My Loyalty Is Beyond Reproach

This book is much better than the last one; it's less exaggerated and stiff, but it still has its share of awkwardness. Also, I've noticed you really like to use other men's lust for the female lead's body to drive the plot, which is really off-putting. It's not that I'm being cuckolded, it's just that I find it disgusting that you enjoy seeing other men professing their love to your wife in front of you?

It's really good! In a society full of intrigue and backstabbing, who wouldn't want a loyal subordinate and a righteous brother? After seeing so many others hoarding all the benefits, seeing someone give to others has a unique charm. I don't think it's necessary to always portray the object of loyalty as a woman.

There's no need to read this author at all; I don't read any of his books anymore. In short, he's the kind of person who's all talk and no action. I keep trying to compare his data with the first set, but you have to consider that it's all about the historical context and luck—it's not something you can always have. Doesn't he know what kind of book he's writing?

A while ago, a guy criticized the book in a review, and the author retorted. This guy immediately retorted: "You old eunuch, who knows if you've made another blunder?" Now it really is abandoned. Laughable.

The brothel scenes will definitely lead many people to delete the book; it's better not to include them at all.

I wasted several days writing about something obvious, I should have just written about my senior and wife instead. (He died of poisoning.)

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The author's writing at the beginning wasn't particularly brilliant, but it was decent. However, the final brothel scene was utterly terrible. And yet, readers are still frantically asking for more. Doesn't the author realize that their writing has touched upon many readers' sore spots? Dude, your novel isn't even officially released yet, and you're already writing such a sloppy one.

The beginning was alright and got me hooked. But this brothel story, which has been going on for over ten chapters, is utterly bland and uninteresting. A slap-in-the-face trope has been going on for over ten chapters and it's still not over. If the author keeps going like this, all the readers who've accumulated so many will leave.

If the brothel scene isn't changed, it might be best to cut it to save time. The author has been padding the story every day during my few days off.