The Wondrous Journey of a Spirit-Tech Artisan

It's a very good idea, but it's a pity that I can't get out of the villain's insidious confrontation. If you are weak and are targeted by discrimination, if you are strong you are still targeted. Then you really don't feel the improvement in your strength.

It's very sad, it's a bit too girly, and I always get stuck in the plots and intrigues. I feel like there's something wrong with the description of the character's mentality.

I feel that the protagonist is also an anti-social talent in the original world. He will retaliate, get angry at every turn, want to kill people, and is very good at stirring up trouble. It also feels like it has the aura of attracting scum and scum.

The introduction is not very friendly 🙂. I quit immediately after looking at it for the first time. It should be streamlined.

Are there so few comments? Did no one comment or the comment was deleted?

Why should it be named? Isn't the original body traveling through time?