People Are in Death, Unlimited Sword Control at the Beginning

Your idea is interesting, but I just want to say, you have been the vice-captain for almost 10 years, and you are still squatting in the team building. Isn't it funny? The vice-captain has to go to the first team with the captain to attend the captain meeting. Even if some captains are occasionally absent, and as the vice-captain may not be able to see Mr. Shan unless there are special circumstances, he should have copied all the captains and vice-captains by now, okay? You are so speechless

The biggest poisonous point is the original female protagonist. This is what all fans are taboo about, but she is the one who drives the plot.

New chapter: Pig's trotters bring Byakuya and Rukia together, if you can't accept it, don't come in, I'll give up first 😤😤😤

Byakuya and Rukia have recognized each other. Tell you, the elder, that you agree. There's nothing wrong with that. People have made arrangements for you even before they've seen you. Why do you have such a big face? Byakuya and his wife are very affectionate. I beg you, but you just don't want to save his wife because you can't stand it. Instead, you go back and arrange a house for her. It's disgusting!

The typos are not corrected, the settings are overturned at will, and the original work is basically ignored, just to get praise and praise. Shen Nong was poisoned to death in the fifth chapter of Budao, and was forgotten.

Lingwei is stronger as he moves forward. Captains are ranked third to first class. Why are they stronger as they move further back? You should at least check the information. This kind of information is easy to find.

The Shinigami is all about spiritual pressure, and spiritual pressure is the way to go.

Even though it was rewritten, I still can't read it. The author didn't read the original work! ! ! When I was writing the previous book, I pointed it out that Kisuke Urahara had never been the vice-captain, only the third seat, but this book still hasn't changed! ! ! The position of vice-captain is not because he is the strongest after the captain, but because the captain chose it himself! ! !

What kind of garbage plot will replace Aizen? Then why not replace one household, replace all the characters, and then just do it and call it a day.

The settings are all based on the cloud, and you won't correct any typos. Don't write any novels with your attitude.

The protagonist's wife is quite weird. She is sick and crazy. She needs to find a solution instead of listening to others' advice. Find a beautiful girl from Death for the protagonist. For example, I liked Retsu, and then when I came to Byakuya's wife, I didn't even think about it. I didn't want to save him and just gave him his sister-in-law Ruki to be Adam's wife. This is a double standard. Anyone who has seen Death knows who Byakuya is. He is very devoted to Hijin. Even if he sees Lucia, he only sees Hijin's shadow. Kaden and Hijin agreed to protect Rukia. This is one of the reasons why many people like Byakuya. This led to the initial setting of the protagonist and wife of this novel to have the same feelings as Byakuya. As a result, Byakuya's own character design was directly smashed and trampled to pieces. What's the point of denying himself? For example, there is a kind of thing that is exactly the same as the third young master of the Tang family. In the early stage of creation, he recognized passion and then later negated the early efforts and fixed his personality as single-mindedness.

The plot flows, there are no unexpected developments in the later stages, and the protagonist is the same

After reading thirty chapters, I can't even figure out the author's basic settings. It's a crazy second setting. Could the second team deputy be Urahara Kisuke? Can the binding number be written incorrectly? Did Isshin appear on the scene 200 years ago? The Lingwei level also changes from high to low? This is only a problem in the first few chapters. If you don't want to check it, it makes it difficult for people to believe that this book can be written well. After scrolling through the comments, sure enough, the following ones are even more poisonous.

I don't deny the Bailu Party, but Rukia herself is prone to guilt. Her sister died and Dabai took her as his concubine, and Dabai himself would not agree. Rukia herself, even if you explain it clearly, you will still think of her as a substitute. Dabai never married anyone else after Feizhen's death, and Rukia only accepted him as his adopted sister. He just loved Feizhen alone. Are you trying to buy and sell by force?

What a waste of my time. The main character is just a replacement for Xiang He in the script, and his abilities are almost the same! If you don't want to be your son-in-law, you'll even change your last name! Nausea

It looks like chocolate, but it turns out to look like chocolate💩

For example, Bleach has many storylines, which are novel and interesting for people who don't have time to watch anime. But after the protagonist is semi-invincible, he does everything with his own hands and directly uses the character to make the protagonist participate in the plot. From then on, the book collapsed. Damn, can't the protagonist watch the show? Different plots! The character design is broken, the ending of the story is similar to the original work, and the protagonist is just a fool.

Although the process is like this, the author really has no talent for telling stories! It's not like other people can write ups and downs just by buying a dish.

Just asking, have you considered that the monk knows your real name and the cloister knows your abilities? Basically, the four nobles absolutely know your abilities.

Before it was put on the shelves, I doubted that the author had ever watched Death. The setting was completely changed. After it was put on the shelves, it was no different from a licking dog. Was it written by AI?

