Become Famous Another Day

I clicked in with the mentality of watching an entertainment model drama, and saw a quite delicate and realistic youth daily (?) Novel. A considerable part of the audience for entertainment novels is based on the short and fast rhythm of entertainment. They wish they were eaten up by the model villain in the first chapter, and then slapped in the face in the next chapter. This kind of classic reversal brought by wholesale gold fingers feeds entertainment novels. Then the highlight of this novel, which is also a controversial point, appears: First, it is slow to start, and in general, everything is very detailed. The chapters before the college entrance examination are really the daily life of students plus work (suffering). It is not at all like an entertainment novel, but more like "The daily life of a senior high school student with an 18th-tier star as a secondary occupation." I have seen a lot of comments about the novel's slowness, as if slowness is the enemy of reading (indeed), but this kind of slowness lengthens the distance between frustration and slap in the face, and what it achieves is that the author fills in this broadened plot with richer characters and stories. Just like some people say that Stone Gate is slow to hit, as if the "boring" plot of the previous n episodes has been cut out and it is still eye-catching. 486 Directly saves the world. Why did you work so hard before? Some people will say, ah, why haven't you gotten to the slap in the face part after so long? Let's go, let's go... When watching the series, we only watch the slices, and when watching the discussions, we only watch the rip-offs... What I want to say is that even for a purely enjoyable article, deflation is to a slap in the face, just like praise is to amusement. You can say that teasing is more eye-catching, but you can never say that praise is unimportant. Of course, today's authors lead readers less and more to cater to readers. Readers no longer have the temperament to endure being aggrieved. Why do authors make readers unhappy? Why don't I want to eat? Right, right. The deflation is getting shorter and shorter, and the slap in the face is getting faster and faster. Even if there is a reason for it, the novel produced in this way is indeed not a refreshing novel that will make your blood flow when you read it. Second, there is no golden finger. I already write about entertainment, so how can I not be a literary copywriter? Isn't Wenzhao Gong a golden finger? You are right, but this novel made me see a quality that an entertainment protagonist does not have, and that is "hard work". Talking about the protagonist's hard work in entertainment articles is like talking about the star's hard work in reality. Do you think he worked hard? It seems that he has tried hard. For example, under the circumstances of being targeted by all parties, the protagonist gritted his teeth and burst out a unique song, rushed out in just one afternoon and shocked the world. He works hard on his acting on the set, is not arrogant or restrained in dealing with people and things, and tries his best to act like an ordinary good person without personality. But this novel talks about the protagonist's efforts. This is an effort that was "slowly gained" at the expense of the novel's audience. From encountering obstacles at everything to continuing to persevere and achieving small successes, watching the final part of the college entrance examination results really gave me mixed emotions, as if there was really such a person beside me who was working so hard to prove what he could become. Every effort will be rewarded, and hard work will be rewarded. Even if you are forced to suffer defeat, there should be a process of clenching your fists. The tighter we hold on, the closer our hearts come, the more relief and joy we gain, and the more emotion and understanding we gain. Third, "literary youth". Literary youth is a disease, and gratuitous pretentiousness and emotional catharsis are diseases. The author seems to be stuffing his own personal stuff several times, often stretching out a lot of side plots. I don't want to say that the author is a literary youth, but I just think that the author likes to laugh at himself for being a literary youth, and then continue to stuff a little left and a little right. Yeah! Well done! ! (Praise) For this kind of novel with distinctive characteristics, I want to say that this is your characteristic. I stay here because of these characteristics, so I can ignore it with two eyes, but you can't live without it! What I am talking about is why I recommend everyone to read and express feelings about paper books. Hey, I really like it. Do you understand the feelings? The vivid character relationships brought about by delicate emotions made me not doubt the feelings of the protagonist's friends, and the rare creation of the image of the woman in dealing with emotions. Furthermore, I have to say that the setting of time travel at the same age is really a good setting. Let's start complaining: 1. The female character who appeared directly in the front was actually a policeman, and the colorful murders that occurred in my senior year of high school had to make me question the local security while reading. 2. Is there really any excuse for the protagonist's inexplicable targeting and persecution? As the author himself said, he was an orphan born in a rural area and had no prominent relatives, and he couldn't remember any big shot he had offended, so where could these dark malice come from. 3. The villains in the novel are really bad and disgusting from beginning to end, but there are several characters who are not easy to deal with who are like this, not only against the protagonist, but they themselves are evil with bad behavior. In this way, it would be a bit of a model show, and the one-sided evil is quite thin. 4. I hope that Xiao Lu's acting career will be more enjoyable in the future. The biggest joy before was the college entrance examination rather than the star career. There are some shortcomings and some. The image of always Wei Guangzheng also needs to be shattered. Now the things that made him famous are still a bit glaring, and it is not very enjoyable to read. All in all, I hope that the entertainment career will become more exciting. Finished, I was so hungry in the middle of the night (´□`｡), so I just ate two egg tarts. I really had no time to type so much in the middle of the night.

