Versatile Mage: I Awakened Nine Stars

The protagonist is too weak now, can't he be made stronger?

The author's writing is really good. Among so many fanfics, it is considered excellent. The characters are well portrayed. Many people say that the protagonist is too useless, but I want to say that this is real and makes me feel more involved. In fact, the protagonist is not bad. There is no innate invincibility. He has grown up step by step. Other fanfics have become fat in one bite, which is pure upstart behavior. I am very pleased that the protagonist has very upright views. For example, when stealing bird eggs, he will think about the safety of the people at the foot of the mountain. At the ruins, he is willing to give the bird eggs to Tang Yue. The protagonist's relationship with a woman does not have a purpose at the beginning. Because it is close to a purpose, I think it is not love, it is just lust. The author above wrote it well😌, I think their thinking is well written, and 500,000 people will be As a bait, he wrote about the cruelty of officials and the awareness of the overall situation. As the saying goes, kindness does not lead to soldiers. A battle in Bo City is a war, and there is no so-called intellectual behavior The female characters are well written. There is no so-called love at first sight, so it can be regarded as a gradual process. Not dressed in white, and then a group of fan girls were screaming. Jiang Shaojun's plot is not as good as the original text, and so is the vampire clan. The ruins dungeon is well written and very attractive. The author must have learned a lot about "chaotic" writing. The highlight of the original work is that he entered the dungeon everywhere before the school competition, and then exchanged schools (overseas), as well as being a teacher in a famous European school and local wars. It is very attractive. The author must have his own thinking🤔, unlike other authors who write without thinking and copy a lot of the original plot, which is very good. The author writes a lot about totems very well. In fact, in the original work, many adventures and disasters are not without the help of totems, starting from the black snake saving Hangzhou to the Holy City and Qinglong 🐉 jointly resisting the angels. However, fan fiction has an average attitude towards totems, rarely describing them, and more about personal power (the problem is that the writing is average and cannot be felt). Although this seems very cool, it does not conform to the logic of the original work. Therefore, the talent of the protagonist is infinitely strengthened, and the combat power is very poor. Without the writing style of a great god, he still dares to write. Even if the great god "chaos" is somewhat broken in the later period, his writing style is good and everyone can accept it. And the protagonist takes a group of different totems around, wouldn't it be cool? The protagonist of this book is an indigenous person. Many readers like to read it from a God's perspective and think that the protagonist has done many things wrong. But the problem is that the protagonist is not a time traveler and knows the plot. Of course, this will also lead to insufficient enjoyment. Although it has some flaws, in any case, this is a very good fanfic. I think the author has very upright views and has a certain understanding of society. Treat the essence of things equally (the old man on Tianshan Mountain, so he said the copy is well written 🙂) I hope the author can persist in writing more than 1 million words, or even more than 2 million words. Come on💪, don't care about other people's opinions and be firm in your own ideas. Looking forward to 😁😜🙂😆

Damn it, the author's talent is really perverted. Others' breakthroughs are 7×7, and then they are multiplied by 7. Then the author's breakthrough is multiplied by 9. The first level is inconspicuous, the middle level is nearly half as strong as the opponent's high level, and directly more than half as high as the super level, haha.

The main character's talent is like fucking shit. I really don't understand how the main character feels so aggrieved. I can't stand this book anyway.

It's better for time travelers to know where to go if there are resources in the plot. The natives have no sense of substitution and their thinking is solidified. This talent makes them want to vomit. If Qixingzi should have been at a high level long ago, he still meddles in his own business. This world has always been about the weak and the strong. There is no power. You are nothing. When you are dominated by the strong, you can only obey. Lanyang City's Suzaku Heritage of Earth Fire, and Xia Island's Earth Holy Spring Haidongqing. Jiang Feng, Xiao Yan Ji, tyrant Huang Lei. The inheritance of the ancient king of the ancient capital can ask Old Man Bao to take action and use the prophet to predict his son's life as the Holy Spring Envoy of the trading place. Yes, these resources plus the fusion of two and three series of stars, the natural fusion of magic, and the natural talent of the protagonist, have advanced to a higher level early. Unfortunately, the protagonist is a native or mentally retarded, and does not know how important power is. There are too few attempts in more than 200 chapters. He was also involved in a lot of troublesome things. At least the high-level players dared to risk their lives when they went out to run for the mid-level players. You should do whatever it takes to gain power, and not meddle in other people's business. Most of the people who die have something to do with the protagonist, especially Bo City. As long as it doesn't endanger you, don't worry about it. See how much trouble it brings to you.

The indigenous protagonist of the same novel has basically no brains 🙂

The funniest thing is that you can die over and over again, die over and over again, but you can't die. Are you trying to be sensational? I just feel bored.

The author's writing style is good, and the writing is okay, but the plot is abrupt and bitter. I won't tell you if it doesn't make you feel good, it's still disgusting to watch, so do your own research!

Brother, Quanfa, it's not easy to have hundreds of chapters without eunuchs. According to your evaluation, there is no good book in the world that can pick out thorns and make it impossible to read.

