Heng Lian Zhu Tian: a Tough Start with Nine Yin White Bone Claws

This book is okay, keep up the good work and continue to update it

There are such fierce people in Shaolin, and the monk has already opened the gate and raised the banner. If a random monk comes out and can compete with the five unique skills, the five unique skills are too high-level.

It's very strange. Several people killed officials, and then the protagonist saw it when he was passing by. They wanted to kill the protagonist to silence him, but the protagonist let him go after beating him? Just because some of them are Yang Guo's grandfather and Huang Laoxie's former apprentice?

Hundreds of years of life, several worlds of resources and martial arts accumulation, a mad dog Yuan Shi3 can't beat him, and he behaves like a native, this protagonist is really useless

I was attracted by the title, and after reading dozens of chapters, I felt that it was okay. I thought it was about the golden bell cover, the iron cloth shirt - the indestructible magical power of the Vajra - the immortal golden body, but after reading the introduction, I instantly lost the desire to read any more. Does the rest of it have anything to do with Henglian? It is better to change it to a supporting role in the heavens or a supporting role in the heavens.

Why did you travel through Xiaoao again? Picture what? It should be transported to a higher world, such as Double Dragon and Fengyun. You can't use hard water just for the sake of pure water numbers, right?

Hong Qigong is about 10 years older than the protagonist. Hong Qigong calls the protagonist little doll?

I found a question, why does Heng Lian have to take the punches from others forcefully? Force yourself to hurt others? Many writers who write protagonists of horizontal training like to stand still and let their opponents beat them, and then taunt them a few times.

I wrote about time travel, but other than changing myself and the other six monsters, it was gone. The plot is still the same as before, it's still the same with or without you, so you're not in vain. I was a nanny the whole time, and then the plot didn't change. Drama for plot's sake.

It's getting worse and worse. The time-travel characters are either injured or disabled, old or ugly. Always starting from scratch, dizzy. It's just a repetitive leveling process. There is no love in the whole process, just martial arts. Switching planes and starting all over again at level zero is so boring.

The writing is mediocre, the plot is nothing new, and nothing exciting.

The more you write, the worse you get. Why do you want to write Xiaoao?

The writing is not bad, but the plot is too boring. Can't stand it

In the first ten chapters, you can see various dialogues between the author and readers 😅

To be honest, the author's writing skills are good, but I skipped reading the two worlds or didn't read the rest. Why? Because the author may be too influenced by the original work of Jin Yong and others. The protagonist starts over in every world. Like an aborigine, he has lived for hundreds of years and the wisdom and experience of several worlds have not been reflected. A person who roams the world does not promote the upgrading of the world, nor does he lead the progress of humanity.

The plot is confusing, Guo Jing is two or three years older than Huang Rong. But you wrote that before Guo Jing was born, Huang Yaoshi's apprentice had his legs broken and was expelled from Peach Blossom Island! ! ! When Guo Jing met the Four Ghosts of the Yellow River at the age of 18, they were all in their twenties and thirties. How come they were already middle-aged men 18 years earlier! !

Iron Clothes, Iron Hands, Iron Nets, Tie Mi Tuo Come on, author, don't be a eunuch, don't have a character that is too original, do you want to be more decisive? ? ?

The author even got the timeline of Gu Long's novel wrong. The plot of Scimitar of the Full Moon takes place a hundred years after the prodigal son in the border town.

The writing is very good, but the plot is a mess. Jumping around the world without explaining it clearly is like a bad ending.

The plug-in is too harsh. I originally thought it was horizontal training. But according to your setting, all external skills are considered horizontal training. The powerful Vajra Finger and Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu are also considered horizontal training. Inner boxing and other Qi and blood exercises are also considered horizontal training. This is meaningless.

It is rare for someone to write a book about Wen, and the writing is pretty good, but Wen couldn't continue writing in the end and collapsed. One of the reasons is that the later period was too nonsense and exaggerated, and he had to collapse if he couldn't hold on. The author needs to learn a lesson. The protagonist is currently too hung up. He can absorb internal energy in a short time and transform it in a short time. Well, this is barely acceptable. What is unbearable is that poison can be turned into internal power. This unnecessary hanging is simply a waste of reading. Just be awesome and cure the disease. If you continue to play this game, you will almost collapse.

Very good, with martial arts and chivalry, this is martial arts

Brother, after just reading the beginning of the first chapter, I knew I had to order all of this book! Open a punch😍😍😍

Update quickly, if you don't see enough, I'll give you the monthly pass

Please read a book about the martial arts and extreme Dao of Henglian Thirteen Taibao. The kind of decisive killing.

Do you have any other recommendations from book friends? I would also like to have a copy.

Brother, you know! ! !

I've read so many martial arts fan novels, but gentle novels are still rare.

Refining

When will the latest world pass? I can't understand it at all. See you in the next world.