This Game Is Awesome

I quite like the game part👍

The introduction looks a bit like Terraria, take a look first

My personal idea is to minimize the main world plot. Unless you want to do some spiritual energy recovery, just pretend I didn't say it.

Although I am not opposed to writing about reality, but what you wrote... I think it is better to avoid it as much as possible before I can't, otherwise I really don't know how many chapters I can last!

Why does the profile look so much like Teyvat?

You have a mining pickaxe, why don't you go dig that thing in front? It feels like you don't look like a gamer.

Brothers, I plan to submit the part about the little yellow dog and my sister to the Sha Diao website on Biz. Com.

Not bad. I hope there will be more updates. 4,000 Words in one chapter is not enough.

The game part is good. It is recommended to skip the real world part.

I think the author's idea of ​​pursuing better works is good. I have also read the comments from readers, and I think it makes sense. If the author wants to write a more fleshed-out character, he can let the protagonist obtain items or abilities and enter the game as the readers wrote. If you rewrite a book, I think it may be good, but so many people ask you to continue writing. I feel that your book should also have many advantages. I hope you will work hard.

December is almost over, but there's no movement at all.

After reading Chapter 18, I can only say that it is too bland, like boiled water

Is your new book updated at this speed? Too slow

Write less about real-life interactions with your sister's parents

It's the end of the month, hasn't the author drafted an outline yet?

If you're not the author, December is almost over. You won't be waiting for the New Year, right?

When will the new book be released

Since you said you want to change the first-person perspective to enhance the sense of immersion, if you don't change the pure game settings, the sense of immersion can be said to be zero. Basic settings can broaden the sense of substitution. Now all items are brushed and there is no sub-career system. Moreover, there is no main career system, and NPCs currently do not seem to have any systematic way to improve their attributes. There is a race but no racial system (racial talents, etc.) There are skills but no skill system (learn skills by yourself) Weapons have their own skills, but the skills have no quality classification. There are levels, but no boundaries. There are attributes, but the attributes are crude and unreasonable (it seems now that the means to increase speed are extremely limited. The speed in the game can be relatively fixed but not in different worlds. There are no four basic attributes, so it is difficult to achieve). There is attribute growth, but it is a drop in the bucket. The Forgotten can have a racial talent, such as swallowing other people's blood or other methods to enhance attribute growth, and after loading the skill system, the attributes can be improved through exercises. There are characters, but the characters are pure tools. The well-informed old man is obviously not short of money, but he still sells things to the protagonist in the form of gold coins (he traveled around when he was young, and the people he met are also very powerful, and he is obviously a pharmacist who issued the task of collecting herbs) First-person main game, the game features must be at least hidden and not so explicit, the setting needs to be richer, the protagonist is more like a time traveler, not a gamer The person who plays the game, otherwise there will be a third-person distinction between reality and the game There are still many details. For example, the elf artifact can be changed to three semi-magical skills and one true magical skill. After it is smashed, only the most original one is left, and the ability has been reduced. Also, the skill attributes seen by the protagonist are only the skill attributes that humans can obtain, and the attribute bonuses obtained by the blood of the royal family of elves are stronger. And the branch line has dug a lot of pits. He is a master at digging pits. At least he must have a beginning and an end, so that others can see the value of this event. The leader of the one-eyed man killed the protagonist once, but there was no role for him in the rest of the scene. Moreover, the protagonist snatched his weapon right before his death, so the protagonist should be able to directly snatch the weapons in the store and take away most of the valuable things before the store owner reacts. The businessman's letter and the lost little girl could obviously be linked, but in the end, another hole was dug. There was no follow-up to the gold coin reward given to the old man. Wouldn't it be said that you would rest for seven days once you die, and 14 days for the second time? Just swallowed the settings without repairing the book. It just so happens that your game world lacks a lot of things. Let's say that the protagonist opens a blind box to open a map of the real world and collects a miracle seed. The attribute panel is completely improved. As various real-life treasure maps continue to appear, various systems are also installed. After the protagonist completely repairs the game world, which is when the book ends, it happens that the real world can also be used to show off and assist other worlds (for example, there are ancient martial arts practitioners in reality. The protagonist easily defeats them with various strange props. After bringing the boxing skills he practiced into the game, he repaired a few skills. System, or only supports other worlds without pretense, and is no longer the number one productive force in web writing.) From what I see, you probably want the protagonist to keep exploring, and the exploration will end when he becomes a god. However, depending on how frivolous your basic settings are, you must The idea is to constantly fight new monsters and meet new people by changing maps to advance the story, but the homogeneity is too serious. You have to at least add some skills. Although Mad Dog Fist and Tai Chi are actually just changed names and added some attributes, the look and feel is much better than directly improving attributes. Of course, you can also talk about your own plans, or where I guessed wrong, and use them to slap me in the face. Hey, I'm very confident and won't get beaten.

Is the author still alive? Bubble?

The important notice chapter has been deleted, and the book is no longer available on the author's homepage. It seems that the resurrection competition has completely failed.

Chao Gai: System, I want to gain glory and wealth. Is there any good way? System: There are three hundred and sixty side doors in the door with the word "wealth", all of which can lead to wealth. Which one do you want? " Chao Gai: No matter what you say, I will listen wholeheartedly. System: How about teaching you the "kneeling" formula? Chao Gai: How do you say it? System: Kowtow three times in one step, six times in a row. Bowing to the emperor, bowing his eyebrows to the powerful. Chao Gai: Then I can't kneel down and beg for food? System: How about I teach you the word "stand"? >Chao Gai: What do you say? System: Straighten your spine, and you would rather break away than bend your body. Chao Gai: Doesn't that mean you can't make money, so you still have to pay for it? , Don't learn! System: You don't learn this, and you don't learn that either. What do you want? Chao Gai: I don't want to kneel down and beg, and I don't want to stand up to give away money. I want to lie down and suck the blood! R>System: Got it... So, On Huangnigang, Liu Tang and Gongsun Sheng came to report the news. Wu Yong came up with wisdom, Ruan helped, Bai Sheng gave the medicine, and Chao Gai didn't have to do anything. He lay down and sucked a wave of blood, earning a hundred thousand yuan. The position of the Lord; In the Juyi Hall, Song Jiang said, "My brother is the master of the village and cannot be moved lightly." Chao Gai did not have to do anything, just lying down and sucking blood, becoming the largest rebel leader in the world. Outside Zengtou City, Chao Gai wanted to try his talents, but in the end, he shot eastward and returned to the west. "Bastard, why is this happening? " Chao Gai complained angrily. System: You broke the contract first, and you clearly agreed that we would all lie down and suck blood together... Chao Gai: Noisy! Give me a different start, this time I will stand and earn the money! ......

Are you going to write a new book?