It is a book that can pass the time, but I have to say that the plot is too indistinct. The author often updates 10,000 words, but after reading it, I felt that my dozens of starting points were wasted...

As always, I still have the same point of view. Just pretend that I haven't written about the issue of life experience and just write about my daily life quietly. It's great. I just ignore this pitfall quietly.

The advantages are obvious, everyone has said it, it is clean, there is no stench of men's condensation, there is no tricking one's wits, and there is no blind pretense and slap in the face. The shortcomings are... Terrible, too watery, too flat, the story drags on too long, and the fun points are too scattered. The several plots in one chapter now seem to be put together temporarily, and a few clues are cut up and stirred up to fill ten chapters. Each chapter is not attractive enough, and each paragraph seems to have a low word count. After reading the update for three to five days, it is the same as not reading it. The plot of the story is artificially divided and stretched, and by the end, the readers' expectations have been exhausted. Writing and reading books are not live readings. Real readers are not as patient as the audience in the live broadcast room in the book. For the same money, you can buy a bowl of rice bowl from others, but here you can only buy a bowl of soup, which always makes people wonder whether salt is added.

How should I put it? For this novel, I feel that the author should have made a fortune in serious literature or writing screenplays. The feeling is very different. The truths in it are two different words in completely different people. From Lu Yanhe's own eloquence, it can be seen that the author has really created a demeanor that makes people laugh, but also has the depth of soul that is deafening. That's why I seriously doubt that the author should have a serious literary background. Group portrait writing is not something that ordinary people can master, and generally good works are reflected in serious literature. It is a difficult high-end operation to make the character's characteristics distinctive without facial makeup design. For example, if Chen Siqi is portrayed as a heroine, most people would portray her as a flamboyant heroine, with daily cruelty, unclear emotional lines, and inexplicable love at first sight. However, the author abandoned these and created a female character who develops along a career line. Abandoning inexplicable conflicts and having meaningless hatreds, I often accidentally come across some listening videos on Douyin, "It's all about me giving my all to someone, but he betrayed me. Now I am reborn and see his true face." This is the most unflattering stereotype. The author cleverly solves the emotional problems that ordinary people can't deal with with a unique stroke. Friendship slowly evolves into the sublimation of life. Chen Siqi jumps up to support each other in career. Only through long-term persistence can there be real feelings, not just "confirming that the person in the eyes is the right one." This is the most bloody. No one is born with the feeling that the person in front of him is his companion in the future. Without the foundation of life, it is just a cloud. In addition, I am quite moved by the author's "secondary narrative", that is, in terms of film and television, Lu Yanhe's perception of film and television when he was on the crew, and the author's elaboration of the story again when it was re-screened at the film festival. This is a very clever design, which is equivalent to a small story within a big story, a circle within a circle. For example, when they were studying the script, Lu Yanhe directly acted as a character in the script. The author abandoned the third-person interpretation. At this time, I was the protagonist of the script. I had a second life apart from reality. "The Golden Road" and "Dingfeng No. 1" Both used this approach. I don't know if you have noticed that the author uses a storyboard design. There is a space under each paragraph. It does not just revolve around the protagonist. It has a montage feeling. Although it is not a montage scene shot, it looks more like a prose style. The multi-faceted aspects of the matter have been understood by the author, which is very clever. In addition, some people say that the previous suspense was very abrupt. If you just read the beginning, it would be like this. However, how do you want to end an entertainment article? If it's a fantasy, you might arrange an unparalleled boss and a villain behind it, and then the protagonist wins the fight with the help of everyone; but what about entertainment stories? The ending of traditional entertainment articles is easy to be bad, so how to cleverly connect it, let's see if Chen Pinhe will come up with it. Many people can't stand the pedantic style of Banshi Banyan, who always love and hate the fast-food traffic. Then you can start with this novel to break out of your thinking cocoon. Or if you have reached the sublimation stage of a bookworm and want to connect with world literature, this book can be a starting point, really. In the end, I want to explain that I am not a bastard, but just a book lover's true thoughts from the bottom of my heart. If you don't like it, please don't criticize me. Please add some comments to the author. Thank you.

