Traveling Through Time 10,000 Years Late, I Was Forced to Become a Powerful Person

Directly evaluate Liangcao+, it is expected to become a god. Talk about your views The world view is grand, with traditional cultivation, magical powers, and incense and Shintoism. It is easy for ordinary people to get confused when writing this kind of book. This book is generally very smooth, with killings, conspiracies, scheming, and pretentiousness. It is very enjoyable to read. The highlights of this book in my opinion are that one is the grand narrative and the other is the self-justification. It is very interesting to fill in many holes in the timeline. To make a complaint, the title of the book is really crotch-stretching. I scanned it many times. If I didn't really run out of books to read, I wouldn't have clicked in. I almost missed it. Secondly, the protagonist changes too quickly, and the psychological transformation from an ordinary person is a bit fast. It is better to give someone to receive memories, such as receiving some of the memories of a predecessor with supernatural powers, than to directly pretend to be a Shinto master or an emperor. . . The flaws don't hide the good points, right? The other thing is that the update is a bit stretchy.

There is always the possibility that various problems may occur during timeline operations, leading to logic collapse. Here we briefly discuss the bugs that may have occurred so far. First of all, it is necessary to determine the enemy's means of erasing history. From the simplest setting method that is easy for readers to understand, there are two possibilities: 1. Similar to the protagonist traveling through time, going back to the past, directly killing the founder of the Luoyun Sect, making it impossible for him to found the sect, and then letting history develop naturally - this is not in line with the previous plot. First, there will be no Luoyun Sect from the beginning, and there will be no vacancy left by the disappearance of the unknown sect, which can allow later generations of book fairies to infer the existence of such unknown sects. Second, the disappearance of a large sect like Luoyun Sect from the beginning and its natural development will lead to drastic changes in history. This will lead to a huge difference in the two histories, not just for the people of the Luoyun Sect. 2. Perform more sophisticated cleaning operations on the block universe. For example, assuming that the entire blocky four-dimensional space-time history is like a roll of film that records everything, this cleaning operation is equivalent to starting from a certain frame of the film, searching forward and backward for all things marked as Luoyun Sect on the film, and then erasing them - this is roughly in line with the previous The plot can also explain why the protagonist will not be erased even if he mentions the Luoyun Sect after traveling through time (because the operation of searching and erasing the Luoyun Sect has been completed, the protagonist is equivalent to rewinding and recording again, and will not directly encounter the power of historical erasure), but there are also hidden dangers. Possible plot hazards: 1. Problems that Patriarch Gong still has: The previous understanding was that some kind of power retrieved the personnel currently belonging to Luoyun Sect and then erased them from the world. Because Patriarch Gong was no longer a member of Luoyun Sect during erasure, it only erased some of his memories of Luoyun Sect. In the new understanding, the power to erase the Luoyun Sect is throughout history, and the ancestor Gong who was once a disciple of the Luoyun Sect will also be erased - this "hidden danger" is actually inconsistent with the reader's intuition, because the block universe time model itself has an aspect that is inconsistent with human intuition, which is why other time models exist. Corresponding to this, in the new history after the erasure of history, the life course of Patriarch Gong should be: normal birth, growing up, preparing to join a sect that does not exist, and talking like a ghost all the time, until the moment he becomes a member of that sect, he suddenly disappears, and then time passes to the sect. At the moment when he abandoned his disciple, he suddenly reappeared, continued to talk to the non-existent ghost, and left. Even though his origin was unknown, he was still accepted by Rong Cheng Dayutian without any grudges, and then history continued to develop as usual... 2. A further hidden danger is the plot of Xuanhuang Tower corresponding to this time. First of all, it is necessary to confirm that the story of the Supreme Daozi Xuanhuang Pagoda of later generations that the protagonist heard before was not created by himself, because the name of Luoyun Sect was not mentioned, and the name of Luoyun Sect was not hidden after the protagonist traveled through time. So, in the original timeline, the Luoyun Sect was indeed involved in the Xuanhuang Tower plot. Then, in the timeline after erasure, there will still be Gui Luoyun sect members who do not actually exist in the Xuanhuang Tower plot. Members of various sects in history will involuntarily interact with these airs (similar to the situation of Gong Laozu in the previous new timeline), leaving them open space. Some people choose to avoid the disguised Supreme Daozi or follow them. He talks (the protagonist after traveling through time seems to be talking to the air, and the name of the Luoyun Sect in the dialogue has been silenced). To make matters worse, because the protagonist cannot see these ghosts, there will be overlapping model errors (lucky). In short, this kind of plot is very counterintuitive to the reader and is not easy to handle. 3. Because the protagonist did not hide the name of the Luoyun Sect, there will be a plot risk after the return, that is, the Shuxian remembered the name of the Luoyun Sect, but after looking through history, it was only in the Xuanhuang Tower section, and the front and back were missing (but this is very late, and there are many ways to solve it) Finally, you may be able to choose other time models to avoid the above hidden dangers and fit the plot, but too complex a model may still go against the reader's intuition, making it difficult to understand even if the plot is self-consistent.