How can I put it this way? The early stages of this book were okay, the growth of various characters, and the plot recommendations were pretty good, but after half a million words, it started to fall apart quickly. Implementing subjective opinions is really too much. I said before that you are not my vassal, and I respect your choice. What follows is that you selectively ignore people you don't like, and deliberately arrange cp, which can be regarded as one of the poisonous points. The rest makes me feel more uncomfortable, Firstly, the classification of Lingwei at the beginning was not in line with the original work, but if you ignore it, you can barely read it. Secondly, the various subjective opinions were added later, which instantly made this fan from second-rate readable to third-rate. It looked very uncomfortable, as if the author was obscene and just for his own pleasure. The third is the plot arrangement. The first part is fine. Most of them are training and fighting, which looks good. However, after reaching the peak of strength, various conflicts and IQ battles begin, which makes the protagonist's IQ fall off the line. It mainly uses a lot of pen and ink to write some unclear meanings, which makes people feel like a waste of subscription. Generally speaking, if you can stand this, you can keep reading. Generally speaking, I would like to give you some advice: Don't show off your IQ. This is a taboo in novels because it is really difficult to write. Don't arrange cps randomly, this is a big taboo among fans, because there will always be people who are dissatisfied. This is also my subjective opinion. It is basically all criticism, but that's all. The rest of the content is still good.

It went crazy as soon as it was released. The father-in-law ordered someone to kill his daughter in order to keep the protagonist... What kind of brain circuit did you have to come up with such a plot that makes people laugh and cry? 🤔

The author has never seen Bleach, so the time can be mistaken. Where did the mobile game console come from more than a hundred years ago when the plot begins? It is understandable at all. It turns out that Ishida Uryu started working as a Quincy before his parents got married, and his father was not married at that time! The logic in many places does not make sense, the time is confusing, and there are too many places. If you have read Death's Recommendation, don't read it. Many places are the same as above. The protagonist here is not born, and the protagonist's partner has already started the plot. In addition, the author respects the original work. After all, people who read the novel are not reading your original plot, but the original plot and the adaptation time do not match up, and there is no logic. As mentioned, the children here are all adults before the father is married. This is really incomprehensible. You have to completely misunderstand the original drama. Love is okay, but don't change it randomly. If you want to change it, that's fine, but don't change it randomly. If you change it randomly, you can still accept it. After all, you have to have personal creation, but you can't treat readers as fools. The plot you are writing now is not timely and the characters are right. It doesn't add up, and the logic doesn't add up either. Now this plot has already started to use mobile phone game consoles in Japan in the 18th century. It's a mess, and then many things are in the back, in the front, and in the back. It's like you die of old age first, and then you get married and have children.

It's only Chapter 7 and we've already begun to mess with the settings and inconsistent abilities. As mentioned earlier, as a criminal army, you can't just walk around the streets. Otherwise, you would have copied all the Zanpakutō in Soul Society. This means that there is no way to analyze the Zanpakutō that you have never touched or seen. As a result, I was able to copy a weapon from another world just by thinking about it. If it makes you look like a clown, don't even think about relying on other anime elements to attract readers.

I don't know when, "IQ Online" became a dispensable label and the choice of a few authors I don't know when, looking at the choices of most authors, you came up with the idea of ​​writing yourself At every moment when inspiration strikes, you write down the creativity, looking forward to using this creativity to add to your own work Every time At a moment when you are not understood, you open your book and look at the protagonists and supporting characters, as if you have become them, and they have become your close friends And one day, you suddenly find this comment in the vast sea of books, and suddenly encounter this book, you may get a friend, get an understanding, and get some ideas...

I also specifically searched for Inaba Kageroza, and it turned out that he was the original creator of the animation team. The editing of the movie I watched was really bad, so he could just create the Soul King, so why bother? The Perfect Manifestation Techniques all over the street just take the Soul King fragments at will. The Shitan family are really pure clowns. A family has not figured out how to play the Soul King fragments for thousands of years, and a grassroots team has to figure it out. You can also copy the soul by collecting spiritual pressure, but what kind of carbon fiber can you use to make the body? Just use the Zengmu Swastika to get rid of the body. In stance battles and teammates attacking, no one can break the defense. Just collect the soul of the old man and start burning the Soul Society. The balance of the three realms will definitely be destroyed, and any purpose can be achieved.

That's it. It's a bunch of comments with mentality, it's better not to read it. Boss, don't read the comments. I'm secretly complaining about it and don't worry about the plot. I mainly want to see how you act cool, developed, gorgeous and handsome.

Finished? What about the heavens behind?

Are you writing a new book? In the latest chapter, the protagonist's name becomes Locke

In fact, it doesn't matter whether the early plot is to replace Xianghe or something else, but you can't just replace Aizen in more than 200 chapters. Aizen is the most important character in this drama. You can't write it like this. If even Aizen can replace him, then this book will become Long Aotian. What's the point?