drama is too abstract. Moreover, it is said to be a single female protagonist, but Bo Saixi has a liking for the protagonist inexplicably.

Let me answer a few of your questions. First, regarding the previous issue of too many settings. My original idea was to embody the elite education of a well-known family, divided into two aspects: civil and military. The aspect of martial arts is the five inheritances of the Chen family, the best family in the world - mind, body, eyes, mind, and skills. That is, Zhongzheng Sword Qi Technique, Sword Shadow Body, Star Sword Eyes, Seven Kills Qi Condensation Technique, and Seven Sword Control Techniques. In addition, there are three years of medicinal bathing starting at the age of three to strengthen the body and practice basic martial arts. The literary aspect is a lot of cognitive education. The Chen family is a famous family. The families in this article all have inheritance. From the age of 6 to 12, when they are laying the foundation, they all study in their own junior school. There is no need to go out to study. Cognitive education reflects the knowledge of the soul master system, soul master training paths (i. E. Classification, seven in total), historical secrets, personal connections, vassal power, economic strength, cultural inheritance, family influence, and even family back-up. During this period, I often rationalized the inaccuracies in the original work and crazily filled in the holes. Many people regard the cognitive education of the protagonist as a setting. They skip it because they don't like it, and then say that there is no protagonist. The core of "Dou Yi" is love. Therefore, there is a big villain Wuhun Palace, several development places Nottingham, Shrek, Killing City, Poseidon Island, several alliances Sanshangzong, two royal families, and the Blacksmith Association. Others, no more, the circle is very small, so the total number of soul masters is not high, one hundred thousand. The main body of this book is development, the development of aristocratic families, sophistication of people, intrigues, love and hatred, so the circle must be large enough. There are a large number of forces and neutral organizations, including the villain Crimson Church, the Three Imperial Families of the Tie Guan Alliance, the Twelve Families of the Allied Forces Great Soul Fighting Field, and the competing interests Wuhun Palace. Therefore, there are 8 super powers, 60 top powers, and hundreds of first-class powers. So, a Douluo Jianghu appeared. In the article, Douluo Continent covers an area of ​​55 million square kilometers, the same as Eurasia, and has a population of 1.5 Billion, which is not much. At a ratio of one thousandth, there are 1.5 Million soul masters. Due to the dimensionality increase of the world, it has now grown to 2.2 Billion or 2 million. At a ratio of 0.1‰, There are more than 200 titled Douluo. Because it is an aristocratic family, it is a family article and a group portrait article. There are dozens of people in four generations, a large number of branches (33 branches), and follower families (the Zhaowu 13th surname of the inner nine families, the outer four families, and dozens of other middle and lower families), and group portraits appear. So far, light has appeared in the names of thousands of people. Except for Chapters 30 and 40 of Liuguangpo's Wolf-Slaying War, which are group portraits, the other thousands of chapters are from the perspective of the protagonist. Second, there is the issue of the protagonist's young age. I don't know why everyone must follow the time points of leaving home at 12 years old and becoming an adult at 18 years old. Is it okay to go out at the age of 9? Tang San is free-range, in junior college from 6 to 12 years old, there is nothing to write about. But in this book, the protagonist belongs to the best family in the world, so there is too much to write about. The protagonist experienced a war that exterminated his family at the age of 6, traveled to the mainland and experienced two wars at the age of 9, became the family's economic and management minister at the age of 10, in charge of the family's economic development, and officially became the young master of the Chen family at the age of 13. He has grown to 1.7 Meters tall, is a level 57 soul king, and has soul saint combat power. With a developing protagonist group and thousands of soul masters under his command, why do we have to worry about the nominal age? During this period, the protagonist's knowledge and mental age of the previous life showed a thorough wisdom, even evil, from the perspective of Douluo Continental people. Moreover, becoming an adult at the age of 18 is in the Blue Star Celestial Dynasty, but Douluo Continent is a medieval setting. Can't it be done earlier? Tang San became a god at the age of 25. I have written so many chapters, and the protagonist is young, which means he has a lot of experience. Third, there is the problem of system cheats. The goal of this book, just like the title, is to overthrow the divine world, at least to resist the 2,000 gods headed by the five god kings. Even if the protagonist becomes a god, conspiracy theory can't do it. As long as the opponent's IQ is online, I can't do it no matter what. So, become an immortal. So, we need a golden finger, a cultivating-style lottery machine, the origin of which will be introduced later. In the current lottery, except for the heroine Shao Siming Xiaoyi, the rest are all exercises, martial arts, and items. They are all things used by martial arts and cultivators.

