The Wizard Starts with a Muscular Hunk

The mass of the earth is about 5.965*10^24 Kilograms, which is 5.965*10^21 Tons. 100 Million is 10^8, which is 5.965*10^5 Billion tons, which is 5965 billion tons. This is just the Earth, which is not even a drop in the ocean in the universe. It weighs as little as a tiny planet like dust. And you, my friend, with a mere 360 ​​million tons of force, dare to speak so wildly against the interstellar fortress. The ignorant are fearless, that's true!

The writing quality is acceptable, but the plot setting is brainless. The instructor dares to ignore the lord's heir and is insulted and ridiculed by the civilian militia. The child dares to provoke the lord's heir. This is still a place to train soldiers. Is this a group of rebels? Feudal lords do not need disobedient and class-afraid soldiers

The protagonist was bleeding and fainted during the battle. In ancient times, a servant wanted to teach his master's son a lesson.

Is a punch of 300 million tons very powerful? A bigger mountain has more than 300 million tons, right?

It can be seen that the author has absolutely no understanding of the Western Middle Ages. All his knowledge comes from the useless wizard and knight stories written on the Internet. Moreover, they are well protected by modern society. They honestly believe that a 15-year-old in the Middle Ages is still a child, and even nobles are no big deal. But let me tell you, Western medieval civilians cannot pretend to be nobles. The nobles have their own language system (the language of the nobles, taking real history as an example, they are usually proud to speak French and Latin). Those who pretend to be nobles will be killed, because nobles are sacred and inviolable. This kind of extraordinary society will only become more serious, and nobles basically have dominant genetic genes. You can read the Legend of Long Ma. Also, if you think that a 15-year-old is still a child in the Middle Ages, so being ignorant is a minor problem, then you will not be able to survive even a day in the Middle Ages, and you will definitely die. Because you live in a lord and do not understand the laws of this lord, you will be hacked to death before you are fifteen or sixteen years old.

The main character of this book is a bit crazy, and there is no foreshadowing. The first 20 or so chapters have a mature and stable feeling, and then he suddenly starts to have intermittent seizures in more than 20 chapters. Then the author explains that the main character has a mental illness, and it feels like it is the author's own bad taste. In short, I gave up. If you can accept it, you can try reading it.

When I read Chapter 15, the protagonist is still a noob. It is known that a group of bandits are coming nearby. The protagonist must go hunting alone. He doesn't know what the use of hunting is. He just wants to go anyway. He is so brave.

The protagonist faints from blood and faints after 5 minutes. This is a bit weird. Can he still fight well later? Have you hunted so many times before without seeing any blood? Suddenly he hit a big knight and he fainted. Forcibly add drama. The author writes wherever he wants, and wants to balance the protagonist's abilities, but this is not the way to write. At present, the author has a la carte. The overall article is average to below average, so just give it a read. If you add one or two of these poisonous points, it will almost become toxic.

You go to kill a robber, and then the robber's men come to chase you. No normal person would say such a thing. The author thinks he is very humorous and thinks this is a joke. I can only say that this kind of dialogue plot is really SB and affects the perception

If the previous part is okay, although it is a little bit toxic, it is still watchable. However, the protagonist becomes crazy for no reason. There is no foreshadowing.

Muscular tyrants just want to be big. Why do you need to learn the bone reduction technique? It's superfluous.

When I came into contact with the section of Silk Song in the Wizarding World, my scalp went numb when I read it, and I felt weird when I wrote it.

I jumped to the back and took a look, saw that I was about to shrink back, and gave up. Why do so many people who write about muscular protagonists have to shrink into sissies? I don't quite understand. If you have built muscles but are afraid of showing them to others, then why don't you just write about ordinary people as protagonists? It feels like the muscles are equivalent to "mecha". When fighting, they explode, but they are afraid of looking the same to others at ordinary times.

This is another novel about sucking the blood of the family in the early stage and becoming a wizard in the later stage. This is the same routine now, can't it be changed?

Why do so many people want to kill the protagonist? The routine is too old

Until Chapter 21, I felt that the pace was okay. Chapter 21 was the turning point.

The author still insists on arguing, just change it.

There is a big poisonous point in the third golden chapter. The protagonist is watching Goldfinger in class and grinning stupidly?

You might as well continue writing about zoos.