I Have a Safari Park

During the past few days at work, I realized that I had been reading this book for a long time. I was busy around the Chinese New Year and had been saving it to gain weight. After reading it today, I suddenly felt a sense of dissonance. So where does this feeling of dissonance lie? Personally I think the problem is with the pacing of the book. First of all, what is worthy of praise is that the author's writing style is very smooth, and the refreshing points are also accurate, namely: the communication between the protagonist Fang Ye and the animals, the praise from tourists and other consumers, the communication between the main supporting characters, and the simulated management provided by the system. But since it was put on the shelves, the author seems to want to list all the cool points in one go. Instead, it has lost the comfortable rhythm and spirituality it had before it was put on the shelves. In my personal opinion, "Shuangdian" is nothing more than a pile-up of plots, which are indeed divided into sequential and detailed ones. Taking the previous Jiaojiao as an example, why does the successful construction of the New Tiger Pavilion make people feel that this is a good point? The answer is very simple, because there is a foreshadowing. Whether it is the process of "taming" Jiaojiao, the addition of ice cream, or even the promotion of the live broadcast platform, they are all foreshadowing for the future construction of a new Tiger Pavilion and the surge in tourists. The details are appropriate and the writing is smooth. The live broadcast will not become the main line of the story, nor will "Jiao Jiao" be singled out. The plot will naturally follow a natural progression, and the excitement will naturally be successfully detonated. But looking back at the Mid-Autumn Festival section in the following article, I think it's really a bit confusing here. From the heroine Hui Hui who interrupted the rhythm at the beginning (mainly because the emotional scene is rather abrupt and the heroine is a bit of a vase) to Zhuang Xiaobai who appears later, and then to the group of tourists described in the profile, at first glance, the good points are indeed detonated one after another, but several of the good points quietly failed and turned into flaws. As a result, the plot naturally becomes protracted and the rhythm becomes laggy. Coupled with the discomfort of readers who cannot get enough of it, naturally more people keep the book and fewer people follow it. This is what I personally feel is a pity about this book. This is the first time I write a book review because of my feelings. Now I only see Fang Ye talking on the phone with his parents. I hope the author can take advantage of this juncture to repair the flaws and flaws in various characters and plots. Of course, I am just a reader, and this is just my personal idea. Even if the author does not adopt it, it will not make this novel worse. Finally, this is the review. I hope the author subscribes to Dafa and has a happy Lunar New Year in 2021.

I want to see the white-headed langur. It has a unique and beautiful appearance and a gentle and humane temperament. It is a first-class protected animal and an endangered species. It is only found in China and its habitat is in Guangxi

There are some things that may never happen around us in our lifetime, such as wild animals, disabled people... We are very small, and all kinds of things in life have occupied our sight, and we have no spare time to pay attention to other things. At this time, someone told us - we need help there! We are not stingy and happy to lend a helping hand. Share, forward, answer questions, donate... Even if it's only once, even if it's just a little bit, it's all help. Orange is the first and so far the only very special author I have met. In order to write novels, I have to learn relevant professional knowledge. The novels are very interesting and the content is as close to professional as possible. (After all, Orange is not a professional, we should praise if we do well, and we should not despise if we do not, but encourage) This book taught me real knowledge, such as: How to rescue animals in distress around you, don't take them home as soon as you see them, maybe they don't need you. How to take care of them from the perspective of animals, instead of wishfully thinking that you are doing a good job, maybe they are not happy. Wait, wait, etc., The book is full of wisdom. I like it so much, like it so much, like it so much, like it so much... From the book, I saw Orange's concern for wild animals, it's real! ! ! ➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖➖ Inspirational speech, I don't usually talk so much😂 A donation, a little thought, I am also a poor person, I can't afford a small amount of money ≥≤ I hate moral kidnapping. Don't dislike my lack of money. After all, I donated it (ˇ╮ˇ) and ignore you A dollar is money! Think about yourself taking out a coin and nervously but expectantly throwing it into the donation box, hoping to help others. Suddenly, the people around him applauded, full of praise. Just one coin, a handful of coins, a coin that doesn't feel bad if lost, a coin that costs the price of a glass of mineral water... I donated! I was praised! I feel quite happy thinking about it! Hehe(//∇//) Of course, I donated ten coins this time~ I am willful because I like it! Praise me! It's impossible not to praise! After all, donations also need encouragement٩( 'ω' )و

It's a really good novel. I usually like to watch documentaries about people and nature. In this novel, I have a sense of pictures. On the contrary, I feel that I can feel more about these natural ecology, their uniqueness and charm. Before this novel, I had never imagined that I could write about animals and zoos like this, but after reading this novel, I searched for similar novels using keywords such as animals, zoos, and cute pets. None of them gave me the feeling of harmonious coexistence between man and nature. Basically, it was just how rare the animals were, and how powerful the protagonists were. They were able to subjugate or conquer them, and they did not introduce too much about their habits, nor did they build suitable homes for them. I hope the author can stick to it and not describe too much emotional drama, because the protagonists are animals and nature! Thank you to the author for making me love breeders even more!

