Star Wars: the Rise of Mandalore

After reading the latest chapter, I felt that the plot was too slow, with no sense of tension or expectation. If I finish this work, I will continue to read it, but most of the time, one update per day is indeed a bit too little, so I don't enjoy reading it. The biggest problem is that Star Wars-like novels have original flaws. The writing style is not enough, and the setting cannot be used to make up for it. People will say that the word count is too low, and the original setting must be respected, which is a test of writing ability.

Yes, the pragmatic Mandalorian, who changes his foreign strategy based on his own actual interests, is much more pleasing to the eye than those extreme gadgets that are about to become a mindless space Sparta 😏

I am the author of "The Empire Begins with the Fourth Scourge". I saw your message on my book list and clicked in to read. It is a new Star Wars novel! I have sent you a recommendation for a separate chapter in my book. I hope the results will be better and I can continue writing.

Fellow Mandalorians, for a long time, our tribe was forced to submit to others and suffered countless sufferings and humiliations! The oppressors of the inner circle use flowery religious language to cover up their evil deeds! But its underlying motivation is as despicable and shameful as that of a slave trader. We were once despised and cursed by others, but the time for change has come! Let us remember this turning point in history, and we will escape oppression and win freedom! The time for change is now, Mandalore rises today! The ashes of our enemies will pave our way, this is the right path!

Plenty of martial virtue😏😏😏

Color partitioned star map, intuitive and clear

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I'm really convinced. The protagonist, a clear-eyed college student in his previous life, traveled through Star Wars for three years and began to feel that he understood the Force very well. If we regard Star Wars as a movie, we as the audience naturally feel that the Force is about cultivating immortals and understanding the way of heaven, and that the creators draw on our culture. This is too obvious. The Force is nothing more than the way of heaven in the universe. But if we treat Star Wars as a real world, especially if the protagonist travels back in time and becomes a local, then from the perspective of the protagonist, can we still talk nonsense like "No one knows the Force better than me"? This is ridiculous. Just like after reading twice about the immortal cultivation techniques in a novel, the protagonist traveled back in time and felt confident that his mind and understanding surpassed everyone in the novel, but his skills were not enough.

Every time I think of the Death Star in Star Wars that shot an entire planet, and then a group of Jedi warriors took a light tube and chopped it around in slow motion, it was not as fast as a child holding a wooden knife, and I wanted to laugh! If any swordsman in a martial arts movie were to kill anyone, I don't know how many Jedi would be hacked to death!

The scene with Anakin's xylophone was a failure. Force vision can only see fragments, not what happened. If the other person understands a little bit, he will feel that the protagonist is making up a story.

Tri-Wing S-91x Pegasus Starfighter Do you think this appearance looks good or not? If everyone likes it, I will integrate it into the subsequent plot.

It's also a space opera, but it feels more difficult to write a Star Wars fanfic than a Warhammer one. It's not easy for the author to write it in such an immersive way! Come on!

There's not much passion, and there aren't any twists and turns. It's basically just a chat, and then you'll get a few more chats, and then it's over, and the protagonist's development is getting slower and slower.

Wow, this is my first time seeing Star Wars fan fiction.

It seems that this book cannot escape the inevitable eunuch ending of the Star Wars book.

The whole book is very bland without any passion, and the writing is very bland at best. The protagonist is more like a tool for the author to give every character in the drama a good ending, and fulfill the charity dream of the whole galaxy. Sometimes imperfection is perfection. Let the damn character die, put aside the plot of helping others, and respect the fate of others.

I read the introduction of this book as sir, this way😃

I came here after the Fourth Disaster, and I saw a few pretty good ones, which should be based on the power struggle genre. I suggest that we can take advantage of the galactic civil war to develop the industrial system of the protagonist faction, the Mandalorians. The strength of the Mandalorian army is not much worse than that of the Clone Legion, but it lacks a powerful fleet and logistical support.

How should I put it... The Chinese language in it, and the dragon's teeth, I think it's awkward... This is the right way... There are some other things... It's really stupid and embarrassing...

When I see a chapter title with dozens or hundreds of pictures, it makes me sick, and I have no desire to read it at all...

My favorite in the Star Wars series is Lords of the Sith. It is said that the Jedi and Sith hate this book and even regard it as a poisonous weed. The direction of this book seems to be to develop third-party forces and pick up the Jedi gift bag after No. 66. In Lords of the Sith, the fall of the Galactic Empire is imminent. The Sith Baron leads the last clone army to reorganize the empire. To put it bluntly, it is to pick up the gift bag after the fall of the Sith. It may be used as fertilizer for this book if you recommend it to the author.

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Can you add some details 🤓

Really resurrected, or come back to see?

Ginger lives! Ginger lives!

It has laid the groundwork for 400 chapters and is about to enter the wonderful climax. The writing is really good, hey (~_~💧)

What's going on recently? Why are so many novels that have been discontinued for months or even a year updated?

Incense ! ! ! 🍚 I was looking for similar books, and found that I had ordered them. I found a corpse in the bookshelf, and it was actually raised to death. Fortunately, I only ordered chapter 178.

See the introduction as sir thisway

May the force be with you. Happy Force Day