The latest chapter mentions the Battle of the Dragon Sect again. The plot of the attack on the Heavenly Wolf Sect should be almost over. The subsequent Tiandou Empire's attack on the Battle of the Dragon Sect will be briefly covered, so there is no need to write it in detail. The first attack on a first-class sect can be written in more detail. Later, the Chen family will develop and there will definitely be a lot of wars with other forces. It is recommended that the author does not write it all in detail, otherwise it will not be able to withstand any number of chapters. Earlier, Chen Yu said that he planned to unite old friends to go to Buren Tower. This plot is also the process of the Chen family showing its strength step by step. With the size of the Chen family, it would be crushing against the Tianlang Sect. Later, when facing the same level of strength, and even the existing 8 major overlord forces, I can write in more detail. Including the subsequent exchanges with Poseidon Island, Chen Zixiu should be involved in this, and he can expand the foreign forces in the ocean, exchange resources, etc. From the perspective of reading the book, the strength of the Sirius Sect has been roughly introduced before, and it is not much more than that. From the perspective of reading the book, the plot will feel bland, without a sense of surprise, and the plot will feel watery. It can still be appropriately brief. From my personal point of view, assuming the role of the protagonist and the perspective of the Chen Family, the description of all aspects of the Chen Family is now in place. I hope to see more of the forces that can be alongside the Chen Family, or even surpass the Chen Family at this stage, and why they can surpass the Chen Family. At this stage, the Crimson Church, as well as the foreign forces, including the current strength of the soul beasts, are not clear. I am personally curious about these. The protagonist's current strength and status can only affect the situation on the mainland by influencing the forces that the Chen Family has good relations with. We still hope that the protagonist can grow up faster. As a thousand-year-old family, the Chen Family cannot rely solely on the protagonist to make suggestions. The focus of the protagonist at this stage should still be on personal growth. The strength of the Chen Family has not yet reached the point of dominance. Other forces collect intelligence and understand the protagonist's status in the Chen Family, and they will definitely have the idea of ​​​​stifling geniuses. After thousands of years of development, there will be enemies if there are good friends. The protagonist should still be patient now.

This fanfic is well written, with a solid and logical setting, and the story takes place a hundred years before the main plot of Dou Yi, leaving the author with a lot of room for free play. But this book is more popular among the audience. Let's put it this way, if you can't read the famous "Xuanjian Ancestors" and feel that it is a pity to throw it away because it is tasteless, you may encounter a similar situation when reading this book.

Just cut this one up and write an original one from scratch, which is better than the current Douluo fanfic🤭. The author is not suitable for writing fanfics, so go ahead and create an original one as soon as possible🤭

The worldview feels okay, and many of the supplements and expansions to the original worldview are remarkable. Let me talk about a few of the poisonous points that I think 1. There are too many characters. After reading 200 pictures, the only thing I remember is Shao Siming, except for the protagonist. Why is it not how well the characters are described? It's all because one is the protagonist and the other is the protagonist. He is a character from the Qin Dynasty; 2. The protagonist and the protagonist's family are too strong. There are only three titles in the main line. The rest are either highly talented or high-level soul masters. Apart from the lack of divine inheritance, they are completely on the ceiling of Douluo Continent. The development of the story has no ups and downs. The subsequent plot can be expected to be all kinds of pretentiousness. 3. It is said to be a hidden family, but it doesn't look like a hidden family at all. Although a hidden family does not necessarily mean to be isolated from the world, the so-called few people who are close to the family feel that they have found out the protagonist's family's underwear. The action of exterminating wolves has been so loud. I don't believe it if people who are not from the protagonist's family have not noticed at all. The protagonist's family is attached There are several small and medium-sized families recently. Moreover, at least the people of the Haotian Sect know that the protagonist's family was originally named Chen (other forces probably know it as well. If you record thousands of years of history, others will also record it). They use the surname Chen carelessly, and the martial spirit is also a sword (high-level martial spirit). I don't believe it if others don't know where the protagonist's family is based. 4. The intelligence and organization of the soul beasts are too high, and their combat power is too strong (it would be even more terrifying if the different races of soul beasts were treated as one race according to the original work). If the factor of God is excluded, the races that humans must kill soul beasts to advance have already had their ashes scattered by the soul beasts (two wolf tribes that do not have 100,000-year-old soul beasts have fought back and forth with the protagonist's family, grinding and grinding). 5. The plot is too watery. For example: the operation of the Demon-Slaying Sheep Sect, there are a lot of Soul Douluo, a base of Titled Douluo, and a large number of high-level soul masters. How many chapters have been written for the whole operation? The same goes for the operation to exterminate wolves; the same goes for the defense battle at the family station; and when it comes to writing with a sense of graphics, I don't have much sense of graphics anyway. Basically, each skill is a poem + which soul skill + skill name. If it is a final decision to end the battle, there may be a sense of graphics, but it is like this every time. A group of people have a lot of skills above the sixth soul skill, and none of them can end the battle. The sense of graphics is to punch to the flesh, not to recite poems and scrape. 6. System and God (I only saw the system, but I think they are the same thing, so I talked about them together). I feel that things like system and god are plot bug fixers. If there is any data value or plot failure, it is said to be caused by the system and god. If the protagonist is too strong, give the opponent a divine test to strengthen it, and vice versa. It's not that you can't cheat the protagonist, but if you continue to cheat, and you can cheat at any time, it is really poisonous. When reading a novel, the author writes the story, and the reader guesses the development of the story. It is reasonable to read the novel to see the development of the plot. Unexpectedly, if you introduce something like a system and a god, the plot can turn 180 degrees at any time. As a reader, I guess it's wrong.

