Wuxia: Beginning with the Parting Hook

The protagonist, who spared even Long Xiaoyun and his son, and Lin Xian'er, can hardly be considered a good person; he's just a hypocrite. The first few chapters of this book are very exciting, but the author's writing is so poor that calling it "tasteless but not worth abandoning" is an understatement. It's completely forced to follow the plot, dragging out a dozen or more chapters of a story that could be told in one.

The biggest flaw is the suppression of strength; some systems even forcibly suppress it, resulting in the protagonist's current strength being comparable to Gong Jiu's. Ten years were wasted. Ten years ago, the protagonist could have killed Shangguan Jin Hong; ten years were wasted, and now even an ordinary expert is on par with him. It's disgusting.

This division of realms is discouraging! Having innate and acquired realms is already enough.

Poor writing style, chaotic pacing, and an undeveloped main character; the author's highest level of education is probably junior high school.

Another protagonist who doesn't care about being castrated just to practice martial arts... The author is a genius.

🥵You're starting with a separate chapter explaining some settings to the readers right off the bat?? Author, you're even dedicating a separate chapter to explaining these issues to the readers?! Don't you realize that what you need to explain is precisely what you haven't written well? Have other great authors dedicated separate chapters to explaining settings to readers in their excellent novels?

In fact, the quality of online novels these days can indeed be judged from their first three chapters. Most authors lack control over their writing, often revealing their skill level and underlying beliefs right from the start. This novel, for example, reveals a great deal from the very beginning, starting with Xingyun Manor and Long Xiaoyun's Lament. So, don't harbor any illusions.

"If it's a hook, why call it 'Parting'?" "Because this hook, whatever it catches will be separated. If it hooks your hand, your hand will be separated from your wrist; if it hooks your foot, your foot will be separated from your leg." "If it hooks my throat, I'll be gone from this world?" "Yes." "Why did you use such a cruel weapon?" "

Wuxia (martial arts fiction) is essentially a fairy tale for adults. If it doesn't depict the martial arts world, martial arts skills, and mundane trivia, wouldn't it be boring?

I don't know why the author would suddenly suppress the protagonist's strength. Can't you find the problem by looking at the zero chapter reviews for the chapters with the character Wu Wukai?