The Socially Anxious Witch in the Apocalypse

The author tried to create a socially fearful beautiful girl who kills people without blinking an eye, and used this contrast to create cuteness. However, the author may have a one-sided understanding of social fear, and the portrayal of social fear is too simple. The main manifestation of the protagonist's social fear is to squat on defense with his head in his arms: when the enemy comes, he squats on defense, when he opens up, he squats on defense, and when his teammates speak, he squats on defense. From the reader's point of view, the protagonist is either a sociopath or simply mentally retarded. He has the kind of intellectual defective beauty of a village fool who says, "You can't see me when I squat down." Another shortcoming of the author's monotonous portrayal is that the protagonist has no spirituality. Referring to "Rock of Loneliness", why does Pochi make people feel lively and cute despite being socially fearful? Because she has a lot of inner drama, all the things that cannot be expressed through communication with others are all expressed in Boqi's rich and funny inner drama. As for the protagonist of this book, he has nothing but fear in his heart. He is monotonous and boring from the inside out. How can this character be popular? Secondly, in order to create the protagonist's social fear, the author deliberately made the protagonist not communicate with other people. This leads to a problem, that is, as the protagonist, he is outside the plot of the story. From the beginning to the end, the protagonist is confused, always being plotted, and always forced to participate. The most outrageous thing is that after being attacked, he does not even understand what is going on. Knowing information and not actively attacking others, and not knowing anything and just waiting for others to come to you, the former is peace-loving, and the latter is frustrating Sun Tzu. In the early days, there was a little mind-reading follower. Even if the protagonist was afraid, he could understand other people's thoughts and participate in the plot. However, for some reason, the author sent the little follower away. If you want to create a flawed protagonist, it's best to arrange a teammate next to her who can make up for the flaws. For example, Hong Xia is with Pochi. If the protagonist is unwilling to participate in the plot, there must be someone who can force the protagonist to participate. Otherwise, based on Pochi herself, she would not join the band at all, and the story of "Rock of Loneliness" would never happen in her lifetime Besides, the fun part of this article is mainly about being invincible and killing people without blinking an eye. This is done well and is one of the advantages of this book. But repeating similar scenes too many times will inevitably lead to aesthetic fatigue. But compared to the previous shortcomings, this can only be said to be insignificant.

To be honest, I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 80. It has advantages and disadvantages. For example, less than three months after the end of the world, the first boss is stronger than the protagonist who knew magic before the end of the world, and he actually has twelve combat teams with a lot of guns and explosives. According to the description, Chi Wanning was killed a week after the end of the world, and then awakened his abilities and became a state similar to being dead but alive. He started from scratch and endured a super heavy rain in about two months to build this game. Such a team went all the way to the scenic spot to prepare to build a base. This experience was more of a protagonist than the protagonist. I couldn't understand how she did it. It felt like her configuration was set for the sake of setting. A combat team that was one level stronger than the survivors in the scenic area, firearms and equipment that was one level better than the protagonist's bow and crossbow, and the ability to even ban the protagonist. It was a bit inconsistent to put them all together to form a boss that lasted two months in the apocalypse. It did feel lengthy and boring to read. Another thing is that the army sent 60 people to rescue the protagonist. My personal understanding is that he is a person who can predict the end of the world. Only sending 60 people is a bit small. This is too little attention. Also, what I don't understand from the book is that these 60 people walked there? There was no description of any vehicles, and there were only 35 people left at the scenic spot. They actually carried at least 18 drones on their backs. The drones + the rifles on the drones + their own load of ammunition and supplies, marching on foot despite super heavy rain and attacks by mutated animals and plants. These 35 people were really better than Captain America. Also, the colonel decided not only to save the protagonist, but also the survivors. His behavior was good, but I don't understand how 35 people could save thousands of people? When we arrived, 25 people died, and we couldn't even protect ourselves. Shouldn't we prioritize completing the mission? Didn't you mention the importance of the target person when you accepted the mission? It feels weird here, and the plot development is not reasonable. Of course, if you want to see the social horror witch trembling while killing, I think the author's writing of the protagonist is quite good, and the writing style is also good. Maybe he is a novice when it comes to military or something? Some details may not make sense, but overall it reads well.

