Wuxia: Beginning with the Parting Hook

The protagonist who can even let go of Long Xiaoyun and his son, Lin Xianer, is not a good person, but can only be regarded as a double standard. The first few chapters of this book are very exciting, but the author can't stand it. Saying "it's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to discard" is all praise for this book. It was completely forced to follow the plot, and the plot that could be written in one chapter had to be squeezed into more than ten chapters.

The biggest poisonous point is the suppression of strength. Some systems even forcefully suppress it, and now the strength is on par with Gong Jiu. Ten years wasted. Ten years ago, the protagonist could beat Shangguan Jinhong to death. Ten years wasted. Now he is an ordinary master who is as good as the protagonist. So disgusting

This realm division is very discouraging! Nature and nurture are enough.

The writing is poor, the rhythm is messy, the protagonist cannot be established, and the author only has a junior high school diploma.

Another protagonist who doesn't mind becoming a eunuch just to practice martial arts. . . The author is a talent

🥵 Just open a single chapter and explain some problem settings to readers? ? ? Author, you have to write a separate chapter to explain these issues to readers! ! ! Haven't you realized that what you need to explain is exactly what you didn't write well? Do other excellent novels by great writers include individual chapters to explain the settings to readers? You explain to the readers why you didn't kill Long Xiaoyun and his son, why you didn't kill Lin Xianer, and why Bai Xiaosheng's matter has nothing to do with the protagonist! ! ! Why are you explaining this to your readers? ? ? ! ! ! Because most readers hope that the protagonist will kill them, hope that the protagonist will be happy and uninhibited! It's better for you, you insist on arguing with readers! ! ! And then you will write a separate chapter to explain to readers the issues of nature and nurture in martial arts? ? ? Why explain? Have Zhe Tian, ​​Mortal, Dou Po, etc. Explained his realm to readers? Because your writing is not good and the readers do not accept your setting, you are forced to explain to the readers! ! ! Many authors know they are wrong but do not correct it! ! ! Same goes for this author! ! ! Always remember, when you want to open a single chapter to explain some problems, then these are the areas that your novel has not dealt with well, go and revise it! ! !

In fact, the quality of current online articles can indeed be judged from the three golden chapters. Most current authors have no control at all and often show what their level is and what their concepts are from the beginning. Even this article starts directly from Xingyun Village, under Long Xiaoyun, and you can see too many things. So don't have any illusions

"Since it is a hook, why is it called separation?" "Because this hook will cause separation no matter what it hooks. If it hooks your hand, the human hand will be separated from the wrist; if it hooks your foot, your foot will be separated from the leg." "If it hooks my throat, I will be separated from this world. "Yes." "Why do you use such a cruel weapon?" "Because I don't want to be forced to say goodbye to the one I love." "You really understand?"

Martial arts are originally fairy tales for adults. They don't describe rivers and lakes, martial arts, Lao Moji's chores, nothing can you talk about it?

I don't know why the author would consider suddenly suppressing the protagonist's strength. Can't you find the problem even if you look at the zero chapter reviews of the 50-50 chapters?