Mysterious Resurrection, Trapped Ghost Painting at the Beginning

The protagonist is too weak and should find more ghosts in the ghost paintings, and the wealthy lady is a bit ungrateful and poisonous. The protagonist saves Zhang Falcon's girlfriend but then sells it to the headquarters. The protagonist actually doesn't care about the true saint, and the headquarters joins without giving any benefits. It's better to go it alone.

There is a poisonous point. The protagonist helped Zhang Falcon rescue his girlfriend, but Zhang Falcon immediately turned against him and exposed all the information about the protagonist to the headquarters? This plot is poisonous, don't imitate the original novel in writing!

I have an interesting idea. The most special ghost in the book Mysterious Resurrection is the ghost eye, because only the ghost domain of the ghost eye can fill the timeline to achieve the effect of integrating the past and the present. If the protagonist can get a derivative ghost eye and then make a wish to the wishing ghost, so that the derivative ghost eye can obtain all the characteristics of the starving ghost in a short time, and then let the protagonist's eye be eaten by the ghost eye, then the protagonist will not get a ghost eye

Arranging family arrangements is simply extremely poisonous. The protagonist is not their child in the first place. The native father asked himself, who are you? Have you lost your memory? Even a fool would not believe it. I understand, what is the use of arranging this family? Isn't it okay to be an orphan or have no identity? Why don't you just go directly to the headquarters and apply for an identity?

Zhang Xun's place is really disgusting and poisonous. Damn it, what's the point of writing that? Even Gao Zhiqiang is not as good as him. He is still like the Holy Mother. He can do nothing but play with intelligence and brainlessness. Damn it.

If not those Gao Zhiqiang, why are there so many pictures in this article? Who is the protagonist? It's not interesting for you to introduce another small cannon fodder character like this.

Why are you writing about the woman who can't see the form?

After only reading a few chapters, I realized that it was really rubbish. The protagonist, the time traveler, is not a human, but a ghost. As long as I know the plot is good, it's okay. But the author writes Tim like a dog. Isn't it disgusting?

Anyone who has seen the mysterious resurgence knows what Gao Zhiqiang is, just kill him, there is no need

The article about Gao Zhiqiang is too long. Ask who is reading the book for him...

This is written in 666. It's really rare to write such a disgusting plot. Other fanfics may have poor writing skills, but your writing style is a little better, but the plot makes people vomit and is extremely poisonous to death.

Plan the outline well and try not to make big bugs. I hope the author can finish the book.

The beginning is good, but the rest is a bit unbearable. Apart from other things, do you have so much trust in the headquarters? You say everything? Just go through it and become a dog? You need Mr. Qin's bell, but after reading the latest chapter, I can see that you put aside your needs and don't have any trump cards. You didn't show yourself unreservedly to the headquarters and then be regarded as 🐶. It's really awesome. The Holy Mother is too lazy to talk about you, you are such a pure protagonist🤡

It's acceptable for you to spend one chapter introducing the liar, but it's not so good if you introduce six chapters at once. Moreover, it's not a valuable plot, it's just about seeing how people do evil for six chapters, which is a bit disgusting.

The author category is wrong. There are so many new books on light novels that you can't even get on the new book list. Put it in the suspense category. There are few new books there, so it can easily get on the list.

Chapters 18 and 19 are a bit too stiff. Others can make you dumb. If you just dig your heart out like this, even if it is a lie, there will be many flaws. Although Wang Xiaoming is very powerful in Mysterious Resurrection, when he refuses to become a ghost controller, there is nothing to be afraid of. As you become an alien, all Wang Xiaoming can use for you is his influence. The one who really has scruples is Mr. Qin. If he didn't attack you in the first meeting, he won't target you.

It's a good write-up for the time being. Time Traveler and Different Starts are all my favorite starts. Please update more and get a monthly pass.

The protagonist's abilities are also quite suitable for Quiet.