I Can Build Miraculous Things

I thought it was a cyber adventure story, but it turned out to be a romance story! ! !

You keep up the good work, I'll read other people's books and give you a monthly vote 🙂

How should I put it? The plot of a person being tricked to death has been written for many chapters and I am a bit speechless.

No, I don't understand. Until Chapter 51, I always thought it was just a memory, and then until the latest chapter, it has always been what happened on the planet Earth... I don't understand, how do you calculate 7-23, and when will the plot be connected. Everything else is fine. No matter what theme you write, what is the main plot of your novel? I'll just put it aside and read In Search of Lost Time. Why don't you stop and repair the front first. I was almost stunned.

Whatever is written is messy, just write the moon line itself, and describe the boring and frustrating plot of the past through fragments of memories. The first three pictures were written about the moon, and then suddenly they started to be written about the time of the earth. What do you think?

I can only say that Chapters 7 to 23 make you feel out of place. It seems that the plot of cyberspace has been forced onto the Japanese two-dimensional body, and then skipping this chapter is close to the wasteland survival style. I hope the author will think about what he wants to write and make some choices. It's better not to have everything.

The beginning tells the later story, but I read the following paragraphs as memories. After looking at the table of contents, it is quite long, so I read it as the main text. However, some people may be disgusted by these.

The three golden chapters at the beginning were so explosive that I was shocked! ! Knowing that someone else has something good is yours? ! Regardless of whether the prosthetic doctor is a good person or a bad person, the boss who opens the door for business is not a criminal, right? Taking other people's property by force? ! How about the author correcting it, exchanging or picking up the missing ones? This should be much better...

At first I saw that it was about a story set a hundred years later in Cyberpunk 2077, and I became a little interested. Seeing some peculiarities in the Miracle Illustrated Book, my interest deepened. Seeing the Riddler and the riddle-like human-machine relationship, my interest was reduced by one. Seeing that the protagonist's strength fluctuates up and down according to the author's interests and the plot, let's see him again later.

Chapters 1 to 6 were originally thought to be cyberpunk or wasteland, but chapters 7 to 23 became a waste of time. Chapter 24 is said to be directly connected to the previous six chapters and is equivalent to starting a new book. In addition to Goldfinger, changing the name of the protagonist can be read as another book. The length of this flashback is too long, long-winded and boring, especially when the first six chapters have already laid the groundwork, and the protagonist is turned back in time, it feels very severe. The plot is an old-fashioned story of an employer betraying mercenaries. The storyline is not good, and the explanation of the settings is too blunt and fragmented. I can only wait for this paragraph to be finished and then check the situation.

The protagonist will most likely be involved in the incident between Shu Qinglan and Kanda Kyoichi

I saw the latest chapter, waiting for the update

Shennong is here. The writing ability is fine, forget the rest. Cool articles are not written in the style of cool articles, nor are they written in the style of intellectual articles. From time to time, I will get a little winded, and I will be plotted. I know there are problems and I will kill a bunch of teammates with confidence. I am convinced. If you just want to write a novel, you can.

Then the plot of the eldest lady is too abrupt

After reading Chapter 8, the beginning is all about narration, setting up the background, etc. There are too few dialogues, the characters cannot be established, and the plot does not develop much. It is dry and a bit chaotic. For Goldfinger, I always choose one of three, and I didn't talk about the rare objects at all. To be honest, I came here just for the rare objects, hoping to see interesting rare objects. However, after a long time, I just talked about what the protagonist got, and didn't mention the use of these things 🙂

Mechanical ascension, genetic ascension, psychic ascension, right?

The characters, the world view, and the writing are all good. Such a long memory at the beginning destroys the continuity of reading. I hope I can continue writing it and don't die.

My suggestion is to keep updating and revising again. This is too messy.

Author, has your book been blocked? The number of comments is 0. I refreshed it several times and it still looks like this

To be honest, when I just finished reading the first few chapters, I felt that everything was OK, but because I continued to look at it one more time, I almost blinded my eyes... Let me ask you straight up, what is this?