Cultivating the Martial Way: I Reach Enlightenment Whenever I Practice

Yeah, they're jumping around like crazy; the characterization is weird. The whole county town is like a primary school classroom.

It wants to fly before it can even walk! The plot is moving too fast, it's not even giving it time to develop!

The characters' attitudes towards life and interpersonal relationships seem a bit odd; they probably need some polishing.

Well, I've read a few chapters, and to be honest, it's not bad. It's a standard light novel, quite suitable for beginners, but veteran readers might want to switch to something else, otherwise it's really hard to keep reading.

As the second person in the book club, shouldn't you feature my post?

It feels like an absurd and lonely dream. At the end of the dream, the protagonist discovers that he doesn't belong to this world, then drifts away from it and falls into a deep sleep. The ending is actually similar to the author's previous book, with the protagonist always having a sense of alienation and incongruity with the world.

This is normal; all the power has returned to themselves, so it's impossible for them to just obediently be subservient citizens.

Each paragraph has too many words, making it difficult to read.

Shennong is dead... After watching for 15 minutes, he vomited 4 liters of blood and died on the spot.

I hope the author can surpass his previous works.