The system theme is unconventional, but it starts with the Ten Thousand Years Late system, which is novel and unique. The main line advancement is not the ordinary sense of killing monsters and upgrading, but completing the hidden achievements through the difference of ten thousand years before and after. The concept is clever, and the plot is very well drawn (the key points are really good). It can be seen that the author has really worked hard. The plot narration refers to a lot of mythological stories. It is well laid out, thoughtful, fascinating, and And the description methods are diverse, which is not an ordinary cool article, praise 👍; secondly, the overall structure is huge, and the world structure includes heaven, underworld, large, medium and small worlds, etc.; The cultivation components are diverse, including the modern four-step system for ascending to immortality, the incense system, the ancient Qi training system, etc.; In addition, the author's literary skills are still excellent, the writing is smooth, the logic is online, the rhythm is slow and smooth, and the overall reading experience is comfortable. After boasting, let's talk about the slight flaws 1. The entire world structure is very grand, with heaven above and underworld, involving many mythological bosses, but the boss's strength is not reflected. How can there be no backup for unknown disasters? There should also be certain arrangements for the present world. Finally, At first, I thought that these Cave Heaven Paradise should be the back-up plan of the big boss. The inheritance is immortal for ten thousand years. How awesome. Even the current BOSS is enough. But now it has been weakened too much. So many Dongtian Paradise are completely checked and balanced by a humane dynasty. The advantage in combat power is so obvious, it is too timid. 2. As the plot progresses, the protagonist becomes somewhat deified and gradually loses touch with human nature. He is the same and has no memory points. The analysis believes that it may be because the protagonist's principles of dealing with things (secular tact, etc.) And his sense of belief in cultivation (the purpose of cultivation) are not explained. It is recommended to add more characters to the protagonist. Add a bit of bad taste (can be expressed through complaints, etc.), And use some words to describe the change of mentality. In the early stage, Fubo Longjun did not save people in advance because "what does it have to do with me", but in the subsequent incidents, he took civilian lives into consideration many times. There is a difference in behavior before and after. 3. There is a little lack of foreshadowing in the overall main plot, and the correlation between each part is too low, as if it is pieced together as separate short stories. For example, in the Imperial City part that just ended, I have always had a good impression of Emperor Xia. Although I expected that there would be conflicts in the later period, the darkening was too unexpected and very blunt. It is recommended that more foreshadowing be interspersed in the previous parts (or maybe I didn't notice it). 4. The one who impressed me the most in the article was actually my sister Shen Yu. She didn't write much in the early stage, but her image was deeply rooted in people's hearts. I thought that in the follow-up, she would start a small branch line about the protagonist's family through her sister, fill in the blanks of the protagonist's predecessor, and explain the work style, but it was left a bit unresolved; after all, the background is a modern society, network technology is very developed, and the protagonist's identity is exposed, and it is impossible to have no impact on the family at all. The summary does not hide the shortcomings and is worth reading. The above is my subjective and humble opinion. If any book friends have any objections, I would like to hear your opinions. Finally, I wish the author and editors a great operation and all book friends, I wish them success in their work and good health.

Yuyu, your work is like a bright pearl, shining in the ocean of novels. Your writing is delicate and powerful, every sentence is full of affection, and every word is carefully crafted. The story world you build is both real and fantastic, making people feel like they are in it and experiencing the joys and sorrows with the characters. In your works, I feel a profound insight into human nature and a meticulous observation of life. Your words can not only touch people's hearts, but also make readers think deeply. You are so talented that I can discover new highlights every time I read it, which makes people marvel at you. Praise the fish who brought us such works. Love you😘

Can there be more chapters? One chapter a day is not enough.

