Star Wars: The Rise of Mandalore

I am the author of "The Empire Begins with the Fourth Scourge". I saw your message on my book list and clicked in to read. It is a new Star Wars novel! I have sent you a recommendation for a separate chapter in my book. I hope the results will be better and I can continue writing.

Fellow Mandalorians, for a long time, our tribe was forced to submit to others and suffered countless sufferings and humiliations! The oppressors of the inner circle use flowery religious language to cover up their evil deeds! But its underlying motivation is as despicable and shameful as that of a slave trader. We were once despised and cursed by others, but the time for change has come! Let us remember this turning point in history, and we will escape oppression and win freedom! The time for change is now, Mandalore rises today! The ashes of our enemies will pave our way, this is the right path!

Plenty of martial virtue😏😏😏

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I'm really convinced. The protagonist, a clear-eyed college student in his previous life, traveled through Star Wars for three years and began to feel that he understood the Force very well. If we regard Star Wars as a movie, we as the audience naturally feel that the Force is about cultivating immortals and understanding the way of heaven, and that the creators draw on our culture. This is too obvious. The Force is nothing more than the way of heaven in the universe. But if we treat Star Wars as a real world, especially if the protagonist travels back in time and becomes a local, then from the perspective of the protagonist, can we still talk nonsense like "No one knows the Force better than me"? This is ridiculous. Just like after reading twice about the immortal cultivation techniques in a novel, the protagonist traveled back in time and felt confident that his mind and understanding surpassed everyone in the novel, but his skills were not enough.

Every time I think of the Death Star in Star Wars that shot an entire planet, and then a group of Jedi warriors took a light tube and chopped it around in slow motion, it was not as fast as a child holding a wooden knife, and I wanted to laugh! If any swordsman in a martial arts movie were to kill anyone, I don't know how many Jedi would be hacked to death!

It's also a space opera, but it feels more difficult to write a Star Wars fanfic than a Warhammer one. It's not easy for the author to write it in such an immersive way! Come on!

The scene with Anakin's xylophone was a failure. Force vision can only see fragments, not what happened. If the other person understands a little bit, he will feel that the protagonist is making up a story.

Tri-Wing S-91x Pegasus Starfighter Do you think this appearance looks good or not? If everyone likes it, I will integrate it into the subsequent plot.