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The Siberian tiger, also known as the Siberian tiger, is distributed in northeast Asia, namely the Siberia region of Russia, North Korea and Northeast China. The traditional view is that other tiger subspecies are derived from the expansion and differentiation of Siberian tigers to other parts of Asia. Animal World - Siberian Tiger The head is large and round, with several black horizontal stripes on the forehead, often connected in the middle, very much like the word "king", so it is known as the "King of the Jungle" and "The King of Beasts". The grabbing height of the Siberian tiger when standing The Siberian tiger is the largest carnivorous cat in existence. The average male body length is 2.3 Meters, and the tail length is about 1 and the average is 250 kilograms The body color is brown in summer and light yellow in winter. There are multiple narrow black stripes on the back and sides of the body The Siberian tiger lives in areas covered with forests, shrubs and weeds. Lives alone, exhibits territorial behavior, and has an activity range of more than 100 square kilometers. Fierce in nature, quick in movement, good at swimming, and good at climbing trees, Siberian tigers mainly prey on large and medium-sized mammals such as deer, sheep, and wild boars, as well as small mammals and birds. There will be fights between male Siberian tigers during the estrus period. There will be fierce fights over territory. Animal World - Siberian Tiger The Siberian tiger's gestation period is 103-105 days, and it gives birth to 2-4 cubs in one litter. The life span of a wild Siberian tiger is 15-17 years.

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This book is very good, I have followed it●‿●

What animal do you want to see?

Some suggestions for this book Every time I see a hotel in a zoo that is going to be built, I can't finish it in one day, so I take it in. I went to the Chongqing Zoo, which covers an area of 45 hectares. I finished it in more than 2 hours, walking very slowly, and kept taking pictures. My friend finished it in more than an hour. I feel that it is a bit early to build a hotel, but the construction of the zoo feels a bit slow. Recently, I wrote about pandas, and I feel like two of them have passed. There are only five meters from the stands above the exhibition hall to the pandas, so the panda exhibition hall is too small. At the same time, there are too few types of animals, such as monkeys, and turtles. I feel that the development of the zoo is a bit too slow. We can extract more animals, such as the little white tigers, which are more precious, and bring them back from abroad through the system and then register them. It will not be too abrupt. You can build a memorial hall for extinct animals at the same time as a zoo. After all, A large one, instead of a small exhibition hall, there is an aquarium, and then there is a supporting animal theme amusement park, like a Disney theme park. The aquarium can have a supporting water park. Since it is a system, just plan the world's largest park. By the way, I personally feel that animal performances are not completely impossible. I feel that some animals also like to perform. Give them rewards after the performance, like the parrot shot before. Isn't v also a kind of animal performance? With the increase in the flow of people, I feel that the zoo's gates and other infrastructure must also be renovated. The previous poor zoo must not be able to accommodate tens of thousands of people. The above is just a personal suggestion. It is better to read the author. I really like this novel. It is very well written. Let's put forward our opinions together and build the zoo of our dreams. After all, Zoo Star is too difficult. Let's read the author's writing, hahahaha

The zoo really doesn't know how to draw 😢 so I have to draw a bird

Nowadays, many children know about Africa's zebras, wildebeests and cheetahs, but they know almost nothing about our native golden cats, clouded leopards, raccoon dogs, serows, deer and muntjacs, and have never even heard of their names. I have to praise the Shanghai Zoo for this. The Shanghai Zoo has specially set up a native animal area, where my country's native species of deer, muntjac, small-clawed otter, raccoon dog, etc. Can be seen. Our country is the country with the most species diversity in the world. It is one of the few fully ecological areas with all kinds of animals and a very complete biological chain. I hope that more people can turn their attention to the country and pay attention to the protection of our country's unique animals. I hope the author can fulfill my dream in this book. Of course, this is just a suggestion, and the author still follows his own plan. Finally, I bought a hand of Blue Sister shares

The wolf house built according to the author's sketch

You can add snakes so that everyone can change their understanding of snakes and stop thinking that they are bad things. This can be considered one of the wishes of a snake player. As a snake player with unusual hobbies, I have been called a pervert by too many people, which is disgusting. I hope the author can help explain snakes, without asking for others' approval, just to slightly change people's demonization of snakes.

Ideal author update status

I took this photo when I went to the Beijing Zoo. The photo is a bit shabby and I hope it can give the author some inspiration. Haha {"NickName":"Delicious Orange","UserId":311950889}

Wild bushi found in the orange orchard It was eaten by insects and did not emerge. It should be the pupa of Citrus Papilio or other butterflies.

It's so beautiful, the capture is so touching

When the protagonist is called Jiaojiao, she always says "good girl, good girl". It's really uncomfortable to watch. It doesn't conform to Chinese people's speaking habits at all, and it smells like a machine. The author is also very stubborn and determined not to change. I don't know how many collections and subscriptions have been lost because of this.

This is the end, the encyclopedia is over here, we will meet again in the next book of Orange~~~

The most destructive point of this book is the female protagonist. The love interaction is horribly written and embarrassing no matter how you read it. You can tell it is a male author at first glance. In fact, if it is a main plot novel and not a romance novel, it is better to write it without a female protagonist. There are really not many good writers.

There are no white tigers in the park, and those with a system can enter by express delivery. When the time comes, there will be no place to live, so let him go to the tiger house. When Jiaojiao sees it, it looks like a soft and cute dumpling. She thinks of it as a cub and hides it in the forest. If you go out a little bit, you will be indifferent and don't know each other. The next day, the white tiger rolled, and it was so frightened that it fled far away. It was thought that it was being killed by its cuteness, and it was very scary. However, if you look at it from time to time and feel no discomfort, you will get used to its cuteness, and you will never dare to get close to it. If you get a little closer, you will feel better. If you lean against it, the white tiger will not disturb you, and it will claw at you. Jiaojiao was so happy that she said, "The cuteness stops here!" Because she jumped on the big gate, licked its hair, and sucked its belly, it stopped.

Orange has opened the folder (manual dog head Predicted to be released in March

Orange Orange, what will you write next? When will you publish a new book?

Female author? Or is he just a naive child under the age of eighteen?

Are there any novels about zoos?

The writing is not good, the dialogue is like a machine translation, I don't know where all the embarrassing comments come from

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