Those Years When I Was Touching Corpses on the Grand Line

Why spend so much time writing supporting characters? In the end, the supporting character couldn't survive. I really don't know what the author meant. Water is not like this.

It is recommended that the pickup mode be changed to automatically pick up within a certain range. You should touch them one by one until when. You cannot touch the ones killed by others, otherwise it is a bad rule. As for the ones you kill yourself... How many years do you plan to kill in terms of the current combat power? There is still a time limit for the drop rewards, which is quite embarrassing. What's the point of restricting the protagonist's strength development from all aspects? If the fan fiction has too many restrictions, it will not be fun.

To be fair, you've written 70 chapters, and the protagonist can't beat even a 5 million bounty player. With this level of cheating, the protagonist of Luffy Going to the Sea can survive for 20 million, and the protagonist doesn't have a decisive power, which is a big move.

The progression of the plot to killing the Celestial Dragons is too retarded. There is absolutely no need to kill them, just to show off. To save Robin is to save Robin and leave, or to use the Celestial Dragon's mental retardation to disgust Doflamingo. Watching the trap fall down, and after saving the person, without thinking of trying to trap the trapper, the Tianlong people casually killed him? Forget it, I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up.

It's getting more and more boring. It feels like the main character's goal is to be similar to a dragon. A person with such a golden finger turns out to be a passionate young man who loves adventure and peace. If it is wasted, it is better to give it to Blackbeard or Dover.

To be honest, it's too watery. Some useless attributes can be omitted directly, and the attribute introduction can also be removed. For example, strength, constitution, agility, etc., I think everyone knows what they are used for, so there is no need for you to explain them. If it is still so watery later, this book can only read the free chapters. Also, the pace of your book is too slow.

It's a mess, and I have to write down some data in every chapter. It's really ugly. Nausea

Author, what have you been writing about in the past two days? Isn't the main character a door fruit? You can kill the Celestial Dragon in seconds, just open the door and walk away. It's too blunt to suddenly pretend to be B. I told you before that the protagonist's strength should not be mentioned too quickly. Before defeating Lao Sha, he was killing more than 2 million pirates. Now he suddenly becomes a general, and Brother Ming has become trash. If you are growing your strength, take your time, if you are invincible, take less action. Have you read Arceus's Pirate Journey next door? It's the best pirate novel. The protagonist of that book is Invincible Ryuuzi. Please read more of other people's books. You wrote the growth stream well in the early stage, but now you suddenly start to engage in the invincible stream. So what do you do with your system? Are you planning to use Menmen Fruit to go to other worlds to engage in Zhutianliu? It's best not to open Zhutianliu, Pirates, you didn't even write clearly.

The usage of the Gate Fruit is too monotonous. If you don't know how to use it, just learn Uchiha Obito, how easy it is.

It's all water. This golden finger can obviously write very well, so it has to be suppressed.

Water God, this whole story is nonsense. I wish I could even write down the shape of a few hairs on my body in the attribute column, all kinds of delays for the sake of water. Poison doesn't count, I really don't have time to look at it.

The Nine Knights of God suddenly appeared in One Piece, each of them is not weaker than the general and the emperor. It is so amazing that the pirates are starting to collapse. To be honest.

A short composition? The whole article is full of water

It was okay before, but Robin hasn't looked that good since he appeared. What the hell are you wasting your expressions and working hard to become strong just to be someone else's free bodyguard?

The biggest failure in this book is not the dragon-killer, but Rayleigh helping the protagonist inexplicably! In the entire One Piece, Rayleigh is the only one who takes the initiative to help Luffy. The protagonist has nothing to do with Rayleigh, and even the crew members around him have nothing to do with Rayleigh. It is really unexpected that Rayleigh helps the protagonist.

Personally, I think Akainu will never cooperate with pirates.

The latest plot is actually pretty good, I think the dramatic conflicts are in place. The shortcoming is that the writing style is too sensational. I prefer that after the atmosphere is in place, the protagonist appears in a rage and starts killing, including the Celestial Dragons.

Does the author like this? If anyone is petrified by Black Beauty, I will laugh at him for the rest of his life😏😏😏

The Pirate King touched the corpse! , The Pirate King always fights and loses and will not die. Wherever he goes, there are a group of people with strong lives 🙂🙂

No. 63. I watched it in the past few days. Although there are some unreasonable things, it is generally good and the imagination is okay. It is considered food. It's said that you have a few fans.

The property panel appears too many times and is introduced every time. The traces of water characters are too obvious.

It's too verbose to write about one thing over and over again.

You are the world policeman, you go everywhere to save others, you have traveled through the world of pirates, and you are hanging on the wall, how should you live your life in a cool way?

In the world of seven kingdoms, I want ninety-nine

Doesn't the character card have Boya Hancock?

Isn't this book the same as One Piece: Throne of the Void? Isn't this plagiarism?

By the way, when will the Celestial Dragons be wanted? I've been looking forward to someone dragging the Draco to collect the bounty for a long time. 😁 Also, didn't you say at the beginning that your wish was to marry the princess (Wei Wei)? Where is Weiwei? 😃

A comma is a symbol in the middle of a sentence, indicating that the sentence is not over yet. A period is a symbol at the end of a sentence, indicating the end of a complete sentence. There are a lot of commas and line breaks throughout the text. Can the author correct the language problem?

It's been a bit boring since the protagonist's strength reached the Yonko General level.

The writing at the end was indeed much smoother, and I also finished reading it in Xiaoxiang, although it only took me one day to finish it. . . In the early stage, the strength increased too slowly, and the plot was boring, so I almost stopped watching it. The mid-term strength increase is too fast. There is not much transition from the weak Shichibukai to the strong Yonko. It may not be easy to digitize, and it has not appeared on the later panels. It's understandable to build a new navy with Zefa, but the high-level combat forces recruited are all pirates. Wouldn't it conflict with Zefa's justice? I hope to see the author's next pirate novel.