The portrayal of the heroine was so poor that when I saw the heroine coming out, I just skipped it and then gave up on the story. . The rest are pretty good.

It's a bit too high and low. I don't understand why I have to be a screenwriter later on, but I just copied the old routine and acted and filmed it myself. It's boring.

I feel more and more like this book that I have persisted for so long~ It is the underlying character of the character Lu Yanhe that makes me envious~ The tenacity and sharp kindness are so great~ It is something I am looking forward to being able to do for a weak person~ I went to take a certificate today. I haven't taken the test for a long time, and I don't have much time to review~ When I came back and waited for the update, I read the text and I was silently envious again.

[A small comment] [Contains spoilers] —————————— From what I have seen so far, the author updates quickly, the writing is good, the characters are good, the main and supporting characters are attractive, and it is not a loss to invest in, the content and the description of the entertainment industry data in the article are relatively close to reality, I can feel that the author wants to write a good article seriously, and there are really few high-quality articles in the entertainment industry, and this is a rare book, so you should cherish it ~ I strongly recommend everyone to subscribe and start reading! ———————————— However, in terms of plot rhythm, I feel that it can be polished (the following is just my personal opinion and taste!) Now that I see it, I feel that why many readers feel that the plot is dull, in fact, there is a big reason, which is that there is no [timely feedback mechanism]. Or when distributing the [Feedback Mechanism], the time is too long. [The climax of the article is like a slap in the face, it needs to be slapped cleanly, it needs to be slapped continuously in one breath, and it needs to be slapped harder than the others, it is very satisfying. Instead of fanning in slow motion... Lifting and lowering gently, this will make the reader feel restless and not satisfied enough. (For example, "Little Song Gathering", from the preparation to the participation to the current broadcast, from chapter 65 to chapter 91, is ready to end. As an entertainment industry article! As the first entertainment program that the protagonist officially participates in! As the first stage to show that he has traveled through Goldfinger! This time span is too long..., And it reaches the climax in chapter 91. In processing, we still use a large number of other characters' perspectives and psychological descriptions to provide "slow-motion" feedback. This writing method is not bad... But it cannot be abused. It is too frequent, and it almost feels like a group photo) The reason why Shuangwen is so cool is that the [feedback mechanism] is very timely. If the protagonist plants [cause] in the front, there will be [result] in the back. Of course, because this article is not a traditional mindless and refreshing article, the feedback mechanism does not have to be so simple and direct, and can be intentionally [delayed feedback] to a certain extent. To achieve a more realistic feeling. But... The author went too far. Some of the climax plots we have experienced so far have not yet received timely feedback on the results. For example: 1. The protagonist experienced a murder and traveled through time, but there are still no clues to the murderer. 2. The agency and agent have malicious intentions, but the protagonist still cannot get rid of and terminate the contract. 3. Go back to school and study hard. But the results are still hidden away by the protagonist, and most people don't know the protagonist's true ranking and strength. 4. Live broadcast learning, the number of live broadcast viewers is still mediocre, and no learning achievements or talents are displayed in the process. And among all the protagonist's public artist activity information that fans can view, the protagonist is still the original owner's video information. 5. As a "little song gathers crowd" obtained through bravery in disguise, this rare stage serves as the company's "concession" to the protagonist. Because of bravery, "opportunity" obtained in disguise. Readers are very much looking forward to the protagonist being able to take advantage of the time traveler and use this stage to amaze the people of that world. People who can improve the male protagonist It can also be a disguised way of "slapping the company in the face". However, this "reward feedback" has been dragged out for too long, and it is also mixed with the heart-wrenching incident of [the suicide of an employee in a teammate's home], so that... The plot that was supposed to be exciting has become worse... It's hard for everyone to watch the response after the show is broadcast. But it is also a long story about the psychology of the supporting actors. Activities, Shengsheng destroys the rhythm again. The climax of the plot is like eating sugar, and the daily plot is like drinking water. The traditional refreshing novel is to give you sugar until you die. And the traditional hydrology is to give you no sugar, only water, until it is boring. And a good rhythm is like drinking water. R>When the author should give the readers sweets, they must give them sweet enough. In this way, in some ordinary and warm daily plots, the readers can have sugar in their mouths and feel sweet when drinking water. [Of course, if you just want to write a purely relaxed and daily article (Nongfu Spring is a bit sweet), it is really not suitable for the entertainment industry, which itself needs to be refreshing.

