Mystery: Beginning with the Pope of Night

I can't stand it anymore lately, so I'd like to share my thoughts and complain about it. Squirt lightly, thanks. The main contradiction is: the contradiction between the plot where the protagonist intervenes is increasingly derailed and the author's insufficient understanding of the historical details and foreshadowing effects of the mysterious world set by the squid. The feeling of being tied up, it can be seen that the author wants to create an original plot, but the deduced and added settings gradually begin to not conform to the development logic of the mysterious world. The changes in the level of power make people feel that the combat power has collapsed. The fantasy setting is too strong, and the author wants to stay close to the original plot so as to write the most exciting part of the mysterious world of Xiao Ke and Lotta in the Fifth Age. This leads the author to actively weaken the seals and barriers of God and Mystery to strengthen the influence of the source material and outer gods on the world to check and balance the influence of too powerful fantasy on other historical producers. This change in the world line is unpredictable. Just like the article about the Millennium Family, the details of the original world (history) are not fully understood. If the relevant knowledge reserve is not reached, and trying to get closer to the original plot (historical record) will only feel more and more stiff, writing for the sake of writing, historical record (chivalrous history) is a collection of human beings and their behaviors, a general collection of individuals and collectives, a wide-area collection of regions and the world. It is not history in a broad sense. History in a broad sense is a collection of all information in the past. No matter which one is deduced, the longer the time goes, the greater the historical trend caused by changes in details will change. This is cognitive logic. This novel was written starting from the mysterious Second Era. Thousands of years have passed. The deduction cannot be perfect. If it is an original novel, the author can set up his own world however he wants. Because there is no reference, readers can accept it as long as it is basically logical. , But it is different from fan fiction (historical novels). The original author (original history) already has a rough trajectory, and there is a so-called official reference. If you cut into a historical node, all subsequent historical records will be turned around, and you will have to compile all the follow-up work yourself. No problem, but most of the historical deductions will be revised in detail. While the main theme of history remains unchanged, this requires weakening the influence of historical changers, or the emergence of the so-called role of God and Heaven to directly control history. However, strong settings and soft plots inevitably lead to development conflicts, because God and Heaven are the stable historical framework in the text. The author himself wants to show the impact of the protagonist or his own ideas on the original plot (history) in the article. This is equivalent to a fight between God (predetermined fate) and mystery (fooling fate). To arrange this well, it requires the coordination of the underlying settings of the plot (basic cognitive laws of the real world). Oh, why did you type so many words? Sorry, I just wanted to express my frustration after reading that damn Thousand-Year-Old Family recently. I originally thought it was a sacred text, but the historical deduction is becoming more and more boring because it is becoming more and more "fake", which is piracy in various senses. Historical records cannot restore history, and the author also wants to insert various setting details into the mess that he has changed. The world relies on the original history of the original world. How can he deduce three thousand years of history well? It is not a supercomputer, and it does not understand various historical facts. It also thinks that it has written historical highlights that no one has written before. Does it want to write the so-called Luo History of the Qin Unification of the Six Kingdoms, Han History, Three Kingdoms, Tang History, Song History, Ming History and the Age of Discovery in one book? Okay, back to this book, my suggestion is to find a chance to fall asleep, or write about the plot of the starry sky. Leaving the plot blank is the best detail area for writing. It will give people a different feeling and a unique style, rather than being nondescript and making you feel uncomfortable just looking at it. If it were me, I would write about Mew encountering some kind of serious injury in the Pale Disaster and having to fall into a deep sleep, and then wake up intermittently to participate in Russell's plot, and then wake up when Xiao Ke appears, and then use the details that have been left to give readers an unexpected surprise and sense of satisfaction. I can still sustain this article by relying on what everyone originally wanted to read, and there is still room for four to five hundred chapters (through switching of perspectives). There is another way, let Amon make a clone for him, cut the symbol of his dream itself to avoid the sleeping influence of the essence, send people to the Western Continent through the connection of the Knowledge Wilderness, and carry the Western Continent's sequence path that does not contain the essence, such as the Gate Path or the White Tower Path or the Writer Path. The Western Continent is more Chinese mythology, combined with Chinese mythology. Or these two combined, of course this is what I take for granted. I have not carefully conceived the relevant outline and plot lines, so I am just giving an idea. Okay, as I said, let's go eat.

The good ones who sell secrets all have harems, and those who blow the whistle don't have any high-quality products.

I hope that many heroines, Amon, Chike, the Desire Tree, and the Fallen Mother Goddess will be accepted.

It feels so weird, it feels a bit like forcing Xiao Ke to be a secret. It is obviously more suitable, and Amon, who has understood human nature, is also qualified to fight for it. Can Ke Miao, who has not experienced death and other hardships, really be qualified?

I feel like the author's selling point is that almost no one wrote about the parts from the second to the fourth era, but by the fifth era they were completely ignored.

I finished reading Lord of Mysteries in the first half of 2022. In the second half of the year, I went to find some fanfics of Lord of Mysteries, such as Paradox, Reader, and Breaking the Dimension Wall. I recently came back and planned to read through the Mysterious fanfics, but I found Paradox, and the rest cannot be read carefully at all, it is so poisonous, The reader's book is written by Klein in a stingy and philistine way, and the plot also gives others a feeling of being forcibly wrapped up. It has a heavy urban cool flavor, and is extremely boring in daily life. It is almost only reluctantly connected to the main plot at the end of each volume. As for the book "Breaking the Dimensional Wall", the author simply wrote whatever he thought of, forgetting the previous setting and then forgetting about it. The typical author's IQ limits the protagonist's IQ. But I feel that this book is really written much better. The sense of oppression between the Lord of Mysteries and God is fully written, and the feelings in the original work are also brought in very well. All the regrets are made up for in a very rounded way. I believe that if the beginning can be written better, the performance of this work will be much better.

