The Pokémon Hunter Who Returns from the World of Monster Hunting

The writing is so abstract, I must have played with 🦐Tou Tai Dao

Everything else is fine, but the problem is that your elf writing can't describe the feeling between humans and elves, or the monster hunting template. The problem is that you and the equipment also have to handle the drama. The relationship between people is also not handled well. There is a brainless heroine showing off. I really feel that it is so childish and I can't stand it. The one who can go down is to watch it. The beginning was okay. I cast two votes and withdrew first.

This requires a strong shield sword monster.

Chapter 18 You hit Rukia so smoothly, but when the dragon was empty, you still let Nishiha grab Rukia. What did you think? Can you bear it? If it were me, I could chop it into 18 pieces on the spot. ! I can't understand it! It's so poisonous!

Lugia and Sheba poisoned me directly.

Is it possible? Under normal circumstances, you shouldn't know much about Monster Hunter as a game, but you should know a lot about Pokémon as an anime. The protagonist should not only know the names of Pikachu and Charizard, but also some of the plot. Moreover, the writing is too abstract, and it feels like there aren't many important main lines, it's all about the word count and the introduction of Pokémon.

It feels like the protagonist does not know how to exchange information when he travels from the real world to the world of Monster Hunter and enters the world of Pokémon. Monster Hunter hunters all know the information of their prey. The protagonist is like a flat-headed brother who only knows how to fight. Or in the real world, playing a game of Mowing Warriors until brain-burning people kill all the boss enemies in the way. Those who know how to change the world do not understand the information and do not want to know what weapons (props) are in this world.

The villain is very vivid, but the protagonist is not very interesting. The climax is always interrupted by himself. The mythical beast is stolen just before defeating the beast. The hero comes on the scene to save people, but instead allows the opponent to gain enough information. Even in the latest chapter, I only saw the successful revenge of the female villain. In the end, I guess she was let go.

In fact, the humans in Pokémon are just human-like Pokémon, a proper superhuman race. Among them, superpowers and psychics are very common, and top superpowers can rival Mewtwo. Not to mention these naturally special people, there are fighters among ordinary people who can crush Fighting-type Pokémon with their physical bodies. Among them, Xiaozhi, a super newbie, is just a healthy and lively ordinary elementary school student.

I remember the world of Pokémon. There was no reproductive compartment between Pokémon and humans🥵

The mythical beast that I defeated was snatched away by others. Stop writing it in such a disgusting way. People are saying this to speed up the plot. Who would want to watch it if I don't beat Shiba on the spot?

Add an original passerby:) This AI can't choose the style of painting.

Lugia was a high-ranking ancient dragon at the lowest level, and he was defeated by the protagonist who didn't even have the equipment? What did you take it for? He was defeated by Rayquaza with one move, but he ended up winning against Lugia. It was really nonsense.

When I got up there, I was very quick-witted. I took the sword, Iai, Climbing the dragon, and the cat cart. I had a set of silky small combos that were very smooth.

I felt a little displeased when I saw Lim losing her temper. It was too noisy. If there were more heroines, I would either follow them without thinking or stop making noise.

Character design of the protagonist (

The previous description of the battle was that there was no blood or wounds. The part about fighting Gyarados only hurt, had no wounds, and was invincible. I just want to say that since the element of monster hunting is written, don't avoid these things. It is quite a real world Pokémon. It does not necessarily have to be like in the anime, with powerful moves that are not bloody. And what is the strength of the protagonist? I didn't read it carefully, or is there any description? There are various combos before, he was just an ordinary person, and the armor of the monster hunter is a major feature. The combat is well written, and the daily routine is quite interesting. But how to write the borrowed plot? It's the Champions League, it's one-on-one, there are no weapons. 😦 If you have your own ideas, I won't tell you, and I recommend you to read the Monster Hunter book "Monster Hunter: Hunter's Notes". This is the best monster hunter I have ever read. Personally, in my opinion, Pokémon can be more daily and the system can adjust various potions and props. I think one-click reconciliation is not very good. I personally prefer to mix them. Fang took his time and then he had something to do with Lugia at the beginning and it was Chiri. The starting point was too high. The author had plans later. I didn't say it, but overall this book is still a good novel. Keep working hard There are not many people who write about this subject. I hope the author can stick to it. ＿＿＿＿ ||| ||! Come on! | ||

I don't understand it at all. May I ask my friends who are looking at it how they can continue to read it?

You really need to change the author's recent chapters. You need to get back to the protagonist as soon as possible. The previous chapters were not group elephant novels, but these chapters are all geared towards group elephant novels. The audience is completely different. I don't want to read these chapters. I want to bring the protagonist back to the main plot as soon as possible. This problem is really serious. You have already screened out the people who read the group text, and you are going to write the group text again to screen out the people who don't read the group text. Then who will read your book? You really have to change it, and you have to bring the protagonist back right away.

Watching Pokémon fandom without watching "Pokémon Hunter Returns from the World of Monster Hunters" is like not watching the Four Great Classics but Dream of Red Mansions. He cannot understand the inner elegant art of spring and snow, and can only see the superficial rhetoric. He is stuck there all of a sudden, and can only live a relatively failed life. ——5 cents a piece, so you can't get on the shelf?