
Shrouding the Heavens: I Became the Ghost Face Mask
遮天:我成了鬼脸面具
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 137k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 3d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
60Chapters
54Votes
171Recs
4Fans
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Reader comments 5
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The ideas are interesting, but the plot is boring.
@readerSummon Shennong
Author I have a suggestion
That is to say, the protagonist can become an independent creature in the later stage just like the God Baby.
In this type of article, your idea is fine, but your entry point is wrong. What this kind of fanfic requires is a strong-willed and emperor-like route that fits the theme. From this point of view, your entry point should be after the ruthless man becomes emperor. After he falls into transformation, the protagonist travels through the past and becomes a terrain. Then he wants to escape from his control and become a human being. Then he quickly recovers the same combat power as the emperor and lives for nine lives. Your writing method and entry point are not interesting at all, and you have no ideas. It is not as good as my outline. You can either write a sweet story about falling in love with a ruthless person, then pretend I didn't say it
This is an autobiography of a ruthless person. I haven't seen the main character in many chapters and it's getting boring!