Shock! the Game I Designed Has Come to Reality

The writing is pretty good, but I need to pay more attention to the erhuayin. As a southerner, I am not very used to the erhuayin. Everything else is pretty good, and the settings are also good.

The pace is very fast. Basically, the first three chapters have reached a small peak of the plot, and the protagonist's IQ is online. It's okay to read so far. I'll save it first and gain some weight before reading.

When will it be put on the shelves? I'm sure it will be fully subscribed and supported. It's a really good book.

To be honest, I can't accept the fact that people die at every turn. After all, this is a game. Realistically speaking, can't you do something like resurrection? Even if you are talking about another world, I am not so disgusted.

The character of the protagonist is okay. Basically, he kills decisively without being sloppy. It would be better if the fighting scenes were more grand.

Updates should be faster. It's not enough to watch. Is it okay to update three times a day?

The three moles were killed as soon as they appeared? I thought it was a mini-boss

The protagonist's combat power improves very quickly, and the fights are basically crushing rounds, which is very exciting.

I'm confused. Just type, why do you have to add the pronunciation of "er"? Is it to reduce the number of characters or something?

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I don't know what the author's purpose was in writing the character Xu Taozi. I personally feel it's too pretentious.

When will the update be added? It will be available at least five times, right?

Come on

Come on

The protagonist is different from other people's versions.

Is it on the shelves? Is the update stable? I read the opening two chapters and it was okay. Let's look at fattening up

This is a pink new book, please support it.

I have always been unable to figure out one question: why Hongjun wanted to recruit disciples to preach. Why do his disciples and grandchildren also like to create sects and even create races? Why do the ancients always say that there are three gangs of heroes? Three cobblers are the best of Zhuge Liang.