Invincible Across the Multiverse, Starting with Ajin

Also, let me remind the author. You write that Xiao Hei has no fighting ability because the protagonist stretches his hips too much. Then the next step should be for the protagonist to realize the problem and work hard to improve himself! But if you let the protagonist continue to mess up, then why did you write it or even raise this question repeatedly? Disregarding readers? Even if you want the protagonist to be severely beaten, you can't hint like this, right? This kind of operation can only poison readers, but it cannot increase the number of readers... What's more, I don't see the author's intention of wanting the protagonist to be beaten severely.

If you have demi-human abilities, why not start from a low-level world of martial arts? Immortality is an absolute advantage. You can infinitely try and make mistakes on the meridians, and finally optimize your own strongest skills. It is not a problem! And you are not afraid of the side effects of the technique. Anyway, you can refresh your status once you die. How great! The most important thing is that there are no meridians in martial arts skills that run to the brain, but the protagonist is different. Even if he gets a headshot, he can try again infinitely. Finally, he tries out the internal skills that train the brain. Even if the body exercises train the brain and internal organs, it is not a problem, and there will be no shortcomings later. Brain exercise may be able to awaken telekinesis, and it may also be able to extend perceptions similar to divine consciousness. In short, the world on the cultivation side is very suitable for demi-humans!

What kind of garbage is this written? I always feel a sense of frustration when I read it. There are plug-ins, and I don't do any big things that go against my will, or do something big. It completely follows the original plot, and there is no originality at all. The protagonist looks like a fool and a tool.

The author listens to my advice, you, the protagonist, must change! The protagonist's performance is too awkward and has no personal charm at all. To attract readers depends entirely on animation. If what you wrote happened to be my favorite anime, I wouldn't beep at all and would delete it directly. The whole Gundam? What else can that thing do besides show the protagonist's crotch stretching? Scrap it as soon as possible... Either this book is about the protagonist's transformation after being severely beaten and begins to grow, or else it is abandoned and rewritten. If the protagonist is not attractive, unless you write wonderfully later, the book will have no hope... I personally hope that the author will continue writing for the time being, but this protagonist is too stretched. Moreover, the Gundam's combat power is a bit low, and I feel that the protagonist's combat power span is too large. I want to know what the author plans to write about the world behind? And I think the system should give talents and abilities, bloodline, and imperial gear. I'm really speechless. Teigu is something that the protagonist has to collect by himself. It's a big deal if it's limited. What's so good about the Protector of the Nation? Isn't it good for you to give a "cow, horse and beast" ability? For example, the ability of the oxen beast "Tylande" (the material of the demon-haunted Tei Gear), isn't it awesome?

I originally thought it was the type that would bleed like rivers of blood with the help of demi-human abilities, but in the end, I looked forward and backward, and was disappointed.

It's too bland and cumbersome, and it feels like it has no beginning or end. If it doesn't matter whether it ruins the plot or goes through it smoothly, then what's the point of the protagonist?

Come on, there are too few demihuman fanfics.

Go directly to the full-time hunter and develop the telekinesis ability to attack at the cost of your own life. Even the ant king has to kneel down. Look for the substitute arrows and keep trying them on yourself. The substitute will always be awakened Then go to Stone Sea to steal the priest's CD. It is easy to get it in the warehouse under the tractor. If you get all these and include the black ghost, you can have three substitutes at the same time

Anyway, if you are not afraid of death, go to Jojo to get an arrow and evolve Xiao Hei into a substitute 🤓

Since it was put on the shelves, would you like to see what Gouba stuff you have written about? How many chapters have you written in Collecting Eight Fangs? What you spend money on is how good you are at word count. Could you please use some snacks? I regard you as the author, do you regard me as myself? Chinese chives?