If there is a sect named Luoyun Sect and its location is Luoyun Sect, then it is Luoyun Sect. 😁

This book is really well written, and I hope the author will update it more every night. Unfortunately, it is short and ineffective. It only has high points but no climax, and it is not interesting. I believe it is not because the author does not want to write more, but there may be some hidden disease or reason. I hope that some book friends can point out the author's address, so that readers like us who care about the author's body can visit and "care" for the author in person, and strive to solve the author's physical or mental problems. Thank you.

I almost couldn't stand this introduction

Seventy-Two Earthly Evil Magical Powers

In the invincible flow, every opponent you encounter should be within the range that the protagonist's strength can easily solve, while in the upgrade flow, the enemy is too powerful and forces the protagonist to continuously upgrade in order to defeat it. This is not to say that the upgrade flow is not good, but those who are attracted by this title must come here to watch the show, rather than relying on breakthroughs on the battlefield, enemy cleverness, various treasure gifts, and various coincidences to barely defeat the opponent every time. It's okay once or twice, but it's really exhausting to live through every big event like this.

The character of the protagonist is completely broken! All the powerful people think that you are a peerless figure who dominates an era. The pinnacle earth immortal is the overlord of the upper world. Okay, you are killing this kid who transformed into a god and you still have to use a sword. What kind of abandoned disciple of the sect is there? Ancestor Dongtian. Oh, please take a look at Shenxiang. Brother Wushang Daozi is here. Then he gave an address and asked his daughter to go to Wushang Daozi to become his disciple. It's so funny. The overlord of the upper world can clearly see the address at such a random address. Is this the reincarnation of a true immortal? There is also the part where the demon tribe pretends to be a god. The master of a major divine system was offended several times by some little ant-like demons. Then, not a single demon was killed. He even said a lot of soft words and let go with a stone. Is the god so easy to talk to? What else is there to say? The protagonist with this kind of character needs to have his penis full when he takes action. Otherwise, he would rather just sit there, otherwise his character will collapse and his subscription will collapse!

The core content of this book is that the protagonist is either on the way to pretending to be B or in the process of pretending to be B. It is a very good subject. This book is so big that it has no normal content at all. It is just pretending to be B.

Sure enough, I shouldn't open a blind box. The 50% off group purchase for Qidian's New Year event wasted more than 1,000 starting coins. I didn't even see the paid chapters, so I couldn't stand it any longer. I really threw up.

Let me go, boss, I grew up reading your books.

After reading Chapter 27, the protagonist has never transcended so many realms and still feels weird? And it's the first time I've seen the practice of practicing Qi transformed into separate pieces. Why is it that Tiansheng Daozi is transforming Qi in such a long way? There are dozens of Qi practitioners who have been taught by someone personally? Must you suppress the protagonist? With two kittens nearby, can't you tell that the protagonist is in the first or second realm? It's really a lot of bugs and I'm not happy to complain about them.

In the fast food era, too much foreshadowing will only make it more and more boring. This is a male channel's failure to introduce a female queen again.

During other people's Qi refining period, they can't afford pills or talismans. They can only use a few spells. They don't dare to use magic weapons even if they have them. They have to rely on hard work when they go out. In this book, you can refine your qi, use magical powers and swords at will, and your spiritual pets will be sent to your door automatically. The low-level villains look like the protagonists have no magic power, so they must be garbage and they are all given away. The high-level boss sees that the protagonist has no magic power. Damn it, he must be a strong earthly immortal from thousands of years ago hiding his identity. I haven't even broken through to the first level, but I get involved in things here and there, and I just rely on my luck to get through the plot. There is a kind of beauty that I am proud of but I don't care about.

