God, Please Sing

The title of the book is very good, the introduction is very attractive, the first three chapters are a bit boring, and the fourth chapter starts to make people complain. Your first chapter is all nonsense... Why don't you throw out the god settings at the beginning? A bedding that is too long is not a good bedding, and you have to see if you have the ability to do it even if you are a grass snake and a gray line. In the second chapter, no background is explained again. At first, I thought it was an ordinary world, but there are extraordinary beings, but they still don't explain anything. What's even more speechless is that since the male protagonist is in an extraordinary world, he is still atheistic... In the third chapter, he starts to talk pornographically. You go and ask someone to straighten it out, but they don't get angry and turn it over to you. Two hundred thousand and send an invitation letter to you who has no ability... If you write this to be funny, you can show more Chen's exaggeration and then ask Chen to call the captain to hear that the captain is disdainful of the male protagonist's ability. Then, after Chen talks about the male protagonist's ability, his attitude changes 180 degrees and asks the male protagonist to join. Then the first incident is about women again. The beautiful school belle falls in love with you who is nothing special. The rich second generation harbors a grudge against you and plots against you. You awaken your extraordinary ability and pretend to be cool... It's the same routine from ten years ago. And it was obvious that he was going to be a good-for-nothing counterattack stream, but in the fourth chapter, it was shown that there is a strong father behind the protagonist. The protagonist's love and strength are inseparable from his father... Then in chapter 12, the women came one by one, and the little villain hadn't seen the shadow yet! Shouldn't this kind of little villain who harmed the protagonist be defeated by himself in three chapters? ! In the end, after chapter twelve, the protagonist just focused on flirting with girls... Really, the first small incident has not been finished (not counting becoming Kun, the first small incident should have five or four parts: cause, development, turning point, climax, and ending)! You procrastinator, why don't you take revenge first and then flirt with girls? Your parents are both big guys, the second generation of top-notch extraordinary people, with a bunch of thighs behind you, the gods are holding you as thighs, and there are clouds of beauties around you, so you are not sure about the Li family? If you can't, beg your wife to let her investigate for you, and then go and take revenge yourself, but nothing happens at all... What's the point of the woman hitting him or borrowing someone else's hand? Instead of going up and saying something sarcastic and sarcastic, I would say that I am the protagonist of a cool novel...

The update is too slow. It takes several days to write one chapter. How can this be done?