Family Cultivation: Chen Clan Immortal Clan

Sophisticated writing, okay, okay

Author, the main character has an earth element spiritual root and you have a water element magical power. What earth element can you set to protect the mountain, crack the ground, break the mountain, metamagnetic aura, and escape from the earth?

A single earth spiritual root, magical power to call rain, weird

They are all cultivating immortals, but they still favor boys over girls. They all have the same blood. How can they look at men and women if not their qualifications?

Is it necessary to cultivate immortality even if a single spiritual root has been broken through by taking medicine for the other three, four or five spiritual roots? Geniuses need to have a genius pattern at the beginning. It's boring to build foundations and suppress them. If you like to suppress you, write four or five spiritual roots. And since your spiritual roots are using the old routine, you can just use it. You insist on slightly changing it without introducing it. It's confusing to read.

The author sacrificed the protagonist's wife and must abandon it

I've read almost half of it, and here are some suggestions for you: First of all: the plot and narration are not coherent, just like when you were writing, you thought about half of the entire plot and then wrote the other half. The problem is that we don't know what you omitted, don't tell me and leave room for the reader's imagination! Secondly: There are some typos that others have pointed out to you. Wouldn't it be faster to correct them if you have time to check this chapter yourself? Finally: Change the introduction. I saw that your introduction said it was a group portrait, but you ended up with a protagonist who traveled through time. It does not mean that you write the protagonist and add a little description of the supporting characters to form a group portrait. I am afraid that your introduction will be beaten. Many readers who like group portraits will only think that you are selling sheep over others.

The author must be a smoker, but the protagonist of a novel about cultivating immortals actually smokes? Might as well make incense!

Finally, there is a family cultivator who can watch

The writing is very good, surpassing most of the family stories on the market. As long as you don't supervise, the results will definitely not be bad. The author sticks to it and has the potential to become a god. As long as you don't supervise, I will definitely continue to follow it and recommend it to you.

It felt like the protagonist's family was going too smoothly, and the plot had no sense of urgency. I like the kind of plot that is always forced by the situation. It would be better to kill a few supporting characters...

Can you confirm which one is called Chen Renyao or Chen Fengyao? Changing it back and forth will affect the reader's experience.

The eldest elder Chen Chuangui is 120 years old, and Chen Renyu is 40 years old. They inherit the word "Ren Chuan Ze Ming Da" from generation to generation. I just want to ask if the author is a senior scholar or a senior scholar? There will also be a biography of the Chen family. What is the name of the Chen family?

How can a weak force become strong? ? ? It's because of his strong bones

The great elder was named Chen Yisong at first, and then Chen Chuangui appeared. Is the Chuanzi generation still behind the Renzi generation, and the great elder is younger than the protagonist?

Some sentences are not fluent and have typos.

Also, does this article have multiple female protagonists, a single female protagonist, or no one? Judging from the previous male protagonist's attitude towards marriage, he looks like a pure love warrior who does not love freedom.

Smoking is a waste, why not make it into incense😅

The writing is good, very innovative, and the setting is also very good. Come on! ! ! !

Why can't women be ranked in seniority? The world of immortality also favors boys over girls?

This is an author who is an old smoker. He has no appearance at all 🤫 It is too modern. It is not as good as tobacco. He also has a tobacco bag, a pot, and a magic weapon. The bag for the tobacco can also be used for storage. He can take one puff to refresh his mind and not feel tired after two puffs. (This is only for the body). When he exhales smoke, the smoke is lingering, blocking the line of sight, and causing poisonous damage 😏😏

I just can't figure out why they write about cigarettes. I can understand why they write about opium. Why do they write about cigarettes? Could it be that this is just the self-satisfaction of a chain smoker?

So-so, maybe ten years ago it was a big hit

As long as you keep it up, I will keep reading.

It's rare to find an article about cultivating immortals, so please support it. I wish you great popularity!

Can't understand the bells and whistles

Can the author's protagonist not use flying swords? Bells, towers, and mirrors are very good.

No more writing? 🙂

And I don't know if you have read what I said, but I mean it sincerely. Also, what others said, you should also spend a little money to give yourself a recommendation. Really, because there are really many people writing novels now, and there are quite a lot of people who write well. I think your story is very good, because the writing, plot and some settings are OK. Under normal circumstances, if it is the situation in previous years, it should be possible to kill, but this year is different. The same type or different types of novels that appeared this year The styles are all very powerful, and they will definitely become more powerful in the future, because it is like an appetite, the more you feed it, the more you can eat it. You can first stabilize the number of plots and writing chapters to a sufficient level, and then you can spend some money on promotion. This is the most practical , now it's not like in the past, it's enough to write well enough, and you still need marketing. That's right, writing novels now also requires marketing, because now is an era where everyone can become a god. Why don't you accumulate enough and then push it quickly? The fragrance of wine is also afraid of deep alleys. Don't think about it. Flowering alone, the breeze comes naturally. The breeze blows from the east. If you are in the west, will he come? If the wind doesn't come to me, can't I go to him? Don't talk about being frustrated. No one has read it, or there are not enough collections. It's okay to be frustrated. But when you are frustrated, you can read your own novels more often. In fact, it's good if the writing is OK. The simplest ones are Douyin, Xiaohongshu, Tieba forums, and Weibo, WeChat, and many have tweets. So if your writing is good enough, is it enough? You can't write a few chapters and then tweet them, and then people will click on them and tweet them. If you have too few chapters, people will definitely not be happy to read them, and then throw them aside for you. That would be meaningless. People who like to read novels will watch Douyin short videos, etc., And other platforms. You can get tweets, so you can just spend some money to push them, but it doesn't matter. Anyway, for me, if the quality of this thing is good enough, then I have to promote it. In the Internet age, if these conventional tools are not used, what should I use? In short, just go for it. First, confirm whether you meet these conditions. If you meet these conditions, then you can figure out what to do.

Nice looking, a great start, keep it up