This book is so authentic, the writing has the mysterious beauty of the original version, and the re-planned historical route is not obtrusive compared to the original version. It is the only mysterious fanfic in another era that I can finish reading. What amazes me the most is the scene where Tianzun releases all the curly baboons at the end of the fifth era. It perfectly fits my image of the cunning Lord of Secrets. I am very lucky to have read such a wonderful novel.

I'm speechless. The protagonist hasn't appeared in many chapters. Those who didn't know it thought the protagonist of this book was Klein.

Having not experienced the test of the original work, relying on the barrier-free highway provided by the dream, can Xiao Ke really defeat the dead villain and become the new Tianzun?

After reading around the comment section, the summary is that if you want to make money, write harem stories. Even if you write 💩, there will be people paying for things that you can't write at all. If the writing is good, it's better to have one or none. If you can't handle the emotional scenes well, it's better to have none. Otherwise, it's easy to write a heroine and it will be over.

Author, you can't go out of your way to strengthen the outer gods and enemies just because the protagonist is strong.

Alas, the emotional line is a bit short, but I can eat some sweets, but I feel a little relieved when I think of this crazy and weird world. I don't know if there is no heroine, a single heroine, or a harem (I hope it will be a harem, although I am a Chuqi party, but I would like to see the fight between the goddesses)

Looking at this situation, the protagonist might as well not participate in the struggle between the true gods at the beginning. Anyway, the ending will be the same as the original plot. He will be a transparent person and stay in the land abandoned by the gods, and become a complete past as soon as possible.

I saw the latest chapter and wanted to ask if it is a harem. I personally hope it is. After all, the relationship between the protagonist and the goddess and Lilith is a pity.

Without experiencing death and suffering, can Xiao Ke be able to resist the will of Lao Gui? Just relying on anchor points is not enough, Xiao An also has many anchor points. Who does the author prefer to be the mystery? In the original novel, Xiaoke was unwilling but forced to bear this fate. Originally, the one everyone was most optimistic about was the door. The door's anchor point and will should be the strongest. And He Himself also has sacrificial qualities. After all, according to the description in the original work, becoming a secret is also slowly assimilating to the old secret.

This kind of writing that starts directly from the Second Age is relatively rare. Good writing should be rewarded, and I would like to ask for a better one by the way

You can have a meeting of the true gods later, and then bring up the little carat, let him finish pretending in the Tarot meeting, and then come to the meeting of the true gods to continue pretending 🙂 A husky among the wolves. Jpg

One question is why the protagonist wants to specifically target the Sefirah. Are there no other gods? Why is the protagonist alone in front? What we want to see is the process of the protagonist's own promotion, that is, the main perspective of the protagonist mastering the dream essence, rather than how the Fourth Age was created and how the main plot of the original work was pulled back. To put it mildly, as long as the Mother Goddess does not come in, there is no need to worry about other foreign gods, even if the local gods seek the essence, because they have no direct interest in it. What the protagonist has to do is to become a truly complete Old One in the Fourth Age.

Seeing now, I personally have some suggestions for the author (personal opinion). To be honest, if the current plot continues to develop, there is really no need for Xiao Ke to be in the position (Xiao Ke himself doesn't want to be there). If you let him be an angel and help him share responsibilities, he will thank you. And now that the Guisan family is blocked in three directions, there is no chance at all. There is really no need to follow the original work. There was no way for Xiao Ke to be promoted in the original novel. Now that there is a door, his humanity, strength, and character are completely up to standard. Why not let him be promoted? We watch fandoms not only to see the characters, but innovation is also important. Now everyone in the fandom has become homogeneous, with Xiao Ke taking the lead. But in fact, does it matter if someone else is qualified? What do you think about the original work party? No way, I wish Xiaoke could relax and live his life well. Then return the focus of the text to the protagonist and write about the doomsday arrangements. Doesn't this solve the problem of the protagonist's invisibility?

It's not as good as before. I used to read it as a fun article, but now I can't get it any better. I feel that the author has cut down Truman's combat power too hard. It's not as interesting as the battle of wits and courage with the ancient gods before, and I have no desire to continue reading.

Oh my god I was the one who made the recommendation. After the tie, I ran to read the Aurora Club foreign aid book. I felt a little bad from the contamination... So I checked the book circle to see if there were any spoilers... Oh, the characters I recommended were all knifed (lost their minds) (sad and wailing) or heroic... ... Still Convert to the embrace of dreams again😓Although it is false, it is so beautiful😭😭😭 In the same way, it is also an illusory if development line, but it has really hurt me😓😓😓

This book is awesome, many settings are the same as Ring of Fate

Very innovative and interesting! In addition, it is recommended that the author change the name to "Mystery: The First Dream" or "Mystery: The Supreme Dream", which is more suitable and attractive to readers!

How can the protagonist become a god if he cannot take advantage of extraordinary characteristics?

Can anyone lend me the number 🙂, please?

Who summarizes the dream path? ? ?

The creativity is no less than that of the best colleagues, why is it not popular😦

The goddess of night is cute😊

Chic is a fanatic believer in dreams, it's really crazy, hahahahaha 😄 Then there is Triss chasing Klein madly, hahahahaha By the way, let's summarize the dream path 9 Prayer 8 Illusionist 7 Mirror Knight 6 Man in the Painting 5 Fairy Tale Mage 4 Karma and Destiny 3 Real Apostle 2 Son of Fantasy 1 Dream Walker

Good looking👍👍👍👍