The Cyber ​​Galaxy of Cultivation

You must maintain the aura you had at the beginning of the last book. It's best not to be so protected by the big boss again. In the later part of the last book, the protagonist simply won. It is obvious that he was a genius with a lot of imagination in the early stage 😁

This book was really good in the early stages, but when I wrote about the mother, it started to get ugly. I feel like it's messed up now. I was attracted to it in the early stages, but not in the later stages.

When choosing talents for foundation building, choose the most rubbish ones. If there are good ones, just don't choose them, just play them.

It feels like the author comes up with something every time he wants it, and every plot is very sudden.

In short, if the protagonist is awesome and the one with the strongest talent is not happy, just choose the most ordinary one. Why bother? Brother, are you so stubborn? Are you an expert? Didn't you work your way up from the bottom by panning for gold? ? ?

After reading about forty chapters, I found that there were too many chapters written about my sister and aunt, and they were completely incompatible with cultivating immortality.

Brother, I always feel like you were force-feeding me a reply when it was about to be published. I really can't bear it. The transition is too abrupt. I feel uncomfortable watching it.

How should I put it, replacing cultivation with source power, spiritual energy or something, it is not inconsistent at all. The cultivator feels like a big-headed soldier, unable to draw any combat power at all

Cultivation to Immortality has the aesthetic elements of cultivating immortality, but at least as far as the beginning of the plot is concerned, it does not show the temperament and logic of the Cultivation to Immortality category. As far as science fiction is concerned, calling it a space opera may be considered a compliment. In fact, if you really want to make it unique, the best strategy is actually to use AI to make pictures with special aesthetics, so that at least the superficial elements can match the two elements of immortality and science fiction. The following is a detailed discussion of the aesthetic elements of immortality and science fiction: I personally think that the logic of contemporary immortality writing is actually closer to workplace writing, except that it eliminates the correlation with reality through element replacement, thereby ensuring that no matter what rules the author writes against the heavens, he will not trigger the reader's empirical resistance. From the perspective of aesthetic elements, one of the core aesthetic elements of cultivating immortality is longevity, which is manifested in the decrease in social intensity caused by the long life cycle. Another aesthetic core is "Tao". "Tao" makes characters deal with things rather than people. It emphasizes dealing with things, which is a kind of engineer thinking to a certain extent. As long as you do a good job in "Tao", you can naturally achieve a class jump (level promotion) and gain social status. (Of course, you may think that fantasy has similar settings, but fantasy emphasizes the refreshing feeling of class breakthrough, which is different from the logic of cultivating immortals. It emphasizes more on the social feeling after class jump, such as the praise of various people before and after the breakthrough. The intention of this expression is very clear). Aesthetic elements of soft science fiction: The excitement that science fiction can provide is actually very high-end, But from the perspective of aesthetic elements, the aesthetic elements of science fiction works are actually concentrated on humanistic features and technological tree ideas. But for a work to be called science fiction, you can't just take out two elements. Generally speaking, there should not be too many singularities that deviate from reality. A good work can extend from a basic singularity setting to a complete system through physics or engineering knowledge from high school to undergraduate. Readers' recognition of the system is not trust in the basic singularity setting, but trust in the basic common sense of science and engineering. This trust ensures readers' immersion in the world view. Moreover, there are social relations and superstructure based on the hyper-realistic system. In other words, the best configuration of science fiction is a huge system based on a small idea and introduced by a large number of concepts from realistic deterministic disciplines (physics and chemistry) and empirical disciplines (social sciences). What I feel in this book is actually a chimeric product of cyberpunk style and space opera. The actual sense of immortality is not very strong. Only the surface layer matches immortality and science fiction. The inner layer can only be said to be a fantasy starry sky opera with restrained emotional expression

I casually scrolled through the comment area and saw no negative comments. I will probably delete this post, so it doesn't matter; It's just average. If I say it's not poisonous, I'll feel dizzy again if I say okay. It's like a fake cyborg and a real cultivator. Cultivate immortality, but technology. He's a cyborg, but he's really cultivating immortality. It is filled with a lot of unbelievable sense of rationality that makes people go numb. Inexplicably soft rice. The way the eldest lady shows off her muscles is to melt the table into a sword! Yes, this is a great power attributed to oneself, but the eldest lady doesn't even have a magic weapon? ! It's impossible to say that none of the elders of the young lady have ascended and don't have so many resources, or that they are pure good people who won't leave backdoors in the programs of low-level people, right?