Just finished watching it, it's pretty good. I felt that the preparation was too slow, and I almost gave up on the book, but I persisted for a whole day with a lot of returns. This book does not have as many literary copywriters as other entertainment books. It is very good at writing about daily life. It can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the entertainment genre.

The author of a female channel has switched to writing a male channel. It's a bit refreshing without being pretentious. The supporting characters are flesh and blood, but I feel that the early pace is a bit slow and the author is slow to warm up. Also, the writing about the high school campus is too detailed. The process of getting along with classmates and friends is okay, but there is no need to write in such detail about knowledge points and ideas for solving questions. I, who don't like to study, really feel dizzy after reading it. After finishing the college entrance examination, I am getting better and better. I can see the author's literary skills and his thoughts and expressions. Emotions are very delicate and can bring warmth and strength to people.

I must say that the author writes very well, please don't pay attention to some comments. I once read a book that I thought was very good, but I was criticized by the reviewers for why they didn't go to Qingbei. It was as if Qingbei was the only place in China and people from other schools would not be successful. Then the author felt his heart was broken, and then he decided not to go to Qingbei.

I don't know how many original plots similar to this chapter the author has prepared himself. I would like to make a small suggestion, that is, if you have prepared such an original plot very early and feel that it is polished to pass the test, then writing it is absolutely fine. But to be honest, this is very risky, because when you are writing, you may suddenly realize that the original script is not good, and you want to change it, but the plot of the whole book is right here and you have to write it, so it will be unfinished. I used to have an entertainment novel that I liked very much called "Global Movie King". The author also liked to do some original script arrangements, but maybe because he had too high requirements for his small scripts, the updates were poor for a period of time, and then they were ruined. To put it bluntly, most online articles are products rather than works. If you want to be required to use the standards and attitudes for making works, then you have to be prepared to struggle like writing works. I quite like this plot. It would be better if there was a mind map to sort out the logical relationships of all the characters.

Reading it in one go to catch up to the latest chapter makes you want to stop reading. It is a rare book and few books can be read all the time. The only slight flaw for me personally is that some of the paragraphs are too long. A densely packed page on a mobile phone may be too impetuous. When I see a densely packed page, I always want to jump over it, which is a bit trypophobic. I feel that if a large paragraph is divided into several smaller paragraphs, the reading experience will be better.

The writing is very nice, and it feels different from most of the books I have read. I think the characteristics of this book are that it is more literary than ordinary online articles. For example, the whole article is full of one person, and the paragraph is full of many short sentences. The author slants a lot of his own opinions through the tone of a certain person in a super long paragraph. It is suitable for people who are willing to understand the entertainment industry in depth. For me, I only occasionally read the essential knowledge in it, but more about the battle of wits between people and the plot. This novel is indeed well written, with all the holes behind the gray line of grass and trees filled in, with a beginning and an end. I didn't expect to see such a literary work in a rebirth-like plot. It's really good. It's just that the description of love is too rough. Hey, I still like to watch sweet love.