I think this book is about to collapse. A god exorcist is like being invincible in the world. Is the underworld opened by your family later? Will the earth explode when Tiangang comes out? Don't disturb me

Seeing the Zhulong Sword Master that was introduced in the Dragon Palace, to be honest, I think the realm setting of this book is just a bunch of answers. The previous article talked about the four realms of ancient cultivation, refining the essence to turn into Qi, refining Qi into spirit, refining spirit to return to void, and refining void to combine with Tao. Now Lianxu Realm and Hedao Realm are actually two realms... Could it be that the author split the realm of Lianxu Hedao into Lianxu Realm and Hedao Realm😅 I guess the author split it into eight realms: refining essence, transforming qi, practicing qi, transforming spirit, refining spirit, returning to emptiness, practicing emptiness, and hedao😅

A bit of a saint! The protagonist saves people several times and gets no thanks. Instead, the people he saves are disgusted or hate the protagonist, so the protagonist just laughs a little! This happened only once, but several times! The protagonist is a human but not a god. Even gods still have tempers. Does the protagonist have no temper at all?

When I saw the latest chapter, I was originally attracted by the introduction. I had read the Mahayana period, so I was expecting the author to write in his own style. However, it turned out that the rest of the story was just a slap in the face of a mentally retarded villain. The protagonist is also a formulaic template for appearing as a saint in front of others. To put it bluntly, the protagonist has no character, the villains are all imbecile, and the scripted scenes are too repetitive. The AI ​​may be able to write some new ideas. It's a pity that it is another bad novel written by a novice.

I really can't stand seeing the auction. This is a book from ten years ago, and this is not the way to dress it up.

The setting is okay, but your narrative method is too watery. A physical object or an idea of ​​the protagonist can be introduced in one or two words, which is a lot of nonsense. Are you adding a novel that can be automatically written by setting the AV🤔🤔🤔

No wonder it's so popular, it's fun to pretend to be cool and get slapped in the face, but it's too watery and a lot of nonsense

Don't try to get him to buy this book for half price, it's an interesting piece of shit.

This book is really good. I read it every day and made many friends. I also posted a lot of chapters, but only one of them was unpleasant and lacked interaction. The plot that impressed me the most was the Yunmeng section. I really liked the narration and interpretation of ancient Chinese myths. For the commentary, for example, Sidu, I devoured a lot of novels. For the first time, I felt that Yunmeng, the Lord of the Mirage Dragon, was very relevant. There was also a battle with the eldest prince of Jishui Dragon Palace. There were reasoning, profiling, and interpretation. It was very enjoyable to read. The scenes in Dream Back for Ten Thousand Years are too small to watch, followed by the Yinsi Fengdu chapter, the description of Niu Tou is a bit awkward. Personally, I feel that the power and grace of Supreme Daozi can be fully described through Niu Tou's perspective. At the beginning of the Imperial City chapter, I posted a chapter review, but I felt a little out of line. Daozi suddenly lost his humanity, Da Mao became the demon king, Bai Xue left home, Ryuko slept, there was an extra apprentice, Jian Zheng disappeared, the emperor colluded with unknown forces and rebelled against humanity. The recent plot is not as exciting as before. What the operating officer said may be that the author's real life is somewhat trivial and affected his performance! To be honest, I really like this work. I hope the author will go well and write more exciting stories. Come on

The reading experience is unfinished. Half of the pitfalls and foreshadowings have not been filled in. The progress of the last twenty or thirty chapters has slowed down half of the book. Except for the protagonist, all the supporting characters have disappeared. Did the author suddenly not want to write because of something happened in the past month? The previous data looked okay.

It feels pretty good. It's written in great detail. How well described. If it weren't described, what would happen if the protagonist traveled around and didn't write about the scenes and inner feelings? So how do you depict characters? How do you describe the feeling between before and now? The protagonist is very free-spirited and open-minded. The previous protagonist could just grab other people's things. He has the strength, but he didn't. He just punishes evil and promotes good regardless of other people's opinions. I really like it. It's not the kind of person who is insidious and cunning for the sake of cultivation. The kind of person who wants to become an evil immortal!

Personally, I prefer to read these novels about the magical powers of Tiangang and Earthly Evil, but currently this novel is the only one that depicts the supernatural powers of Tiangang and Earthly Evil that are so shocking. I was a little fascinated by it. Now I am afraid of the author's eunuch. Also, I'm asking for other similar novels! ! !

I think it's very good. I subscribe every time I save 100 points. It's really too painful to read it every day. I need to save more to make it more comfortable. However, I always see some book friends talking about water, rumination, etc. I wonder if other book friends think this book is mostly good or watery?