I Come Clean About Everything in Shrouding the Heavens

The self-destruction was practically pointless; there was absolutely no thrill from it.

The first four chapters are a complete mess. I couldn't even finish reading them. They claim the protagonist is self-destructing but never get to the point. Out of thousands of words, there's only one or two main sentences; the rest is just nonsensical rambling.

Without chapter comments, it's no fun; at least reading other people's chapter comments can be entertaining.

He rambled on and on, talking about self-destruction, but ended up rambling on about a bunch of irrelevant nonsense, saying nothing important and failing to grasp the key points.

The intelligence aspect is reasonable; anyone who transmigrates into a world they know is a novel could reasonably guess the reason for their birth. Just as Galileo saw stars were round through a telescope, he naturally inferred that the Earth might also be round. Having read many fanfictions, the most speechless thing is reincarnation. How can your reincarnation fall from the upper narrative to the lower narrative? In your previous life, you were a natural person like Yang Zhendong, Wang Zhong, Zhang Wei, and Jiang Huping, and in your next life, you're reincarnated into a novel as a lower narrative. What kind of karma did you commit to be so unlucky? As for the original author dreaming of observing the stories of the protagonists in another world and writing them into a book, that's even more full of logical flaws. They're all Earthlings, which is one thing, but most importantly, the author is just a mortal in the real world. The existence of ice at the lunar poles is a result confirmed by astronomical telescopes and lunar robots over the past few decades. Therefore, the world-building is actually very illogical and hollow. The author is completely unaware of the truly unknown and truly powerful.

As a new author, giving myself a good review isn't too much to ask, is it?

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