After reading more than 100 chapters, I found some problems. There are no major flaws in the author's writing style. However, the description of the plot and the description of the characters in the novel are not very profound. If this novel is a simple novel, it is not a big shortcoming. However, since readers can see that the author wants to write at a deeper level, then the author's writing style, emotional foreshadowing, and the depth of the plot and characterization of the characters are awkwardly inconsistent. The author's writing style is calm and deep. In my opinion, the author has some shadows of serious literature, but the environment and character events during the protagonist's growth experience are a bit extreme. The depiction of rights and interests is too extreme, like shooting an arrow first and then drawing a target. Arrange the emotions and connotations of the character in order to highlight the depth. For example, I saw a supporting character whose father is a lawyer. First of all, regarding him slandering students, it was not a big deal when he was a student, and judging from the previous plot, it was not a very serious matter. The author portrayed the conflict as a bit too conflict-oriented. If the author wanted to take a more serious and profound philosophy, then an overly dramatic explosion would be inappropriate. Especially in the end, when his father taught him that interests come first, it was a bit too exaggerated and extreme. If this lawyer is going to be very successful, then he should at least know what is most stable, such as depth and education. His education method is seriously inconsistent with his ability class. Even if he is really making money, then I will mention to him that his assets are tens of millions, which is enough, but there are tens of millions of families around me. They attach great importance to the morality and ability of their children, especially morality. This is the bottom line issue. They will also ask for character education and so on. They will never be mean like this. I'm not sure what the follow-up will look like. I can continue to read it, but I don't want to read it anymore because it's difficult to reconcile the two. If I continue to read it awkwardly, I will be very uncomfortable, so I'll give it up for now.

I like the pace of this book, but it's annoying when someone is always causing trouble 😆😆😆

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The story line, I feel, is quite innovative. It flows very well in a plain and ordinary way, which is very consistent with my feelings about daily writing. The current rhythm is also quite good. I feel that the author has made adjustments recently, because it is much better than the obviously slow pace before. There was a period of time in the middle when the story line was too long, so I collected several pictures before reading it. I want to tell the author, just write at your own pace. If I don't like your pace, I will skip it or read it together. If it feels good, I will follow up. So you see, I can make my own decisions, and you can also write according to your own ideas. So far, this is the most innovative among the many entertainment novels I have read. It can start from the details and the characters are the most thoughtful. It feels like Yan He is showing his own life.

Another point to complain about is that the works the author is looking for are too unpopular, such as "Love Letter", Green Apple, and One Man's Battlefield. To be honest, you might as well just copy Jay Chou's. There are so many popular and high-quality classics in the past, why not use them. You have to believe that those that are not popular in our world must have flaws, and they may not be popular in the parallel world.

To prevent some people from thinking that I represent all readers, I must say something on my own behalf. I think it is well written and I like it very much. I hope to maintain the character and style and continue to evolve.

Slow heating type. But I can watch it. At least you can see his growth journey. It's not like those entertainment novels that suddenly explode into popularity and then shock you without realizing it. And screw the friends you write about, they are no longer the tool type. But true friendship.

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It's so boring back there. . Moreover, other people are saying that the protagonist's acting skills are good, but I can't feel it at all. . The films I made often became popular immediately after filming, and they won awards. I was really confused when I saw it. .

How much do you like Xu Zijun? I have read more than 100 chapters. Is she the heroine in your book? Spending so many words writing about her, a little side hustle, she is in more trouble than the hero.

It's rare to see that there is no system. Must support! Come on! 😡😡😡

I am getting more and more confused. I have read a lot of entertainment articles. This is the first time I have written such a detailed chapter in a big chapter about a movie without the participation of the protagonist. Is it really a waste of time? Did I stop singing about my childhood hundreds of chapters ago?