There are many female protagonists in this book!

The writing is okay, but after reading it, it's a bit strange. Is the protagonist an indigenous person? After rebirth, I make money from the futures market, then buy resources, and enter the Pearl Academy to seduce Ding Yumian... To put it mildly, the idea is a bit too clear 😰

After browsing through it quickly, let alone the frustrating feeling, I just felt that the new setting of Yumian was strange, something that was not found in the original work.

What you wrote is so frustrating. There are no highlight moments in the forty photos.

This protagonist is so frustrated. He was so frustrated before his strength was improved, but he is still so frustrated after his improvement.

Paradise is so ridiculous. You think the country will miss such a good thing. If you don't control this kind of thing and leave it to others, isn't it stupid? It can be used as a base camp.

😍😍Potential to look good

The first point is that the indigenous literature does not attract the majority of readers. The second point is that the magic system of the protagonist is not very outstanding. The light system, summoning system, and plant system without displacement are not very attractive. After all, it is not good if you do not have a movement system. The light system needs to be super-level to show the power of this system. , The Summoning system is at best composed of more than 1v powerful beings, the Plant system is the controlled group, and the protagonist does not have the wind system, shadow system or even the displacement of the space system. The third point is that the protagonist has no arrangement to snatch resources other than Mo Fan, such as the armor of the ancient king.

The writing of "Pig's Knuckle" is very frustrating. I have been living in other people's calculations along the way, and the highlight moments are rarely described. Even if it's a pig's trotter, at least there should be more descriptions of pig's trotters fighting. Therefore, after reading so many chapters, there are always plots that are upgraded but don't show much strength, and then are suppressed again, which doesn't feel so attractive.

Well, what's more awesome is that the ex who was cheated on in the previous life is still ambiguous in this life.

Come on, author. Maybe the performance of the book is not very satisfactory, and the beginning may not be very attractive. But the overall rhythm of this book is very worthy of appreciation. Unlike most electronic pickles that generally take off immediately, this book is more of a simmer. The rebirth part is handled very well, skipping the repeated and complicated initial accumulation time of resources and avoiding quite a few errors. The Golden Finger arrangement is more comfortable, step by step, rebirth, nine stars, exquisite balls, Dunhuang inheritance, etc. There is no trance of reaching the sky in one step, only climbing step by step. I like this book very much, and I have given all my monthly tickets here. I am afraid that the author will not be able to support it, and the business will collapse halfway. I hope you can work hard and persevere until the end, and there will be good results. For the majority of book lovers, I urge you to read it slowly and enjoy it. Maybe everyone is overly sensitive to the Guozhao incident, or they can't stick with it because they haven't seen the fun part for a long time, but I want to say that the charm of this book lies in the later period. As long as you are willing to keep reading, you can always discover its charm.              ——

In fact, this book is still okay, and it is okay to read. Don't be discouraged, the author. Work is work. Try to finish this book. I feel that I can probably write another one million words and three or four hundred chapters. You can open one or two new copies after the World University Competition. I have no objection to the graduation mission of finding Moth Girl. That ability can indeed be used to protect important personnel of the 404 Chamber of Commerce. Then, for example, things like exploring the sea, Yunnan Worm Valley, Shennongjia Weird Tales, Daxinganling, Inner Mongolia's outer grasslands, etc. You can write about many monsters, such as the big octopus in the sea, the insect mother and giant snake in Yunnan. For Shennongjia, you can refer to the bear king, in the Daxinganling you can write about the tiger, or the cat-faced old lady, the Mongolian grassland looks like a worm, the wolf king on the grassland, and so on. I personally think that the combat power of these copies is about the monarch. Of course, I also think that there should be emperors in these dungeons such as Worm Valley, Daxinganling and Grassland. A brief description of these will give people a shocking and terrifying feeling, and the tasks do not need to be so difficult and dangerous. Anyway, that's all for now. I think this book is okay. Don't be discouraged, the author. It's worth reading. (Unconsciously, it's almost 370 words long.)

The author's writing is very good, and it is already very good in the daily flow. You don't need to worry about those xxs who are dissatisfied with the protagonist's talent. After all, the genres are different, come on!

Is there no change in the mid-level summoning? And no new map will be developed as the strength increases.

This vampire looked inexplicably uncomfortable.

It was okay at the beginning, but after Chapter 100 I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist took a bunch of people, most of them were intermediary mages. Their highest cultivation level was only high-level, and they were all beautiful women. As a result, they went to the wild and restricted areas to commit suicide. Either they met the super villains or the monarch-level mages. Creatures, every time everyone saves the day, forget it once, and several times in a row. Isn't this funny? According to normal logic, beauties like Mu Ningxue, Tang Yue, and Bai Tingting are either imprisoned and raped countless times, or a bunch of people are dead.

No more writing? Don't have to watch anymore? So long

Will you dismantle Mo Fan CP? It's not easy to write even after it's broken down, and I feel a bit disconnected. After all, the original text is Heroes of the Dragon Kingdom.

I've given you 19 monthly passes. It's not too much to add more.