Swallowed Star: Reboot, Eternal Serpent!

No wonder the grades are not up to par. The original writing was okay, but it was mixed with his own personal belongings. The author wrote that Hong deliberately sold the interests of his fellow earthmen in exchange for glory and wealth. This means that the author thought that he knew that the earth was special before entering the sea of ​​​​illusion, so he deliberately sold it in exchange for profits. However, Hong did not know that the earth was special before he entered the sea of ​​​​illusion. Can you do less private stuff?

The story is so poorly written that the protagonist basically works alone behind closed doors until he dies. The improvement in the protagonist's paper strength is indeed good, but it would be boring to keep writing about it.

Yes, there is an obvious mistake. The virtual world was created by the original ancestors to seize the universe. Other races do not have such a thing as the virtual world, and they cannot log in. Only the human race can do it, and the human race cannot seize the body. They can only log in by enslaving the human race, and the slave is a human race.

Another nanny Luo Feng who can't have children. I didn't see how kind he is to his relatives.

In my opinion, if you have enough strength, you can directly wipe out the monsters and unify the earth, and use resources to cultivate talents. The earth is as small as dust and the small planets are still fighting each other. With so many fanfics being devoured, is there no one who thinks the same as me?

The setting of opportunities is too complicated, and the realm of cultivation is vague. It is always introduced but still difficult to understand. I couldn't put it down even after watching it twice.

He is a strong man of some level. He can be careless with his words and carelessly. But everything the protagonist does is clearly arranged by his family? It's so frustrating, it's better not to read it, keep going high and low, the more you write, the worse it gets.

I've read a lot of fanfics, but I really can't stand this one. In addition to borrowing from the Devouring System and some characters. Are the others related to Devouring? The protagonist of Devouring is Luo Feng. Even if the fandom is not, Luo Feng has not been mentioned once in dozens of chapters. Do you really think I'm here to see you having fun? What kind of fanfic is Devouring fanfic without Luo Feng?

It's fine for the author to arrange for Qian Shui Ai Chen to be the heroine, but it's very awkward to rush into the heroine's lineage. . Forcing the protagonist to arrange a future training path and instructor may seem to be of great help to the protagonist, but in fact, these protagonists can achieve it by relying on their own talents. Even if they are close, it will not have much impact. After all, the protagonist's own skills are powerful enough. And this way of forcibly binding a relationship is very unpleasant. The relationship between the camps is very awkward, not to mention the relationship between men and women. It is like taking the protagonist directly to the mountain to be the wife of the village, and waiting for the protagonist to get used to it. What kind of god-king potential is meaningless at all? The top ten talents in the genius battle plus the protagonist's teaching talent are enough to prepare the master of the universe. Can this book be written as a god-king?

If the original ancestor knew a little secret, the human race in this era would not be so miserable. Star Tower? If I can't accept my master, I'll keep it and wait for my human genius to get it. The tomb boat? What's wrong with me just guarding the door and not letting you in? Siege? Find out more about the tenth level soul attack sweep. The world of Jin? The same door is blocked. Luo Feng just needs to grow up step by step. No pressure? Let me put a few aliens in there to put some pressure on you.