Bankruptcy Beast

People who were pushed over by others said they looked familiar. In the last book, I was persuaded to quit by the elders around the protagonist. But here we are, I hope this book pays more attention to the positive characters, instead of making disgusting characters, and pays more attention to rationality. Hey, until now when I click on your work, the first thing that comes to mind is Uemoto's disgusting principal, and the second thing that comes to mind is Skeleton Alpha who inexplicably switched from ice to fire in the middle 😅 I have basically no impression of the protagonist, but I really can't forget these two.

After reading more than 200 chapters of this book, I have the same feeling. There is nothing poisonous or refreshing about it. It is just plain and bland. I don't have any sense of expectation after reading it. It makes sense that it is not popular.

What I want to see is the protagonist. Why does Bai Xiaoyu have more scenes than the protagonist and his character is so unlikable?

You have to work hard on this book, don't forget some settings. In the previous book, I forgot about the strength levels of pet beasts. All of them were only based on bloodline levels. It's so fake

I hate that little white fish so much, I feel like I have no sense of boundaries

How can a mature book review section not have idioms for solitaire? Let me start with: Good Luck and Good Luck

He has an unpleasant personality and goes to dangerous suburbs just to take pictures.

What is the significance of the existence of the character Bai Xiaoyu? I feel like a completely annoying and brainless man... Is it used to prove that human talent can be as strong as cheaters and countless resources? It's annoying to act impulsively, and you don't think about whether your actions will cause trouble to others or put friends in crisis Can't the protagonist also practice well and digest the resources he has received or master the newly upgraded skills? Do you have to keep wandering around to level up and fight monsters, and you still claim to be improving your strength in actual combat? And no one has seen the record yet, and there is no way to use it to advance to the Star Ranking to get rewards. There is no benefit other than using up all the hard-earned resources at once. Has this impulsive character spent more than 40 years in his previous life in vain?

Can you kill this disgusting thing like Bai Xiaoyu?

This setting is pretty good, but the power structure and era design feel a bit disconnected. There are also sentences that are not concise enough. The protagonist often talks to himself. It would be better if it were a rhetorical question. The constant use of declarative sentences shows that the protagonist is ignorant and ignorant. The protagonist is uneducated, doesn't study hard, doesn't understand anything, and doesn't have any thoughts of his own. Then the author takes this question and writes down the number of words. Whatever problem he encounters, it's like what is the situation, why is this happening, what should be done, etc. Under normal circumstances, he should think first instead of directly asking questions, and then highlight the protagonist's wisdom. The biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist's knowledge reserve is too low and he cannot think for himself. The author's desire to improve the status of his companions does not conflict with the protagonist's own abilities. The protagonist should be the guide, and it may be better to lead the companions by himself. This may give people a better impression. It's like a chef and a gourmet. The gourmet definitely understands the theory of cooking, but he can give better suggestions and guidance to the chef. To sum up, this book has deleted the protagonist and relied on his friends and a few pets to write. The protagonist is useless and is just a tool.

I don't understand the setting of your natural treasure... It is born after the death of a creature in some forbidden place. Does that mean it will not be born if it succeeds? Then in the chapter about the vine behind you, you also said that the vine may be a natural treasure, but it just transformed successfully, so it failed. If it has been a natural treasure all day long, how can it succeed again? ... Can anyone explain it?

Of course, it's okay if you don't change it. If you want to change it, I think you can make an evolution or something. And the author should not be restricted by the previous books. When interacting with the beast, the beast can talk to the master in the same way as the master. For example, Qing Beast "Roar, Master, I want to eat", and the master "Okay, I will cook it for you."

The cry of someone who wants to get rich is too dramatic. The sound of "ta da da" reminds me of the click of a gun. It's better to just make gold coins.

Dongfeng Express, the mission must be fulfilled

I hope the protagonist can be of some use and improve himself

Eh! Completed! Can be slaughtered

Because the update is too slow, it's painful to follow it every day. I've been doing it for a long time. I've forgotten all the previous ones and have to start reading again. Good luck, author.

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