I see a lot of people saying that playing with the eldest lady is a poisonous point, and I don't understand. Isn't there a bunch of starting points for the protagonist to upgrade to the monster-killing style? If you don't like it, turn left. No one is forcing you to read it. Coming out with your own style is the key. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The majority are silently supportive, and the results can prove it.

I really can't understand the author's economic setting. A logistics plus combat personnel has to buy combat equipment by herself. Even the eldest lady who has recently gone through a large-scale supply seems to have to spend money on her own ship?

I keep writing about triangle relationships, I have to 🤮

The protagonist can definitely be called a soft rice immortal 🤭

Cyber ​​Cultivation❎ Interstellar Cultivation✓ The novel is a bit two-dimensional and full of Japanese style.

Isn't it okay to practice immortality on a daily basis? I have to do something to save the world 😅

The author really thought carefully about the content of each chapter in this novel. At the beginning, I gave the protagonist a character setting in his previous life, where he had a child several years old and had to teach him how to learn, but the character's behavior did not match the setting. When recruiting crew members, the protagonist was asked to be an undercover agent, and he met his former colleagues, but have you forgotten that your previous setting was that Li Ji was recruiting people? Didn't the protagonist go to work as an undercover agent? These colleagues told the protagonist, author, do you think it's strange? There is also a problem with the main character recovering his body, the author, who temporarily added that it hurts when his arm is strained and he clenches his fists. Don't you think it's weird to set it up just for this setting? The protagonist is a cultivator. It turns out that your spiritual power can only be used for energy attacks, and there is no physical change. I think it is better than fighting spirit, internal strength, etc. At least people can use it to heal internal injuries. It's really weird, setting for the sake of setting

This book is the only novel I have read in so many years. The protagonist has no cheats, no extraordinary wisdom, no tricks, and is not outstanding in the era he lives in. There is also a novel that can be read patiently. To sum up, it is comfortable.

? ? ? ? ? Don't even tell me if it's bad.

The writing is very good. I just hope that the protagonist can take more initiative and not be led by Aunt Ru Nan so easily. There will be more changes. I will give you the monthly ticket. I hope it will be a big boost 🙏🙏

Good Guys is another good book. The three female characters in this book are well written, but the others are just so-so.

Reading this book is really not just about the interpersonal relationships The protagonist's various thoughts and ideas about spiritual power, space and practice are the most important thing to watch As for the interpersonal relationships, I think they are pretty good I just always feel that being a virgin is too sad I don't need to go into details If the author feels that he is not good at just give it a few strokes The relationship is so close, but he has to be a eunuch It feels the same and awkward

I feel like this pig's foot is a licking dog I haven't slept with one for so long

It feels like the stall is too big to write on.

The writing is good, but the plot setting seems to have some problems. With the author's writing ability, the plot of Long Aotian, coupled with the background of cultivating immortals in the starry sky, this refreshing article can directly prove the truth and become a god.

Is it done before putting it on the shelves? The two soldiers resisting their superiors is tantamount to rebellion. Let's just treat them as mercenaries and sign up for a group. However, even mercenaries will not do this because the captain is a golden elixir monk. They can definitely not resist by sticking together. There is definitely a problem if they dare to resist at this time.

Dear brothers, if you still want to read about the subject of cyber cultivating immortality, you can read the record of returning to the true state of cyberspace, which talks about programming and cultivating immortality in detail.

It sucks? I've been subscribing for so long and I'm so disappointed! ! ! !

Author, if one day you feel that you can't continue writing this book and want to end it quickly, you can arrange for the protagonist to explore the ruins of ancient civilizations (the arsenal). Fanny is too lazy to solve the puzzle, so she throws a fireball down and boom! The whole book is finished!

Wonderful, mortals become immortals through the mechanical ascension of weak flesh and blood, Sun Wukong is a silicon-based life born immortal, Taoist golden elixir is a nano core, Buddhist golden body is a bionic prosthetic body, bloodline inheritance is system pre-installation, ever-changing is nano-reconstruction of program module, divine light spell is laser weapon particle jet, divine consciousness control object is signal response electromagnetic manipulation, magic weapon recognition The main one is password locking and intelligent identification, becoming a god and becoming an immortal is the granting of system registration permissions, cultivating the Tao is from adding functional plug-ins to system iterative reinstallation, the immortal Sifan is an alternative omnic crisis, removing the immortal bones and knocking down the mortal world is a permission block and denying access, the decline of Taoism is a technology blockade, the end of the world is resource depletion, the disappearance of immortals and gods is an interstellar expedition, perfect