I Can See Hidden Hints!

Time travel games, multiplayer, limited time travel to time and return to the real world. You can take a look at Shu Huang. Currently, I personally feel that the biggest poisonous point is: equipment Let's talk about skills first: there are currently only two ways to obtain them. One is to upgrade to a certain level and randomly select three skills. Another way is to obtain rune paper (skill book) by killing monsters or other ways. There is no upper limit on the skills you can obtain by upgrading. There are only four skills at most obtained from rune paper (there should be magic materials to increase skill slots later). If you want to change things up, go to the store and buy a potion of forgetfulness (I forgot its name). Rune paper is for mages only. The warrior skill book has not been released yet. Then let's talk about equipment: Under normal circumstances, only three pieces can be equipped at the same time, otherwise the effect will be greatly reduced. (Same for warriors and mages). As shown below: Warriors normally reduce the number of equipment. The mage also included rune paper in his equipment. You can currently use up to four rune papers. The rune paper alone is more than enough, but the protagonist has not seen the magic weakened when using it, and the protagonist also feels that the rune skill slot is not enough, and there must be props to increase the skill slot later. Next, let's talk about contract-bound equipment: In the latest chapter, it is mentioned that pets cannot bind equipment because their intelligence is too low. It can be used forcefully, but it can only exert less than 30% of the effect of the equipment, and the equipment entries are also invalid. But Chapter 26 said that magic items cannot be used without a contract. A contradiction arises here. (I wonder if the staff is too special? But currently, there is only a chapter about contracted equipment in the whole text, only the staff.) I am mainly curious: "Without a contract, the equipment is forcibly used. It can only exert less than 30% of the effect, including the inability to use the entries." Is 30% of the effect weakened in all aspects? Including hardness, toughness, magic strength and so on. The current rare equipment without a contract in Chapter 74 is worse than the claws and fur of a mole, which should have been shaved off in all directions. Give me an example. A very hard high-level magic material that cannot be forged at the moment. When it is embedded into a shield, it becomes equipment. Without a contract, its all-round strength is reduced by more than 80%, and then it can be forged. Finally, I suggest the author change the equipment system.

It is similar to the previous online game novels, that is, the kind of virtual reality online game. The writing is smooth, the paragraphs are reasonable, and it is easy to read. The author's writing style seems to be straightforward, and the story of the article has little ups and downs, so what attracts me to this novel now is the different equipment, props and abilities obtained when playing the game (this is also the biggest attraction of previous online game novels) Another point I want to complain about is the arcanist in the author's book. I don't know what other people think of it. Anyway, I have read a lot of Western fantasy novels where the arcanist understands the principles of magic and releases magic. And the author's book defines it as a huge bonus for releasing magic at night, so it's better to call it a night mage. Or simply delete the arcanist. The author's outline should be that the protagonist wants to be an elementalist. The arcanist is more similar to the ancient spellcasters the author talks about in the book who sing and cast spells without spell slot restrictions. (There are spell slot settings in this book)

Very nice

The author's writing is pretty good. I'd like to state in advance that I'm just a passerby and no money will be confiscated.

Give the author a suggestion to revise the introduction. The lightning attribute resistance is zero. This is not a hidden reminder. Is this a bug? If you want to say that the thunder attribute resistance is low, I can understand it, but this is a boss after all. Are you saying that the thunder attribute resistance is zero?

Very well written, it's like the gold or diamond in x

It is really written in the way of ancient game novels, and the protagonist is also the setting of ancient game novels. The plot is also a grandfather's plot, but the time for publishing the book is okay. I rushed into it ten years ago, but there are no books of the same type now, so I can just read and play (the plot is mediocre, and the protagonist is not very smart, so it is relatively easy to substitute. There is no golden finger except the old grandfather's golden finger.)

