Subversion of Konoha Begins with Refusal to Lead Pua

Uchiha Itachi is not the will of fire, nor does he have Danzo's thoughts, but a ready-made concept of peace with Uchiha characteristics that combines the thoughts of Hokage and Danzo.

Less analysis, more practical information. You are really good at water. I won't watch the opening of the Three Gorges Dam without you

If I wasn't too busy, I wouldn't even click on this book. I just realized that I have read your last book 🙂 The title of the book is very good, don't pick it up next time.

When I saw Chapter 18, I read every chapter carefully. At present, I feel that it is an above-average level for Naruto fans. It has two-dimensional jokes and a little humor. I will talk about the shortcomings in my opinion. Of course, it is for me personally. I am not pointing out blame. I just hope that the author can write better as he writes The characters have too many inner activities. There is too much analysis, such as F4, Shisui's section, and a long paragraph of analysis of the original plot. In fact, everyone who reads the fandom has their own understanding of the plot, and everyone knows the original work. There is nothing wrong with the written analysis, but it feels like being force-fed when reading it. It is recommended to leave some for readers to think about. In the space of the test, a lot of analysis is done in one sentence, which makes people a little tired. In addition, I would like to mention some points to pay attention to when writing female characters. Don't lick, don't be ambiguous. I won't talk about the ones without a heroine. If there is a heroine, I will put it in the middle and late stages. Don't describe too much in the early stage. Many authors write about the heroine. It collapsed, mainly because no matter how the plot is arranged, it can't hide the taste of a loser. Before, he was bright and majestic, resourceful and scheming, but when he met a woman, he turned into a whistling street kid. It's too disconnected. It must be written from a third perspective. Don't bring yourself in, it's easy to get excited.

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There are too many inner dramas between the protagonist and other characters. It's really tiring to watch and not enjoyable at all.

First hundred.

What is the relationship between Chika Fujiwara and the protagonist?

Are Qianye and Takumi old cousins ​​🤓

There is always one person who is against Konoha named Fujiwara Chiya😁