I don't know what I'm writing, it's not like Douluo, but I'm not writing my own novel anymore, because there are a lot of original characters and more plagiarism. It's really just using whatever is well-known. It looks really awkward. I would die if I made up one myself. Also, the protagonist's Spirit Sword and Divine Orb is really bad, and it feels three-dimensional and wrong. I shouldn't write mixed martial arts on the Douluo panel. This Douluo is not Douluo, and mixed martial arts is not mixed martial arts. As for originality? Where do you get the original content from Douluo Mixed Martial Arts? Since you want to write your own stuff, you have to give yourself a world view, and you have to follow Douluo's

The author is really overqualified. It is a Douluo fanfic that was poorly written by others. The author has re-set it to have a grand world view, but there are too many settings, and the main plot unfolds too slowly. I am only 10 years old now, and the timeline is too slow. It is a bit similar to when I studied abroad in modern times, and the timeline is too slow. I hope the author can make some improvements and write better results.

Douluo Dalu is a rubbish novel, but the setting of Wuhun is interesting. The level of this fanfic is good, completely surpassing the original work.

I found another well-written Douluo fan, which is worthy of celebration. Too many Douluo fans snatch fairy grass, recruit beautiful women, abuse Tang San, and unify the continent to become the God King. It's almost like an assembly line, the same. Douluo fans who have their own ideas are so precious. Well, as a fan, I also push down mine, Douluo: Xuantian Legend.

The exemption is limited, can I read 1000 chapters in two days 🙂

The IQ is online, the volume is large, the logic is rigorous, the writing is excellent, and the plot is twists and turns. Great book! Congratulations on the launch. By the way, I would like to recommend the cute new book "Family Cultivation of Immortality Reborn in the Monster Farm". Wang Changqing Haihan🙏

No wonder the writing style is so popular and so low in popularity

The author should let the protagonist go out to travel and meet a reclusive family, learn some stories before the "Douluo Calendar", and then learn more about it among the family elders, and then arrange certain accidents and find out that they were caused by a reclusive family. This method should be developed step by step, rather than posting them all in one go.

It's interesting to read the introduction, but unfortunately I don't like Sword Wuhun. The rest is nothing more than metaphysical settings such as "artistic conception" and "the unity of man and sword".

The main problem is that I can't understand the new things, new system and settings of Shao Siming. Your Douluo extension setting is worth writing about. The major forces are fighting openly and secretly, and the evil soul masters are violently causing trouble (why do the evil soul masters fight so hard? Are there so many two-winged and four-winged soul masters in the Angel family not to progress or upgrade)? Adding the ability to cultivate immortality is definitely a failure among failures. The Seven Kills Sword stall is too big and offers all kinds of benefits. Are the allies it brings in really reliable? ? Could it be that after giving birth to a child or swearing a martial spirit, I would be given 9th and 8th grade herbal medicine. There are more and more new things being added, and the plot advances very slowly, with very few things being done successfully. Reading the book only makes me feel depressed, without much sense of accomplishment. What does it mean that I didn't want to reply at first? Because the reader's writing was long, I had to reply. It's unnecessary and unnecessary.

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I've been keeping it for a long time. Could you tell me where you've written it? Is the protagonist an adult?