In reality, Uncle Hat has approached the protagonist Qin Xuan. Should you tell the truth about your identity? Multiple-choice question: a. Magician b. Freshly graduated college student c. Fight for the author In fact, Uncle Hat already knew your identity and occupation before coming here, and he had read the novel you recently wrote. You choose a. At this time, you may have developed hysteria, babbling all day long, and shouting various magic spells. Uncle Hat will call your ex-wife and suggest that you be sent to a mental hospital. Option b, you may have been too obsessed with writing novels recently, which has caused you to be unable to distinguish between reality and the fictional spiritual world. Uncle Hat recommends that you see a psychologist. Choose c. Yes, you are actually a divorced author who is nearly forty years old. It seems that you are not confused when writing novels. Uncle Hat tells you that the novel he wrote recently is a bit like a nesting doll. A book friend sent you a razor blade. For your personal safety, he came to inquire. At this time, you relaxed your guard and completely believed the other person's identity, and enthusiastically invited him into the house to drink water. He took advantage of the moment you turned around and stabbed your neck with a knife. Even though you covered the wound, blood continued to flow out from between your fingers. Your consciousness became blurred. Before you completely lost it, you heard the sound of undressing and the distant sounds of keyboard typing. Computer Screen - "Malaysian Doll Must Kill" If you choose again, you will definitely not choose to bear the knife for the author, because you just browse the mobile phone to read the novel, and the poor guy who was played by the author to applaud - a book fan?

The writing is really good. I finally found another book that I can read.

The first few chapters were okay, but afterward I found them to be really boring and boring, so I gave up on them.

Better written than a certain Platinum above 🙂

Brothers, how do you block a certain author? Qidian always recommends some eunuch authors to me. It's really too bad 😥

I've watched 20 photos, but I feel like there's nothing exciting about it. There's a lot of chatter, there's no exciting monster-fighting scenes, and there's no beautiful women... Nothing... Just a glass of water... Please make an initial subscription!

I started watching it around 10 o'clock yesterday morning, found it good, subscribed all the way, and saw that it is now 6 o'clock in the morning. I have played 14 monthly tickets, and even said that I have paid them all this month. When you are done, tell me, today's update is eunuch. Then how do I calculate the money for my 14 monthly tickets and Wanjia subscription? I started reading it yesterday and found the book to be good. I read it in one go, so what if I stayed up late at 6 a. M.? That's disgusting, man, you really are that disgusting.

No heroine? There always needs to be a little warmth for everyday seasoning, right?

It was really uncomfortable to follow the reading, and I asked for leave every day, and now I'm a eunuch, it's really disgusting.

Because I read it, this is the author's first book. It's okay for the author to take a leave of absence. This book is still good, not as good as Fairy Grass, but it is indeed one of the many new books in the book shortage. At least from my perspective, there are no big loopholes or minefields. Maybe there are small ones? But I didn't pay attention. I skipped some minor points after reading for too long, unless they were a steady stream of minor surprises. I can understand what the author means. After all, this is the first book of Qidian. Com, and maybe the first novel in Qidian. I definitely hope that the article can be better. I don't want to be so perfunctory and I don't want to suffer from writing later. It's good, because now during the Spring Festival, many people may not have time to read novels. Just calm down and write well. There will definitely be people leaving. Some people will put it on the bookshelf after a break, and some people will feel like eunuchs when they see the break. Having said so much, I actually hope that the author can finish it well. After all, the initial traffic of this book is not bad, and the starting point of the book is still good, so if you are still willing to write a book under this account, reputation is still very important. If the first book is all eunuchs, the readers of the subsequent books will definitely wait and see, and it will be even more difficult to find data. Change the account It is possible to solve this problem, but changing the title means losing the reader base of this book. It is not necessarily possible to reappear in the eyes of readers. After all, it is quite difficult to grab those publicity resources. Therefore, if the quality of this book can be maintained steadily until it is completed, if the next book is of normal quality, there will definitely be readers willing to buy it. That's it. I wish everyone a happy new year and good health.

Usually authors who take such a long leave of absence are eunuchs. Unexpectedly, the author really does what he says and comes back as soon as he says he will.

This novel is a bit boring and too bland. As far as the equipment system is concerned, common is really common, rare is really not rare, and epic does not have any historical flavor.

Chapter 27 is extremely poisonous. When the protagonist is not strong, he is so stupid that he trades gold coins for money. For those you have connections with, if you directly lock your bank card, you will also lock the protagonist. It's mentally retarded and loveless.

The tree-planting mage himself is embarrassed, but you still use his avatar. No, they are called necromancers now.

