Warhammer 40K: Collector of Terra

After seeing the chapters before release, I feel that the plot development problem is not big, but the character problem is huge. The overall macro narrative is far more than the actual description. The protagonist is obviously a time traveler, but it does not reflect the characteristics of the time traveler. It cannot even be said to be like a local aborigine, but not at all. Personality, even the original original body has its own distinct personality and past experiences, whether loyal or precious rebels, and the protagonist is completely a robot of the original body who only shouts loyalty slogans to kill enemies and do things. He is very loyal and capable of fighting, but he does not have any personal thoughts.

I feel that the writing is quite fluent, and I hope to witness the birth of an excellent Warhammer fanfic again.

Although the role of this collector is not too outstanding, it is well written. Looking at the introduction, I thought it would start directly invincible.

It has nothing to do with collection, but sells dog meat instead of selling sheep's head. Calling it a collection is actually a reward.

The writing is very good, and there is no need to revolve around the protagonist throughout the novel. There are many novels like this, but they are not the kind of group portraits that tell the stories of others in a large amount of space. You and I are in each other's midst

The author, you must be writing about The Collector, why do I only see an invincible warrior walking in and out of the battlefield. The content has nothing to do with the title of the book. Author, why don't you change the title of the book?

The front is fine, but the back is just some pointless moaning and piling up hymns.

Did you steal the protagonist's name? Orthotopic

After reading more than a dozen pictures, I personally feel that this is not like writing a time-travel fan fiction, but rather an indigenous person? The protagonist is like a native who only has the memory of a time traveler

Now, Gawain doesn't have his own legion yet, so will he form one in the future? Could it be called the Treasury of the Empire? Specialize in collecting all dangerous and valuable items?

The protagonist is a Primarch, an Emperor's Sword, an Emperor's Psychic Power, and a trial version of the True One Armor. He is simply a smaller version of the Emperor, and he is a betrayer who can fight with the protagonist twice. Wherever he goes, the Eternal Loyalists are almost dead. There are so many hymns in the article. The protagonist doesn't have many active thoughts of his own. He is just like a robot and is drifted by the general trend. The system is like a waste and has no effect. In summary, it is useless and very frustrating to watch.

I even wonder if this is the vest of the author of Sword of the Dawn

The writing is very smooth, but unlike most novels, this novel has events pushing the protagonist rather than the traditional protagonist pushing events. The protagonist feels too instrumental.

Understand?

Emmm... I have one thing to say. Earlier I saw that as long as the primarch has not awakened to the essence of subspace, he is a stronger mortal, which is a bit unbearable... Then in the next picture, I saw Khorne's Champion Chosen (although it is indeed very strong), but he was said to be even more powerful than the Lord of the Red Sand. He started by criticizing Griffin's Wolf King, what? Ah, I can't hold it back at all... First of all, the Primarchs are equivalent to the Emperor's Great Demons (just to explain, the Primarch's combat power is basically higher than the Great Demons and smaller than the Four Gods. After all, after being promoted to a Demon, he is called a Demon Prince). Being promoted to a Demon is just the four peddlers in subspace competing with the Emperor for their son. It does not mean that after becoming a Demon, the strength will be greatly increased. Of course, a Primarch who has not been blessed by the Emperor cannot defeat one who has been blessed by Chaos, but this is limited to the case where they are all Primarchs. I don't know if the author can understand it. For example, before the rebellion, Luojia, who had not yet ascended to demon level, decided to join the ranks of Hungry, but had not yet done so. Chaos thought, "What kind of champion are you, Lorgar?" So, for the sake of his own future after joining the chaos, Lorgar defeated Khorne in a duel and sat down with the greatest demon, Angras. At this time, Lorgar was no longer suppressing his spiritual power, had not awakened the essence of subspace, and had not become a demon. He was still just the original body. Another example is Guilliman, who completely rejects his subspace nature, let alone awakening. He was on the verge of death after being attacked by a brother who had been promoted to demon and blessed by Slaanesh with an artifact dagger. His subsequent death and resurrection attracted the attention of the four gods of the entire subspace, plus an Eldar Death God. What do you mean, just because the essence of the Yakon family has not been awakened does not mean that there is none. If the Primarchs can't even defeat the Chosen of Khorne, then the 40k Empire plot should be put to rest... According to this setting, if the Four Gods just send any big demon, they can easily defeat Guilliman, right? Then why should he be resurrected? Guilliman, who rejected his own warp nature, resisted the calculations of the four gods all the way to Terra. Although he suffered repeated defeats, it did not affect his acceptance of the Emperor's blessing and the destruction of Nurgle's Garden.

Every time the protagonist always waits until everyone on his side is almost dead before coming out

It feels so fast, the plot is racing all the way, but the writing style without ups and downs makes the passion of loyalty always high, and it feels a bit hollow.

There's no way I'm going to feel right after the chapter.

Author, I think I read a book a year ago that is similar to the plot of this article, but that book has been deleted by the original author. I would like to ask, are you the one who deleted the book?

The writing is too empty, and it doesn't catch people's attention. It makes me bored just reading it.

After Guilliman returned, he was still allowed to serve as regent and handle government affairs in Terra, leaving professional matters to professional people. The protagonist embarks on a journey to eliminate the chaotic aliens and unite the powerful. What's going on with you running around and holding the title of regent and not taking a shit? How can Guilliman handle important government affairs without the name of regent? Author, do you have any career or political experience? It can be said that it is difficult to move forward without a decree in name.

The sea is just water. The author's knowledge is a bit broad. The following chapters are all praise and all kinds of praise, without any main content. This book can only attract people to read by the number of words, but it cannot retain people or become popular.

Have you seen the last one? Is the eunuch unfinished, or is it ending normally?

You can't change anything, but you still lose a lot of loyalists The most important thing is - you also destroyed Macragge! Waste! What a huge waste! ! ! ! !

I would like to ask, what are the follow-up points of this book? Now that I'm reading Chapter 11, I already have the body of the original body, a will that cannot be affected, and the spiritual power of the Emperor. I feel like I can do whatever I want, so I'm curious about what to expect in the future?

Not bad, just don't suppress the protagonist

🙂 Selling dog meat with a sheep's head, you belong to the shit-eating universe

The combat aspect is well written. Already voted, update soon

Guys, Warhammer fans have seen the basics. What is the name of the Warhammer book? I want to read the original work first, and then I can start killing the fanfics with millions of words.