The plot begins to collapse in the mid-term, or in other words, there are signs of it in the early to mid-term. Kill those who offend you, and kill those who don't offend you. If you are in the wild, if you don't like it and feel malicious, kill it. In other people's territory, if it doesn't look good, kill them. Eyes, kill them if they are malicious. Obviously, when you go to Shelter No. 1, Everyone must visit the territory, especially Lin Jiujiu, that Pei Xiao Meow, she was originally intended to follow the protagonist, but she ran away halfway and implicated the protagonist, that Lin Jiujiu, no brain to cause trouble, the protagonist has no brain to protect, merciless, fishing and law enforcement, you have no evil intentions, so I will attract you, and use you to help my friends evolve, especially in Utopia, poisonous, you are here, I will help you resolve your grudges, you may Say you are strong and don't accept this favor, OK, someone invited you to the wedding, something happened, and they weren't allowed to leave, so you felt malicious Gaba killed a few people, the person in charge is here, I saw you gave my boss's daughter a wedding dress, It's considered a favor to us. Don't do anything and let people leave. Forget it. It's enough to give you face. No, then Lin Jiujiu exploded and started to mess with others. Sharks for other people's brothers, sharks for common people, and sharks for all kinds of innocent people. They want to be killed. Lin Jiujiu, no, you have to watch my good friend Lin Jiujiu kill you. If you don't move, you will die. If you fight back, I will be wronged. I will kill all of you. One-sided standards. The man said, you stay with Lin Jiujiu, you go. , It's not okay, although I beat you, but you have affected him, it's all your fault, what is this in reality, the old lady said, why my family didn't go to Tsinghua University, it must be because your electromagnetic signals have affected my family, you can't use electromagnetic signals, you must move away, it's a real social fear.

The level of chaos is too high, and villains are everywhere. In the final analysis, it has been less than a year since the end of the world, and there are still so many survivors and shelters. The speed of the collapse of order and people's hearts is too exaggerated. And the main apocalyptic disasters are disasters from the natural environment. As a result, they do not unite to deal with the disasters, they only know about robbery and self-interest, which makes people not feel like what modern society looks like after a disaster. An unofficial reward can be responded to by tens of thousands of people. You can imagine how many survivors there are. To be able to support so many people alive, at least the resources will not be too small. Under such circumstances, there are still tens of thousands of people casually risking their lives for this bounty of wealth. No one has doubted the credibility of this kind of company and directly went up to deliver it. It is really incredible. We strongly suspect that this apocalyptic disaster is not only caused by changes in the environment and biology, but also by a worldwide intelligence fall. Otherwise, it cannot be explained that so many people who survived have become brainless. Humans are not animals and only know how to fight and kill. It is recommended to add a patch later. For example, the doomsday will lead to a loss of intelligence, and the wisdom evolved by humans will gradually degrade and turn into beasts.

Good guy, the protagonist is not suffering from social phobia. You are suffering from social phobia. As long as I kill everyone I talk to in the future, I won't have to socialize anymore.

After reading so many apocalyptic articles, I understand a truth. If the apocalypse comes, I can't be the same person as the protagonist, because I don't have the aura of the protagonist, and I can't be one of the survivors, because my brain is normal, and I can't be a villain, because I'm not blind and have no ambition. In the end, I am only suitable to be a zombie.

Pink long hair Su Miao

I was deceived by a scumbag and became penniless. Now I am divorced and have two children. My spirit has been hit. Now my mental state is worrying. After reading your article, I feel that my youth is back and my mental state is much better. I hope you can update it soon. This is saving my life.

It can be seen that in the end of the world, Porchi-chan has accumulated a lot of supplies and hid in a small villa shivering. Then from time to time, other survivors would come and try to snatch her away and rape her. Then she would tremble while holding the crossbow biubiubiu and shoot one arrow at a time 😁

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