Lord of the Mysteries: Emerging from the Knowledge Moor

I can't figure out why I created a protagonist who is extremely incompatible with the knowledge path. He doesn't study hard and keeps spouting all kinds of high-sequence knowledge.

The protagonist and Klein act together, and every time the big head is taken away by Klein. Klein didn't contribute much, but he always took away things. This time I took away the big head directly.

The author has writing skills, but lacks writing experience and is not well prepared. He writes as he comes up with his ideas, and the result is naturally unsatisfactory The beginning is actually not very attractive, and the protagonist's personality is also very fragmented. The protagonist who knows that he wants to take the hermit path and aims at the demon of knowledge is too emotional, and people with knowledge and wealth often cannot be kind, which will kill themselves! At the same time, in the low sequence, when the protagonist is affected by the source of matter, the divinity must have the upper hand. Even if the reader path is accommodated, there should be some madness. This is a mysterious underlying logic that has been basically ignored!         7, The machine will not allow the hermit to exist, and the night will not allow other sources of matter to contaminate Xiaoke. Feng Baizhi will never risk offending Machine ➕ Dark Night by investing in the protagonist! The result? The protagonist is swinging wildly around Xiao Ke. Ex Machina and Kuroyukihime are paying attention to Xiao Ke. Even every member who appears around Xiao Ke must be an existence clearly arranged by Kuai Ye after repeated investigations. Anyone who has any doubts will definitely be killed! Now there is suddenly an unexpected player, and I still can't figure it out. It would be strange if it explodes in the dark night. The mysterious underlying logic 2: When you choose a path, your friends and enemies are determined! At the beginning of the Bernadette line, Bei believed that his father was still the Emperor of Knowledge, and Bei only needed a ritual to become Sequence 2. So how does the protagonist prepare to turn enemies into friends? ? Wouldn't it be nice to kill yourself or your own father and become a god? ? Beings with such charismatic personalities, such as Yuanta and the former Black Emperor, were killed because of their aggregation instinct. But it doesn't work for the protagonist? ? Overlord's Qi Niu It's a mysterious fanfic. It's good to modify the plot reasonably, but if you want to modify the world view, it's better to write an original one.

Those who write fan fiction are all newbies who have a hot head. They are incomparable to authors who make a living by writing online articles. However, it is rare to be able to write so many words. I would like to give you a small suggestion: please don't write next time. Why are you so young? Don't be put off by novels

All the plot protagonists related to Amon are played by Amon, from low-sequence play to angel, excuse me? First of all, as an author writing a fanfic, you should understand that everyone wants to read cool stories. Why should I read a protagonist who is such a loser? Secondly, the author has no understanding of such an important setting as person. The protagonist is a personality aspect of the Wilderness of Knowledge. His personality is equal to the essence of the essence. Amon is an ordinary and unique king of angels. The protagonist's personality beats Amon, but how do he manage to be kept slipping away by Amon? The protagonist of this book is actually Amon, right? Author, are you so obsessed with Amon that you make him play the protagonist every time? It was judged that the understanding of the original work was very poor, and this major poisonous point covered up all the other advantages.