Well written, looking forward to future developments

Is it a more traditional online game? Type of article Generally speaking, the arrangement of narrative points is relatively reasonable. There should be no contradictions seen so far. It mainly focuses on straightforward narrative, which is very similar to the traditional literature I have seen before. It is rare to find such a book at this time. The only bad point so far is the seedlings. The number of words is still too few and not enough to read. The traditional online novels are still good-looking, but they are not as good in the aspect of lowering intelligence. After all, there are not even a few characters 😁

The various settings in this book seem to have been rubbed out by the author's feet. Analyze it from two aspects: 1. Whether it is equipment or skills, the levels are too detailed, but the specific strength of each level is written very vaguely. First of all, the large levels are divided into one star, two stars, three stars..., And each star level is also divided into four categories: ordinary, rare, epic, and legend. As the author said, two stars should be stronger than one star, but in this book it is not endless. Yes, for example, in Chapter 67, it is described that "the specific strength of two-star ordinary spells is approximately between one-star rare and one-star epic." Then it is useless for you to play with this setting. Wouldn't it be clearer if you directly set it to something like "levels 1-10 are common, 11-20 are rare, 21-30 are epic, and 31-40 are epic"? 2. The biggest pleasure in reading game novels is upgrading, and the protagonist of this book has always been in a state of refusing to change skills. There is no overly detailed description of skills. All kinds of damage and cooldown are just passed by. Every time you upgrade, you will directly replace the previous skills. Especially when you change jobs, you will directly wash out the skills that have been described for a long time and replace them with skills that look high but are inexplicable.

The writing is a bit bland. How should I put it? It's a bit light and clear It's just that there isn't enough conflict in the plot, so there's not much to watch

I haven't updated for too long and no one is watching anymore.

It is simply beyond my imagination that you can write such a work with such a rare setting. It shows that your writing level is still very high. There may be an element of luck, but it cannot cover up your super talent. Such strength directly makes me get pink eye. How did you do it? Judging from your lack of design, you are already a god among gods with a collection of over 10,000. When I was looking for new books in the update order, I met a lot of small authors. You are like a bright star, and you make me stand out like a mouse who is short-sighted and unable to recognize masterpieces. Same, but you won't be able to go far if you write like this. You can stabilize your performance with your strength. When your reputation is bad, you can just open a trumpet, but you still can't create a complete different world. After all, you will only become weaker the more you write, and no one's imagination is infinite.

You didn't use any of the basic settings I wrote at that time, and deleted my comment. I was so angry that I wrote another plot setting post, explaining in detail what you were missing or what you could have, but I didn't post it because you wanted to create a real different world of your own. I just had to wait for a boomerang. After reading your last update, it turned out to be exactly the same as what I ordered at the time. It seems that I It's quite predictable The explosion of players' combat power has nothing to do with the same starting point. I said at the time that you add combat power shackles, conduct a closed beta, and add internal fighting among players, then other players can play a role in promoting the plot in reality, and it will not collapse even if they don't have writing skills. As a result, you didn't pay attention to what I said at all. Since you don't have any set plan, why not use it? I said that not only can you enrich your story content, but I can also become your loyal fan. Why not use it? It turns out that you want to create a real different world! You can't write anymore, it's even more of a classic. What kind of things can I write without you? Is it purely based on monster types and treasures? Not only is the basic setting missing, your plot setting is also zero. The latter is more fatal than the former. After all, there are relatively few basic settings in data-free texts. Wouldn't it be good if you add the basic settings I mentioned to increase the lower limit of writing and relieve the creative pressure? Anyway, adding these settings will not have a big impact on your content, and you can also add some numbers and storylines to make your other world look more real. When I saw that the author trusted me so much, he pointed out what plot settings you could add. It has no impact on the plot. On the contrary, it can increase your description of the plot, make your other world more real, make your story context clearer, and greatly reduce the difficulty of your creation. Unfortunately, you want to create a real other world story! The most regrettable thing is that I pointed out at the beginning that you had no outline at all, but you seemed to deny it. After all, you deleted your comment, and I forgot what you specifically said, but now it turns out that it really wasn't there, otherwise I wouldn't be able to write more than 100 chapters. Your outline shouldn't just be about professional treasures and monsters, right? I see in your review that the story is not connected well, so there is still a little bit of storyline. Maybe my understanding is different from yours. This is not actually called an outline. I call it a draft. After all, an outline requires a complete setting and a more detailed storyline, and a draft only needs to write some items.

This is a eunuch, so ungrateful

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