I caught up to chapter 357 in one go, but I couldn't stand the rest of it, mainly because I was disgusted by the plot in Beijing and Taiwan. The author's writing style is good, and it is one of the few entertaining novels that can be read. The main characters and supporting characters described in it have distinct personalities, each with their own characteristics, and each of them has a unique charm. I especially love the heroine and Brother Drag. The heroine is the kind of person who seems to be very pretentious and unpleasant at first, mainly because of her stepmother and father. To be honest, when I saw her father occasionally showing concern for the heroine through the door, I thought it would be reversed, and his desire would be suppressed first. Later, when I saw that there was no reversal, I felt that even the heroine was a bit disgusting. But the turning point has come. The magazine founded by the male and female protagonists and the various counterattacks of the female protagonists are very decisive and attractive. Among the female characters, I think the most outstanding ones are the female protagonist and the male protagonist's agent. They have personalities, methods, and are independent of themselves. If one of them is missing, the male protagonist will not be able to get up. Moreover, the male supporting character, La Ge, also has a brilliant personality. I don't like Huang Zitao, but Li Zhibai's speech in the article is really brilliant. I really want to be like him, telling the truth to others and being loyal. But there are many poisonous points in the article. The first thing I want to talk about is the heroine's family. I know that the author wanted to portray the characters more fully, so that her father could show some concern for the heroine through the door, but this kind of character portrayal did not make him plump, and became more blunt. Fortunately, I didn't continue to write about that family later. The portrayal and conflict of the villains in the article are very blunt. The villains are all the kind who will be black for life if they disagree with each other. Emotions are greater than rationality. It is not that they are always on top, but they feel like they are finished. This way of writing is a bit old-fashioned. Another toxic point is that the background of the male protagonist is really bad, and readers have been complaining about it from the beginning. . This pit is too poisonous. I am an illegitimate son from a wealthy family, and the eldest wife wants me to die, so that I can be reborn and seize the sun, so that I can become a successful person again, right? Don't come here for entertainment. And the B-level you set for the big boss is too low. In the past, you wanted to kill him, but later you turned to suppressing his popularity and discrediting him. However, the vice president of his own company also wanted to discredit him. There are too many ways to deal with him, which is too dirty. The simplest way is to find a has-been Internet celebrity in the company, then wait for the protagonist to be alone, hide in a place without cameras, and slander him for attempted rape. The protagonist has no connections, no background, and no money at that time, and he is immediately out of touch. So when I saw it later, I felt that this was very poisonous, and that entertainment should not be mixed with some weird traps. If these two points can be repaired, I feel that it will be a highly recommended book, but this book is indeed okay, at least I can read it.

Can you write less forced and hot plots? Can we retain a little respect for the public and the fashion? If it is beautiful but not popular, let it not be popular. Forcing the copied works to become popular will only make me disobey, rather than make us happy. Especially the recent plot is too white and superficial. Group creation is no longer written, nor is how to build huge dramatic tension. Just being tough and not talking about the Basic Law is worse than 100 chapters ago.

Children and stupid thieves are fine, but the other absolute protagonist - "family" is not easy to deal with. It needs to be large enough and complex enough to facilitate the battle of wits and dodges, so it needs a single-family duplex or a villa. After all, it is realistic for American middle-class families to live in a single-family home. Therefore, even if the storyline is suspended, this movie can still give ordinary audiences a certain sense of immersion in the context of American culture. But it's different in China. Developing countries and developed countries have different concepts of many things. For example, in a general context, the people of the two countries have different concepts of villas. In the United States, a "detached duplex" is a symbol of a middle-class family, but in China it is a symbol of a small wealthy family (the rich all have mansions, there is nothing to say about it), so what happened in The story in "Duplex" was out of touch with the masses at the beginning, not to mention that the probability of two arrogant home invasion thieves appearing in China's security environment is much lower than that in the United States... So this story taking place in China is not an ordinary suspension, so I do not recommend using the original story as a guard, but changing the background to provide a more reasonable explanation for the environment.