Put the long review written on the book list into the book review area. The middle and later stages of this book are good, but the early and middle stages are pretty crappy, so it is quite an embarrassing book. Just start from Chapter 75. The first 75 chapters have three influences on the following - firstly, the protagonist raises a rabbit, which brings a lot of fun; secondly, the protagonist is the favored one of two and five dragons, and sees him every day in the library; and finally, the protagonist is soaked in the wilderness of knowledge at the beginning (it is important to note this) This actually means that all the human nature of the protagonist after that can be understood as a side of divinity (the calm side. The crazy part is hoarded by the hidden sage). In my opinion, the protagonist really has no humanity, and the game has a mysterious attitude. This can also explain why the protagonist talks about secret knowledge in the low sequence. After all, he does not care at all, and he will not die. The Knowledge Wilderness and the Hidden Sage will fish for him. You can watch it with this setting. Of course, in the end, my idea was proved to be right. The protagonist is a personality aspect in the wilderness of knowledge. Then let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are that the writing is fairly fluent, the characters are relatively few OOC, the plot is quite creative, and the two and five dragons are well written. The upgrade is also very fast. It is rare that Klein was already the protagonist of Sequence Five when he was still in Tingen, but he stayed at Sequence Five for a longer time. One disadvantage is that it is not very good in the early stage and the battle writing is very messy. This is also true in the later stage. The second is that low-level errors such as typos or mistakes in some settings of the original work often occur. The third thing is that the author seems to think that the supporting characters and the original characters are the same as the protagonist. Both the Rabbit in Sequence Seven and Klein in Sequence Six can talk about high-end knowledge like the Knowledge Wilderness of Source Castle at will? In addition, the protagonist's personality is so high, but it is not reflected in the text at all, which makes the later revelation of Sefirah's personality very abrupt, and also results in the protagonist never having a strong character. The fourth point is that the division of combat power in the article is unclear or even wrong. The performance of Coconut Egg Tree in battle is no different from the clone of the protagonist in sequence four. The difference between the protagonist in sequence three and sequence four is often not visible. In short, the author seems to have little understanding of the mysterious and important concept of person. These forbearances are over. What disgusted me was that in the middle stage, the main character was already Sequence 3, but he still didn't need to digest the magic potion (after all, the avatar swallowed it all the way to Sequence 2). As a result, he was played by a Sequence 3 clone of Amon, and the completely passive situation lasted for several chapters. Afterwards, he went to the Land Abandoned by the Gods for promotion and did not make any preparations to face Amon. As a result, he was teased by Amon again. You are a Sephiroth personality, half-body of the Hidden Sage, and your personality is at least equal to Amon's true form. Why can Amon play tricks on the protagonist? This author seems to have a bit of admiration for Amon, and may be slightly parasitized. Overall: Liangcao-, you can read as appropriate.

I'm not very good at talking, but this book really doesn't suit my taste, and neither does the protagonist's character. According to the book, the protagonist's source of essence comes from the wilderness of knowledge, so the path chosen by the protagonist should be the path of steam and the hermit. The protagonist's source of essence is the wilderness of knowledge, and the corresponding essence is knowledge itself. (Please point out that the following opinions may be wrong) Steam represents physical knowledge (can build Gundam), hermit represents mysterious knowledge (equivalent to a wizard who can summon the existence of other planets), and what about the path of knowledge? It represents continuous improvement of oneself, learning knowledge, and achieving omniscience. Moreover, the knowledge path and the Sefirot Knowledge Wilderness Path are completely non-adjacent paths. Even if they are a bit similar at the beginning, the essence and authority are completely different as you go up. The White Tower is like a book, which can continuously record the content and improve itself; but what about the Knowledge Wilderness? Represents the most essential, lowest and craziest knowledge. To put it bluntly, the protagonist's knowledge path cannot be promoted to high sequence, and the hermit path seems to have no characteristics at all. I watched it without skipping a beat. When I saw the protagonist entering the Tarot Society, I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing what the protagonist said. How about reporting what Hei Ye had done in one go? He also exposed Zaratul's affairs. Why did Hei Ye do that and not for his own promotion? The dark night has been pushing Xiao Ke forward all the time since the arrival of Xiao Ke. Everything she did was to have a Fool God who is friendly to her in the future, but the protagonist suddenly exploded? What sequence did Xiao Kecai have at that time? Did he suddenly know that there was such a strong enemy on this path? ? The audience and the Hanged Man were also in the sequence. How could they suddenly learn such terrifying knowledge? Don't forget to pay attention to Xiao Ke in the dark night.

The coward who does not belong to this era, the master of poverty above the bathroom, the king of reimbursement and reporting of sweet iced tea, you are one and ten thousand. When we walk in the bathroom, it is like walking in your country.

I want to be a reader, but I hate studying... Pig's Foot has a very out-of-touch personality... How can he bump into a vampire girl while investigating a case in a hospital? It's such a low-level joke. It doesn't matter if the pig's trotter can't react to it at Sequence 8, but the opposite vampire who is at least Sequence 7 can't react either? Actually bumping heads with others? Does the author treat Sequence Seven as a slightly stronger ordinary person? The Nighthawks' Sequence 7 is enough to handle extraordinary events in an entire city. How about walking and meeting people? Funny…

The mother goddess and cassava are not confused by one or the other. The main reason is that one is for reproduction and the other is for desire and authority. The expressions are also similar.