The True School of the Mystic Sect: What a Fearsome Leader

Breakthroughs don't increase lifespan, but rather decrease it. It's not some demonic art; it's simply an upgrade from the perfected Tai Chi. A renowned health-preserving technique, yet in your case, it only leads to loss, not gain. The higher the strength, the faster one dies, with lifespan doubled. Who could possibly succeed with such a system? Wouldn't old men like Master Mu all die instantly? What's the point of cultivation? Is it just a desperate attempt to die? This logic is infuriating!

Half-step to Shattering. It's that half-step again. Once you reach a certain level, that's it. Is this just padding the word count? Ranks 1-9. And then another half-step for each rank. That's equivalent to 18 levels. This is still martial arts; will it get even more subdivided later? What's "Perfect"? And then "Peak"?

Just half a step further... Does that mean there's more to come, like "perfect," "perfect," or "approaching the limit"? Wow, it's almost 2024 and there's still such a good novel! 😍

I used my phone to read a novel, and there was a writer who wrote a story about a protagonist. I thought about it for a moment and silently tapped the "❌" button.

Seeing the realm system is boring; it's the same old thing: half-step peak, half-step entry, half-step half-step. Is having a son also half-step? Is there a half-step barrier? What a mess.

It's well-written; I quite like this kind of carefree, whimsical style. Just please avoid any major plot holes. The protagonist is a transmigrator, but he's more like a character in a book who knows the plot, which is fine. However, in other worlds, the protagonist is just a background character; if this positioning isn't accurate, the story could easily fall apart.

Gu Long's novels aren't that idiotic, are they?

The word choice is somewhat flawed, and the writing style needs improvement. Everything else is fine.

It's really boring that Gu Long's novels still have martial arts levels of several grades.

The more he wrote, the more violent he became, resorting to killing at the drop of a hat.